This one doesn't either, I got rid of it. But I wasn't trying to make an equivalency between civil war, gang violence and slavery, I was trying to understand the setting as to what kind of backgrounds would be reasonable (ie; what is mean by "calm"). It's the moot point though
That's what I was...
So basically, slice out stuff that isn't directly relevant to the character? I tried to keep that to a minimum, with only little bits to give context, but if you'd prefer it not be there, I can get rid of it. (I've never gotten into Warhammer anything, so I'm not super-clear on the comparison)...
The only legends info I used was for the names geographical places. I didn't think that'd be an issue; I'll change it. I made up everything else, I didn't take it from Legends.
They weren't on Jabiim. I looked things over and found a few locations where I hadn't articulated well enough, but...
@MatureContentWarningx I did a word count check, and it came out to 1,417 words. By any chance, were you including quotations? Because those aren't part of the biography, they're commentary flavoring and are entirely skippable. If that's a problem, I can just delete them.
CASMIR'S CHITIN ARMOR
Instead of alloys and metals, Casmir chose to create his armor from natural hides, bone plates, scales and shells to substitute, adorning his right shoulder with the polished skull of a juvenile acklay. As he intended to dedicating the remainder of his life to bounty...
-Casmir Travaran
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“They say when the Emperor died over Endor the galaxy let out a cheer across a thousand worlds. But Jabiim… on Jabiim, the Empire's shadow never left. Neither did the First Order's. The...
I've only got two characters in the pot right now. I have no idea how the Jedi will work next TL, so while I have a Jedi planned, I'm taking the admin team's advice and holding off on that for the time being. However, I do have a Bounty Hunter lined up, if anyone is interested in doing some BHG...
Dice Roll for The Almighty Credit
100: Critical success.
81-99: Rousing success. Everything goes better than expected
51-80: Success. Everything goes as planned
26-50: Barely a success. You succeed in your end goal but take some sort of negative in doing so
11-25: Mild fail, fail with some...
Dice Roll thread for Mythra? I can't even SEE ya!
100: Critical success.
81-99: Rousing success. Everything goes better than expected
51-80: Success. Everything goes as planned
26-50: Barely a success. You succeed in your end goal but take some sort of negative in doing so
11-25: Mild fail...
Dice rolling for Uhtred's initial attack run
+5 for Level 2
Performs a sacrifice for the Dice Gods
d100
EDIT: Finally a low roll! Now I can't stop panicking about hitting "1".... right?
Dice Roll thread for Aim, then Fire
100: Critical success.
81-99: Rousing success. Everything goes better than expected
51-80: Success. Everything goes as planned
26-50: Barely a success. You succeed in your end goal but take some sort of negative in doing so
11-25: Mild fail, fail with some...
Dice Roll thread for Sharing is Caring
100: Critical success.
81-99: Rousing success. Everything goes better than expected
51-80: Success. Everything goes as planned
26-50: Barely a success. You succeed in your end goal but take some sort of negative in doing so
11-25: Mild fail, fail with some...