Character Feedback: Alexis Nonomyth

[Zen]

I stole this idea, like others.

So mind I ask what you think of your loveable Force User Hutt Major, In the Hutt Empire.

This character been around for good amount of time, So Yeah wanted to know some feed backs, Mainly Relating on History what should I edit more in the History, Add more events, I know grammar and spelling needs to be doing, Fixing, I got the Spelling part down, not the Grammar part yet? So any feed back is welcome.

And nothing relating my force powers. Just the Main History and Her Actually character Icly.

 

[Horizon]

No more family members. Please, Zen. Most of the new posts I see on here these days involve Nonomyth in the titles. You're getting but you need to expand more on those histories.

 

[Zen]

No more family members. Please, Zen. Most of the new posts I see on here these days involve Nonomyth in the titles. You're getting but you need to expand more on those histories.

The other profiles, will get expanded in due time, Hoz, just have patience a bit. I need them to get more Involved, Look at Sara, she has The Bogan as her Master and she fears him. But let's stay on topic, Anything I should Add to Alexis's History? Age, Or family?
And I believe I made my Last Nonomyth's for now. Might make one last Nonomyth, So to have nine members. And that might be all.

 

[Horizon]

The other profiles, will get expanded in due time, Hoz, just have patience a bit. I need them to get more Involved, Look at Sara, she has The Bogan as her Master and she fears him. But let's stay on topic, Anything I should Add to Alexis's History? Age, Or family?
And I believe I made my Last Nonomyth's for now. Might make one last Nonomyth, So to have nine members. And that might be all.

I was being patient..?

 

[Zen]

I was being patient..?

Oh, >.> Point being, The Reason Alexis Nonomyth has a more detailed History She's been alive longer icly. and should have a bigger one by now, I just had not expanded her fully. Is because she's been the First Or Second Nonomyth Alive, Menkio Got killed, Gen retired, so She the only Living person Still not killed in rp. That has a good stored up history, the Other Nonomyth will have a history soon as well.