Jedi Order Nax-el Vashee

[Naxel]

Nax-el Vashee​

BIOGRAPHY​

NAME: Nax-el Vashee
AGE: 12
SPECIES: Togruta

FACTION: Jedi Order
RANK: Padawan

HEIGHT: 5’2
WEIGHT: 102
HAIR COLOR: Blue and White
EYE COLOR: Blue

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On the Togrutan home world of Shili was a young boy with the name of Nax-el Vashee. He was raised by his father, who was a business man, and mother, whom was the caretaker of the young child. During his toddlers years Naxel was always by his mothers side with all of her day to day errands. The woman, Avan-a Vashee, cared and spoiled the young Naxel by giving him almost everything he wanted. She would always get him his favorite fruit every day that the two would go to the market and, every now and then, a toy from a local pawn keeper. Even though his father, Sheek vashee, was a business man they were never a rich family. They were a humble and very kind family who would always do their best to help anyone they could. Though, at times when Nax-el wasn’t with his mother he would play very close to their residence with a couple of neighborhood friends. If it wasn’t his mother, one of the other mothers would watch over them as they played. These three young kids would usually be together away from their mothers and became great friends. Even though they were at the age of a toddler where they could just walk. Until the day of chaos hit the town in which the Vashee family lived.

It was another normal day in the local hometown where Nax-el lived. His mother had left him with is two friends and one of their mothers. The three were running around with one another playing tag, and Nax-el had just became it to try and tag one of his friends. He wasn’t as fast as the other two, but to his surprise something weird to him happened. The other two kept running faster and faster around him to where he could not get them. Nax-el started to get dizzy and suddenly fell. When he got up his head was spinning to where everything around him was all over the place. He had lifted his arms to place them on his head when his body suddenly tensed releasing a small burst of power from his body. Both of his friends fell to the ground, and Nax-el started to become undizzy. Both of his friends were confused while Naxel saw that both of them were on the ground. Running over to them, he tapped both of them and yelled out “Your it!”. Laughter started to fly out of Nax-els’ little mouth in the accomplishment that he felt. The boy were impressed, and a little scared, by what had just happened. It was odd, but as young as the three were they didn’t give what happened another thought due to how young they were. Then, out in the distance, Avan-a was running back towards Nax-el and friends screaming in fear. She grabbed Nax-el along with tell the other mother to go home. The young boy didn’t have a clue as to what was going on, but just held his mother as tight as he could. Avan-a would then take herself and Nax-el back home to hide in their bedroom. Fear started to grow in Nax-el as he continued to watch his mother stay scared.

A little while had passed before the front door was opened and came in Sheek, Nax-el‘s father. He was scared out of his mind while his wife tried to get answers as to what was going on. She could only get that he made a bad deal with a corrupt business that now wanted his blood. Sheek told her that this business hired bandits to destroy the town in which was what they were doing at that moment. He also said that his boss had contacted the Jedi Order to come help stop these bandits. But before they could hide go back to the bedroom and hide, the front door had opened with an evil voice following it. The bandits had found their house, and grabbed both Sheek and Avan-a dragging them out of the house. Nax-el started to cry while Avan-a was fighting her way back into the house to get her child. Sadly, before she could get back into the house she was shot in the back by one of the bandits. Nax-els’ cries began to grow louder to the point that one of the bandits grabbed his to place a hand over his mouth. The boy wound up bitting the man which led the bandit to throw nax-el to the ground. Sheek luckily was right in front of the bandit, and caught Nax-el before he could actually hit the ground. One of the bandits then pointed his gun at Nax-el telling his father if he didn’t stop crying he would be shot. Sheek tried his best to stop Nax-el from crying, but it wouldn’t work. The apparent bandit group leader grew more and more aggravated before yelling on last time. He screamed to Sheek repeating that if Nax-el didn’t shut up he would be shot. Then, out of no where, Nax-el unintentionally unleashed a burst of power from him enough to knock the bandits back from his father and him. Unknowingly, the Jedi that had be called was already on the world at this point, and happened to of watched Nax-el use the force.

Enough had been seen, and the Jedi who had come jumped in between the Vashee and the bandits. He slashed their weapons in half following with the force to push them against the exterior of the house. After such, he turned towards the Vashee family to check to see if they were okay. Sadly, one of the bandits had a blaster hidden in their boot. He would then quickly shoot his blaster towards the Jedi and Vashee hitting Sheek in the chest. The Jedi wound up turning around summoning his lighter saber as the bandit began to shoot again. As the Jedi was now paying attention he reflexed the blast back at him to finally stop him from moving. Authorities finally came to apprehend the bandit, and the Jedi picking Nax-el up from his father. Without acknowledgment, Sheek was just barley alive by the time the Jedi Had grabbed his son. With his last breath, Sheek begged the Jedi to take Nax-el and take him away from this place. He knew that if Nax-el stayed it would only cause him pain to live in a place where he knew his parents died. The Jedi kindly agreed to Sheeks’ request and took Nax-el with him away from Shili

Some years have come and gone, and Nax-el had became a youngling within the new Jedi order. Ever since coming to the Jedi temple, he trained everyday under different Masters to help him grow and understand his knowledge with the force. Until the day had come for him to finally become a Jedi Padawan. Nax-el grew excited that the time for him to gain a master has finally come. Even though the death of his parents had become a distance unknown memory to him, he knew that to whomever birthed him into this world would be very proud of what has become of him.

PERSONALITY​

PRACTICAL SKILLS​

■■■■■ Offense​	■■■■■ Defense​	■■■■■ Tracking​
■■■■■ Swordsmanship​	■■■■■ Leadership​	■■■■■ Hand-to-Hand​

EDUCATION​

■■■■■ Jedi History​	■■■■■ Jedi Combat Forms​	■■■■■ The force​
■■■■■ Tactics​	■■■■■ Politics​	■■■■■ Espionage​

Nax-el is a a humble and caring young man who always tries his best to help others every chance he gets. While growing up in the temple he was able to learn when it was time to be serious and time he could play. Whenever he was in a learning setting it was always being focused so he could do his best to learn whatever it is that he was being taught. Outside of the class room he would play with the other younglings, and at time play pranks on some of his closest friends. Though, most of his fellow students always seen him to be one that followed the teachings almost to the T. As he started to become older his mind started to venture off on its own. Since it is time that he is able to become a Padawan, his new master would be able to help him stay on the right path and continue to be a humble and caring person he has become known for

Appearance

Naxel is a slender, yet muscular, Togruta male with orange skin. Since he is Togrutan, he has two monstrals on the top of his head, and attach to the bottom of those are three lekku. Two of his lekku fall onto his shoulders, and slightly hang off on the front side of his torso while the third one hangs off directly behind his head. Being such a young age his monstrals and lekku are quite short compared to his elders. His monstrals rise about an inch and a half off the top of his head. While his lekku are around a foot and three inches in length. When it comes to the color of his head it is a blue base color with white strips going from top of the monstrals to the bottom of the lekku. At the top it is mainly blue, but as it goes down white strips appear becoming more noticeable as by the time it reaches the bottom tips of his lekku. When it comes to his face he has white markings that start from the top of his forehead, where his monstrals meet his face. Two markings come down side by side and and zig zag twice creating two diamonds in his orange skin between the markings. By the time they reach above his eyes they would then turn and come across where his eye brows would be until stopping at the corner of each eye. Also, on both his cheeks are white markings of three feather looking wings. On the left cheek the wing looking marking would face to the left, and one the right side would face the right.

When it comes to his attire he would mainly wear white shoulder pads, white gauntlets, white boots, and from time to time a white chest plate that all look like pieces from trooper armor. Under the piece would be a light grey tunic robe that would fit skin tight. His pants would be a shade darker grey, and would only show down to his knees until the white boots would start. Over all of this would be a dark brown cloak that could easily be seen to be to big for the young boy. The cloak also has a hood draping off the back, but can easily be reach if needing to cover his head.

Combat Description

When coming to the Jedi temple, he quickly grew to the teachings that were being taught. During his time learning the ways, and forms, of lightsaber combat it was almost like it came nature to him. He was easily one of the most proficient dualist in his class. On the other hand his force training wasn’t as great. Everything that the Masters taught him he would always try his best to learn them, but the force was more tricky to Nax-el than lightsaber combat. He could preform simple telekinesis to move object around and could push people back. Though he still knew he had a lot more to learn and practice in the ways of the force.

Legacy​

Equipment​

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[Malon]

Hi @Naxel,

Just a heads-up. Work-in progress characters should be posted in the Player Workshops until they are completed. Only completed profiles should be placed in the Character Boards. Secondly, you might want to pick a different surname for your character since the "Tano family" doesn't actually exist and relations to canon characters—this one clearly intended to be at least distantly related to Ahsoka—are frowned upon on the site.

 

[Naxel]

It’s finished now, and just because i used the named Tano doesn’t mean my character is a descendent of Ashoka Tano. I didn‘t state my character was any relation to Ashoka, and Shili is a huge world with possibly numerous families with the name Tano. I chose Tano because I wasn’t gonna give my character some name like Jackson or Stevenson. But i changed that also.

 

[The Good Doctor]

Link to the ship just leads to google. Can you make sure the ship leads to a ship to the tech boards? Also still references to Tano in the first paragraph that were missed.

Otherwise looks good .

Tag me when you are ready for me to look this over again.

 

[Naxel]

@fasterthanlight and the ship link was an accident. It wasn’t suppose to lead anywhere till I actually I got one cx

 

[Malon]

@fasterthanlight and the ship link was an accident. It wasn’t suppose to lead anywhere till I actually I got one cx

Then just remove it entirely. You should only list equipment you actually possess.

 

[Naxel]

Well maybe I didn’t remove it due to the fact that I don’t know how? so unless you are willing to give actual help please stay off. Thank you.

 

[Malon]

Well maybe I didn’t remove it due to the fact that I don’t know how? so unless you are willing to give actual help please stay off. Thank you.

The hostility is unneeded and rude. I am trying to help you and, hopefully, speed up the approval process for you. All you have to do is remove the link-coding:

[url=LINK]Starship[/url]

Remove the url tags surrounding "Starship" and it should make the links go away.

 

[Naxel]

I mean I would of done that but When I go to edit there isn’t a link around the starship

 

[Malon]

I just took a look at the coding on your post.

[COLOR=grey][B][URL='http://google.com']Starship[/URL][/B][/COLOR]

This is what it looks like. Remove the url tags around "Starship" and you'll be solid. @Naxel

 

[Loco]

Well maybe I didn’t remove it due to the fact that I don’t know how? so unless you are willing to give actual help please stay off. Thank you.

Then why dont you say that instead of trying to pass it off as an accident? Being honest is probably a better way to get the help you need, rather than pretending nothing is wrong and then lashing out at people trying to help with what you said the problem was.

Character profiles, along with every other subforum open to user submissions, are open to community critique and input. If you're not OK with that, then don't post here.

 

[Naxel]

Sorry for the commotion loco. Me and Malon have talked it out off site and are good now. @Loco

 

[The Good Doctor]

I'll go ahead and approve.

Still a Tano family mention in the last sentence of the first paragraph and the starship is still there. But not enough for me to hold up approval.