Independent Faction Expansion Requests

[Prudence]

I'll give it a proper look tomorrow (raging headache atm), but if your justification for building an orbital shipyard after setting up camp last week is a single three post thread where you form deals with NPCs, then don't hold your breath.

It's not just going to be a three post thread. Other members are inbound for it as well. I just happened. To have the only posts there right now. That thread simply details how we got the steady income.

 

[Green Ranger]

The point still stands that you're using three posts in a thread you did yourself to justify an expansion that is massive when you factor in what you have and what you have to work with.

I'm sorry, but I'm going to deny the expansion. This just feels like it's rushed and has way too little actual work involved to merit any of what you're asking for.

 

[Prudence]

The point still stands that you're using three posts in a thread you did yourself to justify an expansion that is massive when you factor in what you have and what you have to work with.

I'm sorry, but I'm going to deny the expansion. This just feels like it's rushed and has way too little actual work involved to merit any of what you're asking for.

Okay... How can I get to a point where this could be approved?

 

[Green Ranger]

Generate activity within the faction. Get people doing stuff - get out there and try to mend relations with some groups, or establish new connections with other groups. That sort of thing.

 

[Prudence]

Generate activity within the faction. Get people doing stuff - get out there and try to mend relations with some groups, or establish new connections with other groups. That sort of thing.

Will do! Thank you for the advice! :) I'll try to generate some more action and then try again!

 

[Green Ranger]

Sure thing. Try to wait longer than a week between expansion requests, too. ;)

 

[Prudence]

I posted the last expansion request at 12:45 last Wednesday. That was really part of Tuesday for me so I hope this can be considered as having waited a week? If not then please wait to approve or deny it until tomorrow when it will have been a technical week.

FACTION:
Keywork Engineering Systems

JUSTIFICATION:
The KES is attempting to ramp itself up and achieve some of the former 'glory' they had before. As a significant portion of our business now is being a PMC, we need a fleet to do that. The KES fleet has currently been crippled down to just one Frigate, and a series of personal freighters, and corporate owned fighter craft. In this thread we established a new base of operations, and settled down so that it is more feasible for us to rebuild seeing as we aren't on the run. Also in that thread we established a new monthly source of income, less than one year of just existing would pay for this expansion, but we have the credits for it already. In this thread we have begun talks with the Imperium that will hopefully result in a military alliance of sorts between us. If such is to occur, we need ships to fight with. We have 76 Million credits at the moment, and the author of the ship estimated its worth at 2.5 million a pop.

If your character has the credits and the patience to seek out a dealer, older military grade models can still be found on the shadow market for about the same price you might pay for a brand new military grade model (whose sales are closely monitored and restricted to Imperial agencies). That means they would probably run you about 2.5 million credits, which still isn't too bad all things considered.

The fighter craft and shuttles were a part of the shipyard that that mandos took from us, and the Siren that they destroyed at Sirus Primaris. The thread for that is here: http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/engineering-a-takeover.60802/

NEW CONTENT:
Naval Assets:
+4 Haranov-Class Gunships MKii(Valued at 2.5 Million Credits per Ship)

>T-1337 (24)

>T-4 (24)

>VF-001 (36)

>VF-002 (36)

>LRF-18 (24)

>SXS-117 (5)

>SXS-50 (6)

>SXS-564 (5)

>SXS-33 (24)

 

[Prudence]

Edited the expansion solely to add missing links

 

[Prudence]

Edited to specify it is the new, legal, Haranov

 

[Green Ranger]

My issue with the last expansion request was mainly that you didn't really justify the money you had properly. While I note that you have tried to flesh out the justification section more this time, there's still a bit of a question looming over everything as to where that money's coming from and how.

I'm fine with the expansion request, more or less, so long as it's actually explained to me whereabouts the finances are coming from. So I'll need you to provide that before I approve anything.

 

[Prudence]

Okay :) I'll have that up for you tonight.

 

[Green Ranger]

FACTION NAME: Dark Jedi of the Bogan
EXPANSION JUSTIFICATION: Mainly just a refit and repairing of existing forces, and replacing ships lost at Fondor. The main reasoning is really so I'm using more up-to-date tech profiles, since I know there were a few issues with some of them in the past.

NEW CONTENT:

2 DSMV-1000s (Replacing losses at Fondor)
1 Liberty Mark 2 Star Destroyer (Replacing lost Justice-class at Fondor)
2 Justice-class Star Destroyers repaired and refit as a Liberty Mark 2
3 Liberty classes repaired and refit as a Liberty Mark 2
4 undamaged Justice-class Star Destroyers refit as Liberty Mark 2 Star Destroyers
3 undamaged Liberty-class Star Destroyers refit as Liberty Mark 2 Star Destroyers
Fighter losses at Fondor replaced and bolstered due to new fighter bay sizes, all TRIE-series starfighters replaced with TRIE Mark 2 Starfighters.

This is probably a bit confusing, so I'll do a list of how our total naval assets would look after approval:

• 1x Keldroma-Class Dreadnought
  • Conscio's Revenge
• 13x Liberty-class Star Destroyers, Mark 2
  • Fury of the Vaalki
  • Herald of the Daw
  • Oderyn's Retribution
  • Hrassment
  • ACE in the Hole
  • Lightell's Reckoning
  • Blackguard
  • Ember of Vahl
  • Legion of Lettow
  • Nepherides
  • Cultist of Rajivari
  • Seyugi Dervish
  • Bando Gora
• 8x DSMV-1000
  • Sluissi Liberation
  • Dagobah Shield
  • Mustafar Herald
  • Eriadu Dawn
  • Sullustan Twilight
  • Malastare Fog
  • Manaan Tempest
  • Hoorex Kwando
• 300x SVS-900 Series Light Salvagers
• 2592x TRIE Mark 2 Series Starfighters (Full complement for all ships listed)

@Clayton , @GABA , one of you guys have a look at this (since I can't approve my own assets, obviously)? Cheers.

 

[Prudence]

Here I stated I was going to liquidate all assets and sell them.

Here I stated that they had all been accumulated and sold within the day.

Here Brett stated what all those assets were worth

Thanks! :) Let me know if you have any questions.

 

[Clayton]

FACTION NAME: Dark Jedi of the Bogan
EXPANSION JUSTIFICATION: Mainly just a refit and repairing of existing forces, and replacing ships lost at Fondor. The main reasoning is really so I'm using more up-to-date tech profiles, since I know there were a few issues with some of them in the past.

NEW CONTENT:

2 DSMV-1000s (Replacing losses at Fondor)
1 Liberty Mark 2 Star Destroyer (Replacing lost Justice-class at Fondor)
2 Justice-class Star Destroyers repaired and refit as a Liberty Mark 2
3 Liberty classes repaired and refit as a Liberty Mark 2
4 undamaged Justice-class Star Destroyers refit as Liberty Mark 2 Star Destroyers
3 undamaged Liberty-class Star Destroyers refit as Liberty Mark 2 Star Destroyers
Fighter losses at Fondor replaced and bolstered due to new fighter bay sizes, all TRIE-series starfighters replaced with TRIE Mark 2 Starfighters.

This is probably a bit confusing, so I'll do a list of how our total naval assets would look after approval:

• 1x Keldroma-Class Dreadnought
  • Conscio's Revenge
• 13x Liberty-class Star Destroyers, Mark 2
  • Fury of the Vaalki
  • Herald of the Daw
  • Oderyn's Retribution
  • Hrassment
  • ACE in the Hole
  • Lightell's Reckoning
  • Blackguard
  • Ember of Vahl
  • Legion of Lettow
  • Nepherides
  • Cultist of Rajivari
  • Seyugi Dervish
  • Bando Gora
• 8x DSMV-1000
  • Sluissi Liberation
  • Dagobah Shield
  • Mustafar Herald
  • Eriadu Dawn
  • Sullustan Twilight
  • Malastare Fog
  • Manaan Tempest
  • Hoorex Kwando
• 300x SVS-900 Series Light Salvagers
• 2592x TRIE Mark 2 Series Starfighters (Full complement for all ships listed)

@Clayton , @GABA , one of you guys have a look at this (since I can't approve my own assets, obviously)? Cheers.

Can this be reasonably afforded by the Bogan?

 

[Green Ranger]

It's only a couple of new ships, but we sold a bucketload of stuff to the Rebellion recently (http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/...-van-shipyards-order-list.58996/#post-1187629). That'll be an ongoing deal, and I've gotta talk to Kyzer about organizing further sales for Defiance Armada and how I'd go about that, but the understanding is that there's mroe to come and it's going to become something of an ongoing thing.

On top of that? Civ salves for the TRIE pods (in the write-ups I made note of them being a popular civ transport), as well as mining profits from Sluis Van and Eriadu's mining branches as well.

Since the expansion request is mostly refits as opposed to adding to our assets, I think it's a fairly conservative request.

 

[Clayton]

Alright, that's a good explanation and simple to sort out. Approved.

 

[Prudence]

@Green Ranger Was my explanation of the finances acceptable or would you like me to try to detail it more?

 

[Green Ranger]

I haven't had a chance to look at it yet. Which is why I haven't responded.

I've got other priorities as well man, you'll have to be patient.

 

[Prudence]

I haven't had a chance to look at it yet. Which is why I haven't responded.

I've got other priorities as well man, you'll have to be patient.

I'm good with that! I was just making sure it didn't get lost in the posts between you and Clayton. Take your time! :)

 

[Prudence]

I haven't had a chance to look at it yet. Which is why I haven't responded.

I've got other priorities as well man, you'll have to be patient.

Hey no rush :) Just bumping my expansion request to make sure you don't forget since its been up for 2 weeks. :)