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AFter having basic training with his brother, Havok was left behind. His brother all but forgotten about him, achieving the rank of shaman while Havok was left with no master. "Strifee" he thought to himself, "Have you forgotten where we came from? why we are here?" His thoughts echoed in his head.

"I have not brother" another voice echoed in his head, foreign from his own, "I may have surpassed you in power and technique, but you have not been forgotten, In fact, i have organized someone to train you as i have been trained." Strife, leaning on the door behind Havok, "You will grow as i have, your strengths will compliment my own, and mine yours." Strife stood, using the force to bring havok to his feet, "After all... It was you, who saved me those many years ago."

Havok stood, thanking his brother, "It seems i have been mistaken" he transmitted apologetically.

"There is no need to apologize, nor thank me, I can't have you dying by one stronger then you are." HE turned to leave, "Meet your new teacher in the training wards, and remember what i have tried to pass down to you. I must take my leave, i need to speak with that leader here, there is business to take care of."

After Strife left, Havok made his way to the training rooms, entering the same battered one his brother trained in for months, there he waited, for the one his brother set him up to meet.
 

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Soul stood in his dorm, Wondering and passing by, His past Thoughts, his training over look, his knowledge, His Former Master, HE had to achieve, the rank of Council Member. He was a Bit discouraged, and Nerves, in training his first Student, but It was for the best. HE went outside the room of his dorm, and begun to move, His Robe around him. His face unseen. It was Like He was Death. Entering the room, he saw a student, His own. He had it He hoped it was him.

He looked around and leaned on the wall, before speaking. In the Telepathically Language.

Welcome, My Student, I have lived to see, a student of my Be..

He stopped closing the door, He was getting nerves and Nerves. He spoke yet again In telepathy.

Hello, I am your Teacher, a Shaman in the Order, I will be training you. IF you don't Mind, My first question Is First, What Field do you specialization and what are your goals, in that field, and the Life style that I will Be training you in.
 

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OOC: no offence meant to you, but the way you speak will be fun to read :D

IC: Havoc stopped, looking towards Soul, he spoke in rhymes? Havoc would figure it out later, as he couldn't base it off of one line. "My area of expertise... I wish to be a duelist. My force used for physical means, speed, strength, shielding. With this, i plan on wreaking havoc on the battlefield alongside my brother, whom you have met before, he is a shaman." Havoc spoke, yet his mouth did not move, the language of the mind was what he spoke with, he reffered to the meeting of soul and Strife, the reason Havok stood before Soul, "Shall we begin?"

OOC: you don't need to say your character transmitted every time, im able to see that he does because of the italics, just like how i use colors for mine. Just if it's easier for you. ^^
 
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OOC: English is my Secondary Language.My Main is Russian.

He eyed, his Student, So young, and so foolish, No patience what's so ever that was implanted within himself. He looked at him and Spoke in telepathy.

Patience is the Key, Young one. My Name is Soul and you are? I can teach you the basic of Lightsaber Combat, But my main field is Magic. Now I can teach you a Lot of things Magic related, as for Lightsaber Combat little. But I will do my share of studying as well. Anyways, Let's start with the basic learning Of the Technique, called Force Cloak? Shall, we. I will explain simply, Maybe my translation of this technique will not help but it is quite useful if your going for a Battle Master. Focus on the force around, Simply, and noticeable, Take it in within your body, And simply Disappear the main complicit behind this, Is rather simply make sure you are focused at all time, this technique will drain you heavily the first time you use it, With practice it will not.

He simply after saying that disappeared, out of no where, he was still sense able he was just no where to be found, and then he reappeared on the same spot.

Try it?
 

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OOC: i could tell you aren't very familiar with english yet, dont worry about it, your doing fine lol. i'm good at reading things like that, being the majority of my family is filipino, who's english is VERY broken lol

IC: Havoc nodded, this may be for the best, as his training wit the blade on his own gave him enough experience to hold his own in lightsaber combat. "My title is Havok, for it is what i cause. And patience is not one of my stronger points. I have some control of the force around me, thanks to the aid of my brother"

Havok used the technique his brother taught him, and started to breath slowly, sitting down. With each inhale, he collected his energies, and as he exhaled, he shrouded him self with more and more energy. His image started to become translucent, the image of himself flickering from in and out of sight, until it disappeared all together.

Havok was gone, though only for a few moments, Soul did not lie that it would be draining, as he breathed in deep, trying to collect himself once more, disappearing again.
 

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Soul eyed him, looking carefully He had Disappeared but Soul, was still be able to sense his presents, And pinpoint where he was. Looked carefully and spoke.

Student, I will teach you patience before you get promoted, Although you are inviolable, You can still be sensed, by other force users, As for None force users, They will not spot you. So the next thing I am Teaching, a very difficult Force technique. Force Complication this Takes a Load of Focus, and Connection to Pull off, advance and strong users of the Force, Can Pull off a Combo using Force Cloak, To be gone, Force Compunction, To not be able to been sensed by other force users, And be complication gone, Is great to stalk The prey then attack, for a killing blow, Also once you get to higher levels you can mange to pull both Cloak, and this technique off together, as well as a Deadly Strike with the force, and Hide your arrangement from others... I want you sit, down and Mediation. For an Hour or so, Then make sure your mind is blank clear, and Focus, In trying to Hide your Force, I would be able to see you, But I won't know that your a force user or not, well I could If I have studied in the art of that Technique, and was More adapt in It I may.
 

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"I see... So when hunting other force users, this technique can be useless, as well as to the blind..." Havoc sat silently, meditating,clearing his mind. He sat there, only feeling what was around him, the beating of his heart, the calm breaths he takes, the silent breathing of Soul even souls own heartbeat, all known to Havoc. time seemed to pas very quickly, though the silent could be considering as maddening. Havoc was use to his own thoughts, or the ones of others preoccupying his mind. Now, there was nothing. But he needed to focus, dim down the energies he released, slow the currents. Slowly, very very slowly, Havoks presence died down, until it vanished all together.
This technique was difficult, to say the least, the sheer willpower needed to suppress his own power was astonishing, though, for now, the technique held.
 

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Soul looked at him and gave a nodded. Before speaking.

Carefully, Student, don't stress yourself to much, Or you will lose focus, Relax, I can feel, that your growing tired, But besides we have a life time to train, Anyways, As I was saying, relax and grab a come of water, Before you will repeat the same process once you have, Rested. And regained energy.

The Technique was not simple, And it wouldn't take a day or a year's worth to Master this, It'll take him a while, But everyone Learns differently. Soul Thought.
 

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Havok released it, nothing he has been through ever drained him before, which was saying a lot considering his past, "Very well," He said standing, exiting the room, only to come back a few minutes later. Havoc cracked his neck before sitting down once more, performing the same ritual as he did before. This time around, his energy disappeared much quicker then before. He seemed to have less difficulty with it, but it was still draining.

Still, Havok would hold it for as long as he could, concentrating harder then he ever needed to before. If he were to falter, Havok would fix the mistake using willpower alone. HE felt physically weakened, yet persisted on.
 

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Soul shook his head, before speaking in telepathy.

Your doing it wrong, your thinking to much, this technique will not be easy. To Master for Both Master and Padawans alike, or Yourself, and Myself. Some techniques are easy to pick p and Master easily, This one is not, It will take you Day and Night without food or water, Without dieing to master it in a year's worth of time, Seeing as you do not have a year's worth of time, to practice, without your body needing water to live, Let me make it easy, First Step relax, self, Think of nothing, When I mean nothing your mind is blank, second step. Release the force, around you. Third step, Focus at all time while doing Step one and Two, Step fourth for yourself is hopefully Seleucus. Try it, if it will take one hour or day to do the first step so be it.

He said slowly, Waiting patiently.
 

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Havok continued with this for a few days, each attempt slightly better then the last. Three days after he met his trainer, he walked into the room, his presence of being a force user completely gone, as if he never had it in the first place. "It seems i understand what you meant, though it took me much longer then i expected it to." HE flared his energy, before masking it once more, showing he had gained control over it, with very little fatigue.

"Now... what's next?" he asked, ready to learn more.
 
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