Mandalorian Dominion Sign Ups

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Name: Evelyn Yara
Link: http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/evelyn-yara-mandalorian.74284/ (this is a separate thread than her bio - just fleshes out some story elements)
Background: Wealthy, privileged girl loses family suddenly and mysteriously. Turns to the galactic underworld for answers. Becomes a bounty hunter. Doesn't go so well. Emotionally scarred by witnessing Sith power and destruction. Takes up with an older incarnation of the Death Watch. Get arrested by the Dominion, but while imprisoned learns the Mandalorian culture & philosophy and rises in ranks. (Thinking more of an ambassador type than a soldier).
 

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Name: Evelyn Yara
Link: http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/evelyn-yara-mandalorian.74284/ (this is a separate thread than her bio - just fleshes out some story elements)
Background: Wealthy, privileged girl loses family suddenly and mysteriously. Turns to the galactic underworld for answers. Becomes a bounty hunter. Doesn't go so well. Emotionally scarred by witnessing Sith power and destruction. Takes up with an older incarnation of the Death Watch. Get arrested by the Dominion, but while imprisoned learns the Mandalorian culture & philosophy and rises in ranks. (Thinking more of an ambassador type than a soldier).
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Name: Rowan Vane
Link: http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/rowan-vane.74315/
Brief Description: my Grand father is a Mandalorian, My mother is a Mandalorian, my father is Echani , but don't hold that against me.

Name: RED-2
Link: http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/red-2.74316/
Brief Description: I have served the Mandalorians for over 100 years. I cant help that people keep stealing me.

Ok. One character at a time. First Rowan Vane. Lets clean up his equipment a little bit. That's a lot of tech listed on the profile and Where does he keep it all? On his ship? List what he carries on his person and what is kept on his ship. Reasoning:
When you pvp people will look at profile to see if you own qhat you are using. Because you have so much weapons and armor in your profile, that would not be right to make them assume you have access to all of it. Gonna be a real pain having to link all the gear youre carrying in every single thread, but you will have too because you clearly cant carry all that around in every thread.

My first suggestion is to clean up equipment to what you need. If there are miasion acquired items that are special to you, list you keep them on ship unless stated otherwise.

Alrighty lets hit this and we'll move on from there.
 

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Ok. One character at a time. First Rowan Vane. Lets clean up his equipment a little bit. That's a lot of tech listed on the profile and Where does he keep it all? On his ship? List what he carries on his person and what is kept on his ship. Reasoning:
When you pvp people will look at profile to see if you own qhat you are using. Because you have so much weapons and armor in your profile, that would not be right to make them assume you have access to all of it. Gonna be a real pain having to link all the gear youre carrying in every single thread, but you will have too because you clearly cant carry all that around in every thread.

My first suggestion is to clean up equipment to what you need. If there are miasion acquired items that are special to you, list you keep them on ship unless stated otherwise.

Alrighty lets hit this and we'll move on from there.
right away work on the EQ now
 

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Ok. One character at a time. First Rowan Vane. Lets clean up his equipment a little bit. That's a lot of tech listed on the profile and Where does he keep it all? On his ship? List what he carries on his person and what is kept on his ship. Reasoning:
When you pvp people will look at profile to see if you own qhat you are using. Because you have so much weapons and armor in your profile, that would not be right to make them assume you have access to all of it. Gonna be a real pain having to link all the gear youre carrying in every single thread, but you will have too because you clearly cant carry all that around in every thread.

My first suggestion is to clean up equipment to what you need. If there are miasion acquired items that are special to you, list you keep them on ship unless stated otherwise.

Alrighty lets hit this and we'll move on from there.
done with the equipment, next?
 

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Name: Armani Fett
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Brief Description: Son of a family of farmers who emigrated to Concord Dawn during Clan Fett's early years of rebuilding. Lazy sonuvagon, eventually grew to be a good shot with a rifle while killing scavenging animals from across the fields of the farm. Decided to strike his own fortune and joined the Mandolorian Militia before undergoing training to be a Special Operations Sniper. Devoted life from then on to fighting the sith behind the scope of a sniper rifle while growing to hate the Republic, sees Mandalore as true home and becomes idealistic and patriotic for its freedom. Goes into hiding during the civil war with Death Watch, returns to public life with the calling of the banners.
 

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Name: Armani Fett
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Brief Description: Son of a family of farmers who emigrated to Concord Dawn during Clan Fett's early years of rebuilding. Lazy sonuvagon, eventually grew to be a good shot with a rifle while killing scavenging animals from across the fields of the farm. Decided to strike his own fortune and joined the Mandolorian Militia before undergoing training to be a Special Operations Sniper. Devoted life from then on to fighting the sith behind the scope of a sniper rifle while growing to hate the Republic, sees Mandalore as true home and becomes idealistic and patriotic for its freedom. Goes into hiding during the civil war with Death Watch, returns to public life with the calling of the banners.
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Name: Saviin Echoy'la
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Brief Description: The only recognised child of the late Mand'alor the Redeemer, Saviin only knew her late father for a year before his tragic death at the Battle of Coruscant. She went on a journey of self-discovery and now seeks to live up to the vaunted reputation of her late-father. Luckily she isn't insane, well, isn't literally insane. She does have some Kyramund blood in her after all.
 

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Name: Saviin Echoy'la
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Brief Description: The only recognised child of the late Mand'alor the Redeemer, Saviin only knew her late father for a year before his tragic death at the Battle of Coruscant. She went on a journey of self-discovery and now seeks to live up to the vaunted reputation of her late-father. Luckily she isn't insane, well, isn't literally insane. She does have some Kyramund blood in her after all.
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Name: Ordo
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Brief Description: Orphan found and adopted by members of Clan Ordo. Grew up believing everyone was shunning him because he was an outsider and an orphan when really he was the one who didn't let anyone near him. Growing up with the perception that he was despised he focus on training hard to become a strong warrior so he could be accepted as a mandalorian. His trainers noticed his behaviour and his isolation and devised a special trial which served to open his eyes to the truth that he was the only thing holding him back from becoming part of the mandalorian society. The realisation instilled strong morals and a profound understanding of the bond that exists within the mandalorian culture and between the bretheren within a clan.
 

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