Orto Plutonia

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  • Name: Orto Plutonia
  • Coordinates: P-19
  • Hyperlane: N/A
  • Terrain: An icy wasteland with Tors and canyons
  • Rotation: There's no day and night cycle its only night.
  • Inhabitants: Talz is the species that inhabits the planet. None of them are scientist (just a dominant tribe).
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  • Resources: There are no resources on this planet.
  • Government: There's not much of a real government besides a dictatorship.
  • Culture: The Talz people don't have much a tradition.
  • Technology: The inhabitants aren't that advanced they only use narglatches.
  • Satellites: The Panatora is there moon.
  • History: Orto Plutonia had long been a protectorate of the nearby Pantoran moon, after Pantoran scouts searched the world and declared it uninhabited. They had missed the Talz population, which lived in the ice canyons in villages carved out of the ice walls, filled with huts made from animal skins pulled over bone-frames. The Talz lived a simple existence, somehow subsisting off the harsh environment, and using the native narglatch cats as mounts and protection. It is unknown how or why that Talz clan colonized the planet; Talz of Orto Plutonia were more aggressive and war-like than other members of their species who belonged to the galactic community. After the republic fell most of the Talz people fell into rage and began taking an aggressive perspective of the sith and decied to let little to no Sith or Madnolorians on both of there planets.
  • Intent: For my indie faction I'm making and I actually want a base on a snow planet and Orto was one of my favorite planets in the clone wars series. Plus snow planets are awesome and the alien species on this planet is in SWTOR and there awesome. In the Rp aspect this opens up new possibilities meaning be able to have a base on the planet or being a Talz chief yourself.
 
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Does this add anything to the planet, or is it just stuff already established?
 

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Mostly stuff already established I wasn't sure if I should have added the Talz history (them coming from Alzoc III and establishing a base.)

I'm also gonna do a Talz alien species later on.
 

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Mostly stuff already established I wasn't sure if I should have added the Talz history (them coming from Alzoc III and establishing a base.)

I'm also gonna do a Talz alien species later on.

You don't have to do writeups for already canon planets and species unles you're going to expand on them.
 

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Adding new information to enhance the planet or otherwise bring it in line with the timeline. Like, you dont have to do a writeup for the Talz unless you're going to add a lot about their culture and history and stuff. Same with the planet.
 

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I honestly don't think this planet needs an on-site profile unless there is a significant expansion to the planet's lore. You've expanded it in some places, but its still essentially the same place. My suggestion would be just to use the planet as your Indie Faction's base and only make the profile once you've fleshed out the additional lore a bit.
 
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