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Name: Jaleer Reukli

Faction: New Jedi Order

Rank: Knight

Species: Human

Age: 18

Gender: Male

Height: 5ft 11in

Weight: 160 lbs

Eyes: Deep dark brown

Hair: Blonde, a little wavy, between medium and long length.

Skin: Tan

Credits: None

Distinguishing marks:

Burns on his chest, where a small part of the roof of his mother's home collapsed on top of him. Two scars on his stomach where he cut himself so padawans can learn to heal through the force.

Force sensitive: Yes


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Personality:


Jaleer is a carefree type of person, and doesn't know what he wants to do, he has peace and balance in his live but no drive or goal. Like making plans for situations and taking time to meditate to, and is usually very calm. Though he gets attached to things and people he doesn't show it as he is a quiet person. He usually tries to stay neutral in arguments and tries to find to always be rational and logical. He loves relaxing in quiet environments, and even if he is with someone and is quiet it just means he is enjoying the peaceful moment with that person. He thinks people have to solve there own problems but asking for help is not a sign of weakness in his mind. Wants to live in peace and have a quiet live like his mother but knows he isn't ready for that an is looking for a calling. Which the rebellion might just be the answer, seeing the rebellion as a chance for a peaceful galaxy. He isn't much of a fighting not having much experience or much of a heart for it but will defend himself if need be. Doesn't have much hatred for the empire other than that his peaceful life is threatened by them and he only wish to have those he cares about and himself have a peaceful quiet live.

Because if he gets angry he loses all sense of himself and attacks with the force attempting to destroy them with force push. He is stronger like this but has no control of himself and can easily be trick or if he is attacked form by someone else he is defenseless, that's how extreme his anger is. The only time he lost control was when his mother died from the pirate raid. That is also way he wish to live in peace and have a quiet live fearing the anger within himself which he thinks is the dark side inside him. An when he becomes anger like that he taps into the dark side, fueling his anger and strength in the force in exchange for his control over himself. Isn't one who would get sick in a battle ever since the pirate raid he went through. In a fight unless he is angry he isn't looking to kill but is willing to kill if it came to it. But he has rules to who he is allowed to kill, no children, no one that surrenders, and no innocents that aren't soldiers. When he is meditating and feels really out of control or out of focus will spin the two metal spheres he keeps.


Jaleer has grow to have multipersonality disorder the anger which he felt because of the death of his mother. It is also the trigger of it having two new personalities one a pure animal fueled by rage. This represents the rage he felt when his mother was killed, the other is a cold and dark version of himself meant to keep in check the other personality but like the other fueled by the dark side and represents his state of mind after the death of his mother and the slavers continuing to attack the village, his only desire was to survive which is the only thing this personality cares about and has little care for life.


Biography:


Jaleer was born on ship after his mother a Jedi knight who fell in love with a Soldier became pregnant, after the order realize this she decided to leave the order to raise her child, in peace away from the war. His father is later killed fighting when the Empire invaded the Galactic alliance. She left to a Ryloth in the hopes to avoid the war and the Jedi. Though there were no humans in this village, it was far enough away from the empire that his mother felt safe. They lived a simple live being farmers and lived near a town where his mother would visit many times to cure the illnesses of the town. They were treated with a mix of respect and fear as the planet remembers the horrors it goes through by others not of their species. Jaleer was trained by his mother in both martial arts and force techniques, and would go with her when the town needed her skills. His mother tried to teach him to meditate but he found it difficult to center himself, his mother then came up with an idea, he would spin two metal spheres around and just focus on that in a near meditating state until he no longers even notice that and become centered and has surrounded himself to the force. Eventually his mother began to fall in love with a twi'lek, and he respected his mother for her choice to move on. Jaleer keeps the two metal spheres with him out of respect to his first teacher, his mother.


After a Jedi had learn of their presence on the planet the Jedi traveled to Ryloth. The Jedi asked his mother to rejoin the order as they have change and needed her help. But his mother had wanted a peaceful quiet live and refused, but the Jedi didn't leave though and waited a few days hoping that his mother would reconsidered. Eventually the town was attacked by raiders for slaves Jaleer's mother and Jedi fought with the town militia and fought off the raiders. But the mother was killed protecting her son and this caused the Jedi to learn that her son was force sensitive since he attacked the raiders with the force using it to kill several of the raiders. The Jedi sense that he was using the dark side because of his anger, and knocked him out before he caused more damage. The Jedi brought him into the order to help train him and since he has no where else to go. The Jedi eventually dying in battle, that was when he was 12 years old and for the next 4 years he trained with the Jedi order growing in his powers in the force. And had better control over himself and became a Jedi padawan ready to for more freedom and hopefully live in peace once the war is over. Jaleer trained with the Jedi order moving from outpost and outpost during his 4 years away from home now wants to use his powers to help others.


Strengths and Weaknesses:


He is strong in keeping calm, is stronger in the force than most. Can levitate a heavier object longer than most his age. Can feel what others are feeling in a close distance, as a way to make sure those he cares about are alright. Fiercely loyal to those he cares about, he is a good listener to people's problems. He is very calm and at peace with himself since he has found peace after his mother's death, and meditates daily to keep him refresh and strong. Knows some hand to hand combat, and is alright in lightsaber combat. Knows how to farm and tend to animals, and knows how to entertain children because when he was younger he would watch other the patients children if they wasn't anyone to do that.


He is weak in controlling himself when he is anger, and in Lightsaber combat he is his weakness. He is inexperience in fighting someone to the death. Is slow when it comes to making decisions, and likes taking time to think things through. He is a defensive fighter and lacks aggression when fighting his opponents. It would be bad if he was ambushed though he is on guard he will take a long time to think of a strategy which could cost him. Isn't very interested in lightsaber combat so he won't be training much in it. He can sometimes be lost in thought and hard to get the attention of, when attempting to talk with him. He can be lazy and likes to meditate rather than train.


Attributes


Strength:6/10

A little above average nothing too major since he worked on a farm with his mother for most of his live. Also his Jedi training, he has a slim frame.


Dexterity:8/10

Very quick and agile since he also trained with his mother before her death and after words with the Jedi.


Constitution:7/10

Very healthy thanks to his lifestyle and with his training he can take a few good hits.


Intelligence:4/10

He lived a simple live so he has average level intelligence.


Wisdom:7/10

His mother tried to help him think for himself and they would sometimes talk about philosophy even if he hadn't realized this.


Charisma:4/10

He hasn't talked to many people and is awkward and lack social skills.


Force powers [Novice > Apprentice > Adept > Expert > Master

Novice:

Force Stun

Plant Surge

Force Bubble

Hibernation Trance

Force Jump

Force Cloak

Tutaminis

Apprentice

Force Empathy

Air Manipulation

Force Persuasion

Force Valor

Force Speed

Force Body


Adept:

Force Healing

Force sense

Expert:

Telekinesis​



Skills:


An knows how to grow crops since he and his mother when she wasn't helping out the sick would farm. He is proficient at hand to hand combat since his mother taught him in a means to protect himself. Can use many force powers without getting tired as quickly as most for his age. He can pick up objects heavier than most apprentices, and can use the force to meditate and sustain himself for a long period of time.


Lightsaber/sword forms:


Form III Soresu level: Adept


Gear:


Light brown robes, boots, dead mother green lightsaber. Communicator, jedi brown cloak, and two metal spheres in a leather bag that he levitate and spin in a circle when he thinks and meditates.

The Sentinel Combat armor system

Twin green Shoto lightsaber

Drumbeat Sonic Pistol

Role-plays:







  • [Training] The Way of the Force –Finished
http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/ask-the-way-of-the-force.59150/
  • Jedi Mission Convoy duty –Finished
http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/jedi-mission-convoy-duty.59199/
  • Bestines Best cantina –Finished
http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/bestines-best-cantina.59472/
  • [Training] In a stolen Ship –Finished
http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/in-a-stolen-ship.59551/
  • Like mother Like son –Finished
http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/like-mother-like-son.59627/
  • A meeting of a broken shell and a exile –Unfinished
http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/a-meeting-of-a-broken-shell-and-a-exile.59403/
  • Alban Archeology –Unfinished
http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/alban-archeology.60191/
  • In Vacation –Unfinished
http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/honestly-just-ask-in-vacation.59512/
  • Whispers on Ryloth –Unfinished
http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/whispers-on-ryloth.60002/
  • Funeral pyres or Stockholm Syndrome –Unfinished
http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/funeral-pyres-or-stockholm-syndrome.60079/
  • Staring Contest –Unfinished
http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/staring-contest.60249/
  • A meeting in the Woods –Finished
http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/a-meeting-in-the-woods.59746/#post-1176966
  • Grey meets Light –Abandon/unfinished
http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/grey-meets-light.59808/
  • Yin and Yang –Finished
http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/yin-and-yang.59678/
  • Ryll Talk Ryloth –Abandon/unfinished
http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/ryll-talk-ryloth-1.59618/
  • The chances of it –Finished
http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/the-chances-of-it.59673/
  • [Training] Greenhouse Glum –Finished
http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/greenhouse-glum.60333/
  • [Training] How to heal –Finished
http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/how-to-heal.59672/
  • [Training] A late lunch –Finished
http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/open-a-late-lunch.60247/page-2#post-1180022
  • [Training] Exchanging tips –Finished
http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/exchanging-tips.59985/
  • [Training] A trade of sorts –Finished
http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/a-trade-of-sorts.60026/
  • [Training] Medic –Finished
http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/medic.59805/
  • [Training] Ethics –Finished
http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/ethics.59587/
  • [Training] The art of healing –Finished
http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/the-art-of-healing.59634/


 
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Benvenu7,

Welcome to SWRP!

Interesting character, and I like where you're going with him. I just wanted to point out a few things from your profile that may need another look-see.

Biography:
Jaleer was born on ship after his mother a Jedi knight who fell in love with a Soldier became pregnant, after the order realize this she decided to leave the order to raise her child. His father is later killed fighting when the Empire invaded the republic.

Although this doesn't mean you can't include this, Jedi are allowed to have relations/lovers/children in this timeline.

Also, it was the Galactic Alliance that was invaded. The New Republic is old now.

She left to a Ryloth in the hopes to avoid the war and the Jedi. Though there were no humans on Ryloth it was far enough away from the empire that his mother felt safe.

There are humans on Ryloth - perhaps just not in that particular village?

They lived a simple live being farmers and lived near a town where his mother would visit many times to cure the illnesses of the town. They were treated with a mix of respect and fear as the planet remembers the horrors it goes through by others not of there species. Jaleer was trained by his mother in both martial arts and force techniques, and would go with her when the town needed her skills. His mother tried to teach him to meditate but he found it difficult to center himself, his mother than came up with a idea, he would spin two metal spheres around and just focus on that in a near meditating state until he no longers even notice that and become centered and has surrounded himself to the force. Eventually his mother began to fall in love with a twi'lek, and he respected his mother for her choice to move on. Jaleer keeps the two metal spheres with him out of respect to his first teacher, his mother.

Looks good.

After a Jedi had learn of their presence on the planet the Jedi traveled to Ryloth. The Jedi asked his mother to rejoin the order as they have change and needed her help. But his mother had wanted a peaceful quiet live and refused, but the Jedi didn't leave though and waited a few days hoping that his mother would reconsidered. Eventually the town was attacked by raiders for slaves Jaleer's mother and Jedi fought with the town militia and fought off the raiders. But the mother was killed protecting her son and this caused the Jedi to learn that her son was force sensitive since he attacked the raiders with the force using it to kill several of the raiders. The Jedi sense that he was using the dark side because of his anger, and knocked him out before he caused more damage. The Jedi brought him into the order to help train him and since he has no where else to go. The Jedi eventually dying in battle, that was when he was 12 years old and for the next 4 years he trained with the Jedi order growing in his powers in the force. And had better control over himself and became a Jedi padawan ready to for more freedom and hopefully live in peace once the war is over. Jaleer trained with the Jedi order moving from outpost and outpost during his 4 years away from home now wants to use his powers to help others.

Looks good!

It may be helpful to read your bio out-loud to yourself. There are a couple grammatical errors, and it is sometimes difficult to know who he/she is, but everyone has the problem.

Can't wait to see what you do with the character!
 

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Thanks I made the changes so does this mean my character is accepted or do I still have to wait?
 

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1) This needs to be in the profiles board.

2) i'll get back to you in the sign up threads about that
 

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Thank you I really appreciate it
 

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My pleasure! I'll be done reviewing the applications in 5-10mins.
 

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Oh, a note, you might wanted to change the name of this thread to the name of your character, rather than what it I'd now.

Edit->Go Advanced->top left
 

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Fixed!

I'll give the thread a proper read sometime.
 

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Hey, I noticed you said Jaleer is also a Force Healer, if you ever want to have him learn more advanced healing techniques such as Revitalize, Cleanse Mind, or Detoxify Poison, just let me know. Thats not to say you have to learn them from me or anything, just that I'm willing to teach Jaleer.​
 

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Thanks @Undine

Anyway thanks to the fair and merciful @Taruna this profile has been upgraded and now actually looks nice, and once I have all my posts listed which is going to take a while since I am trying to put them in order and there is over 20 of them, I hope you guys like this and please if you do tell Taruna since she was the amazing person that made this possible.

An I will soon be making my padawan a Knight once I fixed a bit of his emotional problems if that doesn't happen soon than just going to pray that the number of training threads I have done will convince the higher ups that my character should be leveled up.

Also just realized the picture is of a guy with blonde hair while my character has brown hair oops but I am not going to change that
 

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I believe with the current timeline that is his age
 

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You're a Jedi AND a Rebel? I wanna be that too!
 

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Just sign up in the rebel forum and you can
 

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OMG THAT'S THE GUY FROM A KNIGHT'S TALE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
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