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Nero watched Geeva stutter like a train, growing a little uneasy that he'd upset her if he simply opened his mouth again. He stretched his legs out in front of him on the floor, and his boots made dull thudding sounds on the metal, which he noticed was very warm all of a sudden. He stood and felt the wall behind him as well. Also very warm.

"What happened to the A.C.?" he asked, disgruntled. "Or more importantly, where's that heat coming from?" He walked to the end of the hall and looked up the elevator shaft. "Hey you! Droid man, what's goin' on up there?" he called up the shaft, but no one could hear him. "Do I have to have a little chat with your boss?" Obviously, the young man didn't figure out that the best way to solve the problem was to actually use the lift. Nero smacked himself on the forehead and took a deep breath to calm down. He then proceeded to make his way back down the hall again.

"Did anyone else notice the heat in here? I could've sworn it was freezing when we first arrived." he said.
 

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Geeva was livid. Not only was the annoying murderous jedi still in the cell with her, now he was trying to lecture her! She growled at him once more once he was finished talking, completely ignoring the fact he had changed the battery. "I-I've been alone my entire l-life, w-why would being lonely m-matter to me now?" she said to counter his little dark side speech. Then when asked why she had attempted to steal the lightsaber she just huffed and crossed her arms, ruffling her brow at him when he also asked why she needed the breathing apparatus in the first place. "B-Both of those are n-none o-of your buisness!"

Geeva did not notice the increase in temperature, she was originally from Tatooine and was used to warmer temperatures anyways. She wore a slight look of confusion when Nero started yelling at the droid and walked off. But this left her with only one jedi to deal with for the moment, and that in itself was a blessing to her, even if it was the one she liked least out of the two. "W-Why don't you l-leave with your f-friend?"
 

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"Just because something is, does not mean it schould be." Darius was cut off by The departure of Nero, the change in temperature also caught his attention, he being from Danteel A planet that only got two months of constant sunlight a year due to it orbit, he was used to much colder climates. "I wont leave your side, Master Vasch has charged me with keeping you safe until I am relived your safety is my priority young one, in any case Nero is capable of taking care of himself."



In truth Darius was beginning to have an uneasy feeling, the death of a councilmen, and the odd change in temperature added to his anxiety, he knelt next to the girl, clearing his mind, keeping watching over the situation with Nero just in case. "something just doesn't feel right..."
 

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Nero smelled smoke from the area above, and looked around him. Everything looked normal, but he swore there was a fire somewhere. "What the heck?" he muttered, and walked back to the lift. Working, as expected. He stepped onto it and pressed the button to take him to the upper floor.

"I hope Geeva doesn't try to use this as a way to escape..." he muttered. Having reached the first floor, Nero saw a fire behind the window in the small office. The droid was gone, and several guards were either dead or unconscious on the floor. And there was no sign of the young woman who'd accompanied them to the cell either. What was going on?

"Oh, crap..." he cursed.
 

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The young girl scooted slightly away from the padawan who remained in the cell with her. She was still utterly convinced their mission was to kill her, and they were trying to find a way to make it look like an accident. She still did not notice the change in temperature, still to upset to really focus on much else. "I-I don't n-need your protection!" she scoffed, shifting so her back was facing the jedi. "A-And you talk ab-bout how being angry is b-bad... b-but your the one m-making me angry!" she huffed, deciding to fiddle with her breathing apparatus to distract herself and hopefully calm herself down slightly, she tended to run out of breath quickly when she was to upset and that could hinder any possible escape that might be possible, though she was not sure how many opportunities there would be with jedi guarding her.
 

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Nero suddenly feels a ripple in the force. He turns and sees Desmond Trin standing behind the flames. The flames add a dramatic effect to his already terrifying appearance. Desmonds eyes glow a bright red and he begins to speak.

" Hello kiddo, I hope you don't mind that I take that girl down there. "

He begins to walk towards the lift, as he goes he watches Nero, waiting for a responce.
 

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Darius' could feel the dark side fall like a dark cloud on the entire building, and he could also sense that Nero was in Danger, it was a complicated situation for Darius schould he help his good friend or Continue to protect the girl, He keeled again in Meditation to put his trust in the force. "Well young one, it seems a Bogan has gone through a lot of trouble to get to you...you know what a Bogan is don't you?"


The first thing Darius did was activate his Distress signal, It would notify the Jedi Temple of hid current situation, if they were not aware already. He then used the force to pull out a part of the wall, to reveal the fiber relay cables which controls most of the primary functions of the hole building. "As I said, I am here to protect you, that man is here either to turn you to the dark side, or kill you if you refuse...I'm going to turn out all of the lights, Ill get you to the ventilation shaft...here, you will crawl and be evacuated by another Jedi." Darius showed the girl The PDA and The Map of the rout which she was to take,the then showed her the security camera feeds of all the dead guards on the upper levels, "Your good at disappearing, Once you get out I need you to become invisible, Ill create diversion for you..."

Cell block A....

Containment status...
Secure

Containment realest order 20070250...

Confrimed...

Containment status...

Compromised...


To make more light for the girl, he pulled off his inner robes to reveal his Bioluminascent Tattoo, Darius waited until he heard the noise of all the prisoner s outside, who soon would fight for a chance to ride the elevator, "Don't worry about them, the security cannons will stun them before they escape, who however do not have tracing device and will be unharmed, but we must hurry." Darius retrieved the other battery, "You will need this Geeva." Darius attached the battery in the spare compartment, and on the inside of that same compartment placed a small tracking node, as he knew once she got out she would make a run for it.


Darius opened the door, pulling Geeva along he negotiated his way through the crowds of people, with his keen eyesight he located the ventilation shaft in the dark, using the force to remove the grate he picked up Geeva and placed her in the opening, "Now I'm assuming you have escaped from here before, since they put you in the high security level, that will mean a level off then what you are used too." With his tattoo now lighting the confined space Darius continued to lead Geeva into the ventilation shaft, finally they came to a pint where they could only go up, "Hold on." Darius wrapped the girls bound hands around his shoulders, and with one swift jump reached the top of the drop. after five more minutes of crawling, they reached the outside vent they were looking for, "Your a very special girl Geeva, and as long as I'm on this planet, you will have someone to come to for ANYTHING, but i need you to Disappear until the other Jedi arrive, all they want is to help, and maybe even fix that lung problem of yours...Disappear Geeva." Darius turned around and made his way back into the complex, instead of going up he went down, to assist his friend. Entering the armory, Darius could feel the Nero and the source of the dark side were just outside, Darius opened the door to stand at his friends side, Giving Nero a nod Darius, tried to let him know through the force that he had the girls safety under control.


Darius did not speak to the Bogan, he only keeled and began to meditate, summoning his strength for the potential battle to come. All they had to do was hold him off until the Jedi Masters arrived. Darius could feel the intruders hate, arrogance, his need for power, and above all his fear, it was clear that he was deeply immersed in the dark side.
 

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Desmond watches the new man walk in and instantly kneel. He can sense that this jedi is wise, espicially for how young he is. Desmond also can sense that the girl is not in the building anymore. He could not fail again. Last time he went to try and find a youngling to bring to the Luminados he failed. He owed his master a new member to their cause, and he would not fail this time. Last time he was in a very public place with too many people around. Now all that stood in the way of his target was two padawans. Desmond threw his cloak to the ground and ignited his single saber. The blood red blade emitted a slight hiss as it came out. Desmond then opened his hand, causing a red lightning to form in the palm. He slid his hand up the blade, igniting it with the lightning and waited for one of the jedi to make the first move.
 

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Two lightsabers. Right, just what he needed. Seemed tough if the fact that Nero was a rookie wasn't overlooked. The man was an enemy, Nero knew that much, as Desmond had made that fact blatantly obvious. The young Jedi stood in a casual posture, with his weight shifted onto his left leg, and his right hand on his belt. His lips formed a thin line for a moment before he spoke, and he exhaled, letting out a long exaggerated sigh. Desmond had called him 'Kiddo.' He was not going to let such a silly name tick him off anymore.

"You don't talk much, huh, buddy?" he asked, carefully annunciating the word buddy while he took the hilt of his lightsaber in his right hand. "Sorry to disappoint you, but, she's not for sale. Besides, you probably couldn't stand her anyway, she doesn't like to make friends." he added with the smallest of smirks.

His lightsaber activated. His sword arm dropped in no true fighting stance, extended from his right side outward, the blue blade glowed brightly against the constant orange light of the fire. Nero watched Desmond with a careful eye, trying hard not to tense up in the event that the enemy should attack suddenly.

"Just have to hold this guy off for a little while to let Geeva escape somewhere..." he thought.

[Still wondering whether or not this would be valid since Darius and Nero haven't been assigned masters yet... so we'll see I guess.]
 

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((Read the thread and thought this kind of character would fit great, so I made one. Tell me if its too late to join. I didn't know what kind of tracking signal was on the prisoners... so I improvised.))

Franky couldn't believe his luck. He had been sitting in his cell, filling out a cross-word puzzle and paying little to no mind to the rest of the rabble in here until in came a young Jedi dragging a little girl wearing a breath mask into a cell. Immediately he was watching. This right here was evidence that the Jedi were no good. What could that miserable little child have done to be dragged into the maximum security holding cells? Nothing. Frank wouldn't stand for it. This was a dangerous cell block; the old man in the cell next door was a child molester who had murdered 3 young such girls 2 days ago. He had to get her out of here by any means necessary. Soon, the Jedi was joined by another. Frank could tell that, while not altogether decent, at least they were trying to be kind to her. That redeemed them somewhat in his eyes.

That was when he felt the temperature change. Usually the wardens kept the air nice and cold to sap the strength from the prisoners. But there was definitely heat leaking into the cell block. A moment after the original jedi left to investigate, the cell doors opened and the hall was in an uproar. Glancing over to the old man, Franky saw a disgusting smile cross the monster's face as he stared at the little girl. Franky got to him before he reached his prey. Catching the frail man in a choke hold, Franky squeezed until the legs stopped kicking and let the body drop to the floor. If the suffocation didn't kill him... the feet of the prisoners would. Sick bastard got what he deserved.

Glancing over at the cell that the girl had been in, Franky noticed that the second jedi was carrying her toward the ventelation system. Good on yeh. Kid. Thought the bruiser. He still hated the idea of bringing the kid in here in the first places... but at least she was safer, if only barely, now.

Battering his way through the crowd toward the lift, Franky remembered the tracing device and used his cybernetic arm to dispose of it. As the other inmates were blasted with stun rounds, Franky followed the Jedi up the lift.
What he saw up there was the source of the heat and the last thing he wanted to get in the middle of. A third Jedi had shown up, though it appeared that the first two hated his guts... or something. It didn't matter what the details were; all that Franky needed to know was that they weren't exactly the friendliest with each other. As long as that third guy was around, Franky would be less of a concern to the Jedi.

Using the distraction to its fullest, the human made his way toward the evidence room to retrieve his property.
 
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[I'm gonna go ahead and wait for Geeva to reply to keep from messing up posting order.]
 

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Geeva was about to do more complaining and answer the question in as mean a way as she could possible but then she started to get dragged rather involuntarily threw the ventilation system. "W-Where are you taking me! L-Let go!!" she then blinked a few times as he let her go. She was rather baffled for a few moments but she was not about to let an opportunity for escape pass her up and she began crawling to freedom. this had been one of the worst days every, everything was going fine till the jedi had stuck there noses into things.
 

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Darius cleared his mind, that was the easy part, his first obstacle was lifting the deceiving shroud over the building, without this the Jedi in the area would not even know they were in danger. Pushing through the darkness, Darius was able to pull apart and lift the dark energy in the area,The Jedi were sure to feel the dark Jedi's presence now.

Darius Opened his eyes, clearly some things had transpired since he had gone into his trance, The Dark Jedi had ignited one of his lightsabers, which was now loudly cracking from lighting originating from dark force energy, This did not shake Darius, he calmly put his hand on Nero's shoulder, "Patience."


"It was foolish for you to come here today, Not a mistake i would expect from a Dark lord... they may not have told you this but there are only two kinds of Dark force users, Those that embody power...And those that crave it. Which one are you?"
Darius ignited his Lightsaber, the yellow blade reflected of his eye shine, giving Darius wild look. Darius took his fighting stance, in a deep crouch with his saber extended over his head he waited for the fight to begin.


"When I tell you to drop....drop," Darius spoke silently in Nero's mind, hm being one of the few people he trusted that was not a Jedi Knight, Darius was honored to fight by his side again. "leave here now, you have failed your master again, there is no need for spilling of blood<,wheather you kill us or not you still have been denied your prize, A great fear of failure clouds your vision, we will only do what we must..."
 

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Darius's comment had struck home with Desmond. He was a man who craved power. His master had told him that several times. This comment enraged Desmond, but he would not let it show. He simply shrugged at the question and replied

" A little bit of both, and I have not failed...no not at all, not until I, or the girl dies, then I will fail "

Desmond narrows his eyes, he examines the two. Nero seems to be more rash of a jedi than Darius. Desmond could tell he would not break easily though. Desmond felt Darius clearing his mind, and the surrounding area. This wasn't good. Dracus quickly began to release darkside energy, using a slight force horror to dull the jedi's senses. Desmond also decided to do what he did best, drive his opponent mad.

Nero was up first. He began to see his father. His father stood a few feet to the side of Desmond and he glared at his son. Shaking his head scornfully as he said

such a disappointment, you'd be doing the family a favor by killing this jedi scum...you'd also save him the trouble of seeing how the corrupt republic is using him...

Darius began to see things, that his techniques could not even block out. His sister appeared to him, she was in pain. She whimpers as she slowly bleeds to death in front of him. Before she goes she only manages to say one thing

" Republic Soldiers did this to me "

As Darius and Nero are seeing these images, Desmond is slipping away. He masks his visibility and leaves a fake image of himself were he stood. He covers his force readings, and descends down the lifts as the two are caught up with the illusions. He finds Geeva is gone, and sees no one besides Franky. He walks up to him, and as he does he morphs his appearance to immitate Darius.

" Where is the girl "
 

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Nero began to hallucinate moments after Darius had activated his own lightsaber. Images of his parents, mostly his father, appeared in his mind like an old documentary film. However, he was still conscious of their opponent. He shook his head and looked about. Desmond was still standing there with that wicked smile on his face.

"Well then, shall we?"
he asked with a short growl, and, taking a step forward, swung his lightsaber swiftly across Desmond's chest. But the dark Jedi disappeared, almost like a ghost.
 

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((sorry it took me so long to post :x ))

Geeva quickly made her way threw the ventilation system, it probably being way to familier then it should be to a girl as young as she was. She was breathing heavily, having been moving rather quickly to escape as quickly as possible. She soon found the grate she was looking for and kicked it several times, each kick loosening it more and more before it finally came loose, allowing her freedom. She crawled into the street and quickly began to flee into the streets, hoping to lose anyone who wanted to pursue her.
 

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Darius watched as his sister whimpered as she bleed out, a small grin could be seen as Darius waved his lightsaber in front of him, "Clearly you don't know my sister," Darius grinned as he joined Nero at his side, "well that was fun while it lasted, let us contain him before he does something stupid, his fear has gripped him now."


Darius ran out to find himself talking to one of the prisoners, closing his eyes he released a shock wave of force energy directly at the two of them, Darius flipped off the plat from landing on same level of the dark Jedi, "Very impolite to invade a persons mind, perhaps I schould teach you some manners." Darius reached into the Jedi's mind, and then began to create a ear splitting screech, it was he sound of all the voices Darius heard on a regular basis combined, Darius then used the force to push the prisoner back, he did not want the man to catch a stray saber, or bolt of dark lightning.


Darius circled his opponent, protecting the prisoner and the escape route of Geeva, "you waste your time, your tricks will do you no good." Darius fell into a low stance swinging his lightsaber, preparing himself for the coming battle. It was clear that his opponent was not going to back down, "I will say no more," Darius sighed as he waited to be joined by Nero.
 

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Nero, having caught up with Darius, slowly crept to his friend's right side to cover him. Maybe if they attacked and defended in turns they could have a better chance of fighting off both of Desmond's lightsabers.
"..."
 

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((Guys, Franky was already up the lifts... and downstairs there is a bunch of stunned inmates.))
As Franky tried to circumvent the Jedi by using side passages, he cursed as he was approached by one of them and asked where the girl went. Something didn't feel right, this was fishy. This Jedi was the one that helped her escape, why would he ask for where she went? It was some Jedi trick, no doubt.

"I aint got no ide-" was all the brute got out before being thrown sideways from a force push. Slamming against the wall, Franky grunted and fell to the floor, momentarily winded.

He after a moment, he looked up to see the Jedi squaring off again. Having the sense not to stick around when lightsabers are swinging, he got to his feet and ran down a side hallway, toward the evidence room.
 
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