Narz Jenji tatooines resident droid king

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NAME: Narz Jenji tatooine's resident droid king
SPECIES: Twi’lek
AGE: 41
GENDER:male
HEIGHT: 6’5”
WEIGHT:165 lbs
EYES: Brown
SKIN: yellow
CREDITS: 1,000
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: a cybernetic right eye with a glowing red pupil cybernetic arms and legs modeled after general grievous
FORCE SENSITIVE: yes but he doesn't know
STRENGTH: 3/10
DEXTERITY: 2/10
CONSTITUTION: 9/10
INTELLIGENCE: 7/10
WISDOM: 1/10
CHARISMA 3/10
PERSONALITY:Reclusive and distrusting of humans to the point that any unauthorized ones found near his home are killed. he spends his time in his home in the middle of the dune sea. sending his droids on various mercenary, bounty hunting and scavenging missions throughout the galaxy.he has a fascination with clone war era droids so much so that most that haven't been turned to scrap, which isn't very many, are in his hands. he is known for angering potential killers with his many android replicas of himself he sends whenever they want to see him in person. Anyone he sees mistreating a droid is never heard from again.

BIOGRAPHY:Starting his life as a poor boy. his mother was kidnapped ,and most likely sold into slavery, when he was 3, so his father was forced to steal so they could have something to eat. at the age of 7 enough people had complained for the imperium to gun down his father in front of Narz’s face ,but one of their blaster shots missed and shattered a glass cup and a shard landed in his right eye ,so he was left to fend for himself half blind and living in an alley. one day 5 years later he was returning to his alley after scoring a veeji fruit and he met a defective red protocol droid missing his legs in his ally he learned his name was C-v7e ,and on that day he realized this droid had been nicer to him than any organics had ever been. 5 years later he heard rumours of an old clone war era droid factory buried deep in the dune sea. he decided to head out with ceevee ,who he had repaired long ago with a stolen repair book, and a newly bought scavenger droid. 3 years later, after constant trips back and forth and some mercenary work on the side, he found it filled with battle droids still in working condition to his surprise most of the equipment used to build them was still operational, and he found a old holotape of someone named general grievous talking to a battle droid and decided to keep it until he knew what to do with something like this. several years later one of his scavenger teams were on a planet called Serenno where the found some holotapes by a man named san hill about a Kaleesh General named Sheelal and his transformation into general grievous ,and after another look at his holotape he noticed vaguely organic looking eyes and realized that if they could save someone as close to death as he was with robotic parts then he could become something even greater while in good health, and after several years of sending his droids out on mercenary and bounty hunting missions and finding any information they can about the whereabouts of grievous's armor pieces, and and as he bought newer droid models to assist in the search. he became a local legend the townspeople hated him and abused droids from all over tatooine came to live in his droid safehaven. a year ago one of his scavenger parties found the A.I of a old republic era living in the computer of a abandoned tie fighter on mustafar. after his scavenger team patched him in the A.I introduced himself as HK-50 calling Narz his new master. after the scavenger team returned with the ship, the A.i told him his he was a assassin ,and narz decided to put his A.i in a old ig unit. after asking the droid why he kept calling him meatbag, he learned the droids memory unit was malfunctioning and the only way to recover it was to preform assassinations similar to ones he had done a long time ago and so hk became the head of many bounty hunting missions. to this day Narz waits for this to have any resaults.
FORCE POWERS:None
SKILLS:Mechanics,repair
LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:None
STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:Speaks every droid language there is,
Trust no organics
GEAR:A control panel on one of his gloves for general maintenance around the factory includes a commlink and a video screen and microphone for controlling his replicas
The holotape of general grievous
SHIP: A C-9979 landing craft and a droid fighter
DROIDS:Too many to list but most notably his trusty companion C-v7e a clone war era tactical droid and one of general grievous’s personal guard specifically meant to kill Jedi (not that Narz knows that)
BOUNTIES COLLECTED:Many before the rp started
GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES:
ROLE-PLAYS:
 
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Hiya pal.

There's quite a few things wrong about your profile.

First off, you seem to have a lack of usage of grammar on any form, I mean, your entire history is one giant run on sentence. It's very difficult to follow.

Typically stats are written in a #/10 format, followed by an explanation if the writer so wishes to have one. But I'm not sure if that's required.

And something more important, HK-47 is a character that a lot of people are familiar with. I don't believe that it's allowed to use a character that appeared in KOTOR like that. It's in pretty bad taste to do it as well. You can have an Assassin droid, that's fine. It's the fact that he's an already very well known character.
 

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Heyo! First off welcome to the site!

So a couple of things. What kind of ships are the droid carriers? Starting out with 5 ships is more than is usually allowed. Probably cut that down to 2. Also you're going to have to take out the part about finding pieces of Grievous's armor/body unless you can get an admin to post here saying that that is acceptable. Also as a side note, if he is "Reclusive and distrusting of humans to the point that any unauthorized ones found near his home are killed" that doesn't strike me as very charismatic (a stat that is listed as 8/10). Just something to consider on that one.

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I never said I found any of his body parts just that I was looking for them.and sense the droid fighters are self piloting do they count as a ship or a droid
 
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An army of countless droids including at least one capable of beating a Jedi is, dare I say it, completely ridiculous. I suggest reading over profiles of other players on the site and get a sense of how far you can go in terms of droid armies and ships.
 

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I echo what the others have said here. The character has a lot of potential, however with five ships and an army of 'countless droids' under his/her/its command - I would be unable to allow them membership of the Hutt Cartel, as the Character would be against the rules, which can be found here.

I know that the rules officially do not directly state that you cannot have an army of Droids, however you are not allowed to have them - as that would make you an Indie Faction in your own right.

I would suggest that when you make a Character, it is best for you to think 'What if everyone did this?'.

Thinking about it, if every character had 5 ships, and a Droid Army - that contained so many Droids he couldn't count them - the site would be a very difficult and odd place! :) I would suggest cutting it down to one Droid, and keeping the ships to freighter size (and only having one or two of them, aka: A fighter and a cargo ship).
 

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I echo what the others have said here. The character has a lot of potential, however with five ships and an army of 'countless droids' under his/her/its command - I would be unable to allow them membership of the Hutt Cartel, as the Character would be against the rules, which can be found here.

I know that the rules officially do not directly state that you cannot have an army of Droids, however you are not allowed to have them - as that would make you an Indie Faction in your own right.

I would suggest that when you make a Character, it is best for you to think 'What if everyone did this?'.

Thinking about it, if every character had 5 ships, and a Droid Army - that contained so many Droids he couldn't count them - the site would be a very difficult and odd place! :) I would suggest cutting it down to one Droid, and keeping the ships to freighter size (and only having one or two of them, aka: A fighter and a cargo ship).
Wel im down to two ships now, But if I narrow it down to one droid then i m no longer the droid king! If I go independent can I still go bounty hunting and do mercenary work?
 

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Thing is, starting out as the Droid king isn't really allowed. You can try and start an indie faction - or you can table the droid domination plans, and focus on you character in their own right, without the Droids :)
 

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You found the droid factory, but aside from the tools necessary to fix eevee there's nothing in it of any use. Countless scavengers have beaten you to it. I don't think you can demand much more than that, especially since it's your first character on the site.

You'll be the self-styled King of Droids, but no one has to acknowledge it. You can do certain bounties in the Hutt Cartel forum as an independent, but you'll keep running into problems if you don't let go of the army.
 

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Thing is, starting out as the Droid king isn't really allowed. You can try and start an indie faction - or you can table the droid domination plans, and focus on you character in their own right, without the Droids :)
What if I get rid of all my combat droids except for hk50 and keep the rest,and if I can do that does a tactics droid count as a combat droid?
 
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