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[big][big]The Void Serpents​
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Expansion Justification: The Void Serpents have been a relatively active faction despite its small userbase, and has worked hard to try and take control of Zakuul. In addition, the players have had many threads together that helped build character and establish purpose. Combined with the upcoming timeskip, I feel it is reasonable to request an expansion.

THREADS:
Primal Scream - ASK
The Hammer - ASK
Eye of the Storm - ASK
Sisters by Chance, Friends by Choice - ASK
Bound in Blood - ASK
Party Hard - ASK
Coruscant: False Pretenses - MAIN THREAD
A New Grad Title - ASK
As Above, So Below: the Hierophant Falls

New Content​
Control of Zakuul, with a palace serving as its capital.
An Orbital Station surrounding Zakuul
1 Tayana Class Frigate
100 SH-323 Sunbolt Starfighters
50 000 new NPCs
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FACTION NAME: GALAF
EXPANSION JUSTIFICATION: This expansion request is only the assets acquired in the merging of the Void Serpents into GALAF, as indicated HERE.
NEW CONTENT:
Raiding Fleet 'Serpent'

1x Marauder-class Frigate The Warlock
1x Shukula-class Heavy Corvette Ashes of Satramand
1x Tayana Class Frigate Harvest of Sorrow
30x SH-323 Sunbolt Starfighters

70x SH-323 Sunbolt Starfighters
50,000x Personnel

Zakuul / Zakuul Orbital Station (Influence)
Yahmsborg (Influence)

Note: Zakuul is protected by the Serpent Fleet under the banner of Imperatrix Apophe KeYahm, while the main GALAF forces stop here to rest and replenish their supplies.
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Time Skip Fleet Expansion Correction:
1X Feydar-class Corvette
3X Axion-class Assault Ships
3X D44-M Gunships
14X KPDY-Wasps(Produced by The Kjlljk Protectorate Drive Yards to increase the security of The Kjlljk Protectorate's operations.)
8X KPDY Moon-Class Super Heavy Freighters(Produced by The Kjlljk Protectorate Drive Yards to increase operational efficiency of The Kjlljk Protectorate's operations.)
Apologies. Meant to send this earlier. Approved, due to numbers reflecting closer to work done.
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FACTION NAME: GALAF
EXPANSION JUSTIFICATION: This expansion request is only the assets acquired in the merging of the Void Serpents into GALAF, as indicated HERE.
NEW CONTENT:
Raiding Fleet 'Serpent'

1x Marauder-class Frigate The Warlock
1x Shukula-class Heavy Corvette Ashes of Satramand
1x Tayana Class Frigate Harvest of Sorrow
30x SH-323 Sunbolt Starfighters

70x SH-323 Sunbolt Starfighters
50,000x Personnel

Zakuul / Zakuul Orbital Station (Influence)
Yahmsborg (Influence)

Note: Zakuul is protected by the Serpent Fleet under the banner of Imperatrix Apophe KeYahm, while the main GALAF forces stop here to rest and replenish their supplies.
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Approved.
 

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The Kjlljk Protectorate: Resource Expansion
2X Exotic and Alien Technologies
(Submissions TBA)
As a result of winning the Resource perk from planet Gree.
Missions involved:
The Gree are relative newcomers on the galactic scale. Due to their isolation, they likely have no inkling about the current state of the galaxy. We must inform them of the situation and help them make an informed choice when choosing allegiances.

Objective
: Negotiations
Successfully make contact with Gree administrators and bring them up to speed with an 'unbiased' view of the current situation in the galaxy. In doing so, attempt to locate and initiate contact with potential supporters of our cause.

Take care to present the Protectorate in a favorable light and portray the larger factions as manipulative. We must make them see the competition as enemies if we are to succeed.

With the Gree's return to limelight, the planet and it's mythic technology has once again drawn the attention of undesirables such as pirates and thieves. Gree administrators have recently reached out asking for assistance in dealing with organized crime in their space.

Objective: Search and Destroy
Locate and destroy a large scale smuggling ring located somewhere in Gree space. This is a space mission, starfighters and other Protectorate assets will be provided should the need arise.

Any and all Gree technology recovered from the smugglers must be returned to their rightful owners. Thievery will be punished.

Gree scouts are once again being sighted throughout the galaxy. However, with exploration comes danger. Gree leadership has informed us that a Gree scout has gone missing near Protectorate space due to unknown reasons.

Objective: Rescue
Journey to the last known location and track down the missing scout ship. If possible, return both the ship and its occupants alive and in good condition. If not, return the remains of the ship and its occupants to the Gree for them to pay their respects.

Secondary Objective: Investigation
Identify the reason behind the scout's initial disappearance.

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I've reviewed the threads. I find the pacing a bit irregular, and would recommend in future that you aim to expand their missions, to allow for more character development and development of the mission/thread's story. Keeping the Peace, and Hide and Go Seek are acceptable, but Informed Choices I find lacking; half is spent as a social thread and the other half is spent as if giving an election rally speech. There is no conflict, no resistance. As such, I am requesting an additional mission be performed if you want to seek the Gree resource. That actually is a common theme. Your writers do well working off each other, but there's no opposition. As such, for this thread (and other threads), I would like to see someone operating opposition: ask for a NPCer. I'd offer, as I don't mind helping out factions and members, as I'm the one reviewing this, I have a conflict of interest.
 

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The Kjlljk Protectorate: Resource Expansion
2X Exotic and Alien Technologies
(Submissions TBA)
As a result of winning the Resource perk from planet Gree.
Missions involved:
The Gree are relative newcomers on the galactic scale. Due to their isolation, they likely have no inkling about the current state of the galaxy. We must inform them of the situation and help them make an informed choice when choosing allegiances.

Objective
: Negotiations
Successfully make contact with Gree administrators and bring them up to speed with an 'unbiased' view of the current situation in the galaxy. In doing so, attempt to locate and initiate contact with potential supporters of our cause.

Take care to present the Protectorate in a favorable light and portray the larger factions as manipulative. We must make them see the competition as enemies if we are to succeed.

With the Gree's return to limelight, the planet and it's mythic technology has once again drawn the attention of undesirables such as pirates and thieves. Gree administrators have recently reached out asking for assistance in dealing with organized crime in their space.

Objective: Search and Destroy
Locate and destroy a large scale smuggling ring located somewhere in Gree space. This is a space mission, starfighters and other Protectorate assets will be provided should the need arise.

Any and all Gree technology recovered from the smugglers must be returned to their rightful owners. Thievery will be punished.

Gree scouts are once again being sighted throughout the galaxy. However, with exploration comes danger. Gree leadership has informed us that a Gree scout has gone missing near Protectorate space due to unknown reasons.

Objective: Rescue
Journey to the last known location and track down the missing scout ship. If possible, return both the ship and its occupants alive and in good condition. If not, return the remains of the ship and its occupants to the Gree for them to pay their respects.

Secondary Objective: Investigation
Identify the reason behind the scout's initial disappearance.

*Repost due to new circumstance.*
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The Kjlljk Protectorate: Resource Expansion
2X Exotic and Alien Technologies
(Submissions TBA)
As a result of winning the Resource perk from planet Gree.
Missions involved:
The Gree are relative newcomers on the galactic scale. Due to their isolation, they likely have no inkling about the current state of the galaxy. We must inform them of the situation and help them make an informed choice when choosing allegiances.

Objective
: Negotiations
Successfully make contact with Gree administrators and bring them up to speed with an 'unbiased' view of the current situation in the galaxy. In doing so, attempt to locate and initiate contact with potential supporters of our cause.

Take care to present the Protectorate in a favorable light and portray the larger factions as manipulative. We must make them see the competition as enemies if we are to succeed.

With the Gree's return to limelight, the planet and it's mythic technology has once again drawn the attention of undesirables such as pirates and thieves. Gree administrators have recently reached out asking for assistance in dealing with organized crime in their space.

Objective: Search and Destroy
Locate and destroy a large scale smuggling ring located somewhere in Gree space. This is a space mission, starfighters and other Protectorate assets will be provided should the need arise.

Any and all Gree technology recovered from the smugglers must be returned to their rightful owners. Thievery will be punished.

Gree scouts are once again being sighted throughout the galaxy. However, with exploration comes danger. Gree leadership has informed us that a Gree scout has gone missing near Protectorate space due to unknown reasons.

Objective: Rescue
Journey to the last known location and track down the missing scout ship. If possible, return both the ship and its occupants alive and in good condition. If not, return the remains of the ship and its occupants to the Gree for them to pay their respects.

Secondary Objective: Investigation
Identify the reason behind the scout's initial disappearance.

*Repost due to new circumstance.*
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The Kjlljk Protectorate Expansion
\/Taking out the Trash:
2X KPDY-Moon Class Super Heavy Freighter.
1X D44-M Gunship.

\/Bring me that horizon:
1X PPC-5 Snapper-class Corvette.

\/Fuel the Fire:
1X CZ-PCT01 PriceCorp Tanker 01.


\/Syndicate Mission - A Race To Ryloth
1X CZ-MCF01


\/Order #51674
1X H-class Yacht

\/Order #77194
1X Shukula-class Corvette

Embassies Staffing Increase:
+3 Intelligence personnel.
+3 Administrative personnel.
+4 Public Relations Personnel.
+4 Recruitment personnel.
+26 security personnel.

The Kjlljk Protectorate Manufacturing Staffing Increase:
+190 Administrative Personnel.
+14200 (Total) Labor Personnel and Worker Droids.
+5 Public Relations Personnel.
+300 Security Personnel.

Orbital Space Station Base Staffing Increse:
+25 Intelligence Personnel.
+16 Administrative Personnel.
+3 Public Relations Personnel.
+4 Recruitment personnel.
+325 Security Personnel.

The Kjlljk Protectorate Drive Yards Production:
+22 KPDY-Wasps.
 

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The Kjlljk Protectorate Expansion
\/Taking out the Trash:
2X KPDY-Moon Class Super Heavy Freighter.
1X D44-M Gunship.

\/Bring me that horizon:
1X PPC-5 Snapper-class Corvette.

\/Fuel the Fire:
1X CZ-PCT01 PriceCorp Tanker 01.


\/Syndicate Mission - A Race To Ryloth
1X CZ-MCF01


\/Order #51674
1X H-class Yacht

\/Order #77194
1X Shukula-class Corvette

Embassies Staffing Increase:
+3 Intelligence personnel.
+3 Administrative personnel.
+4 Public Relations Personnel.
+4 Recruitment personnel.
+26 security personnel.

The Kjlljk Protectorate Manufacturing Staffing Increase:
+190 Administrative Personnel.
+14200 (Total) Labor Personnel and Worker Droids.
+5 Public Relations Personnel.
+300 Security Personnel.

Orbital Space Station Base Staffing Increse:
+25 Intelligence Personnel.
+16 Administrative Personnel.
+3 Public Relations Personnel.
+4 Recruitment personnel.
+325 Security Personnel.

The Kjlljk Protectorate Drive Yards Production:
+22 KPDY-Wasps.
Approved.
 

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The Kjlljk Protectorate Expansion:
The Kjlljk Protectorate has been hard at work securing assets, materials, and backing to prepare for the birth of it's Crown Jewel achievement.

1X KPDY Man O' War-Class Star Destroyer

Research Threads:
A Dance Among the Stars.
Plunder.
A bullet for my Bow.
The Battle of Skye.

One factor to The Kjlljk Protectorate's success in this endeavor was the assistance in this project by the Gree Council.
Gree Threads:
Informed Choices.
Keeping the Peace.
Hide and Go Seek.

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The Kjlljk Protectorate Expansion:
The Kjlljk Protectorate has been hard at work securing assets, materials, and backing to prepare for the birth of it's Crown Jewel achievement.

1X KPDY Man O' War-Class Star Destroyer

Research Threads:
A Dance Among the Stars.
Plunder.
A bullet for my Bow.
The Battle of Skye.

One factor to The Kjlljk Protectorate's success in this endeavor was the assistance in this project by the Gree Council.
Gree Threads:
Informed Choices.
Keeping the Peace.
Hide and Go Seek.

@Dmitri
With the time skip ~1month away, I'll approve it. I am gonna make note that the grinding for resources won't be as tolerated as seen here. We will be looking for more interactions with individuals, other parties. So far the Protectorate's wealth has been built as a stand-alone, primarily through the work of Mad Dog and Wayrider, with a few people aiding sometimes. We will want to see more diversity next timeline.
 
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