Recent content by Logan

Welcome to swrp! (: If you have any questions feel free to ask. Looking forward to seeing your characters.

I'm not really on board with making a holocron of such an important canon character just a piece of someone's personal lore that they start with on their person. For what you're seeking to accomplish with this it could easily just be any holocron from an NPC Jedi that you make up. You can...

Very cool. Approved.

This seems fine. Approved.

That's relatively fine and falls in line with similar artifacts. You just need to notate the specifics of what it actually does in the description so there isn't any vagueness if this is ever used in say, a pvp or something.

Approved, btw. Dara, I'll look at those other poisons at some point.

Great write up as always, lizard. Approved

Can you be more specific on what you mean by "increases potency" of pyromancy? The general idea of the ring is fine, we've had things of similar usage in the past, I would just like it to be less vague in case something comes up in the future.

I think that since full consumption is a much higher degree of difficulty to achieve, that still retaining full body paralysis seems fine (and makes sense). I would notate this specifically in the PvP parts so it isnt ambiguous. I'm also fine with having the localized be two rounds since as...

Overall I think it is fine, and I do want to see some expansion on poisons and the like on swrp. My only concern is from the PvP standpoint. So it's essentially an auto win function. Being paralyzed for one or two combat turns seems like a decent restriction on paper, but there's nothing...

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Character Name: Azathoth Character Sheet Link: --- Faction: Sith

Hey there, Your bio as written for Myla seems fine and it's not inherently against the rules to be stuck in a carbonite brick for a long period of time. It only becomes an issue when people use it as a reason to make a character obscenely powerful or otherwise try to metagame, which you have...

AFFILIATION Azathoth SIZE Hilt: 20cm Blade: 1-2m (dual phase function) WEIGHT 1kg COMPOSITION Phrik WEAPON TYPE Melee DAMAGE TYPE Melee FIRE SELECTOR N/A MAX RANGE Reach DESCRIPTION The weapon Azathoth forged herself when first joining the Sith Order. A standard lightsaber that is...

Azathoth There is little about Aza to be discovered that she would not willingly tell anyone who deigned to ask. She was born to parents on some irrelevant backwater that no one cares about and likewise, in just the same way, most people have never really cared about Aza either. One of her...