Thank you for the comments, i made some fixes to make it less OP, trust me when i say that making him op was't my original intention. Any more notes before it can be made official?
Hello! thank you for your notes, small edits made. Hes not supposed to be a perfect swordsman, rather hes supposed to be well balanced in all forms of saber combat, with specialties in certain sections. And besides when you really enjoy something you try to get better at it, especially if it...
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