Quentell Xall

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Quentell Xall
A Knight Of The Shade Order

COMPOSITION AND APPEARANCE:
Quentell is a human male of about 1.77m high. He has dirty blonde hair and a pair of brown eyes. He is slender and his posture isn’t intimidating at all. On first sight, he doesn’t even look dangerous. However, he is much and much more than meets the eye.
While training his students and while spending time at the enclave, Quentell wears his traditional Shade Order robes. When he is out adventuring or on a mission he is most likely to wear his ‘mercenary’ clothing. He has different sets of these ‘mercenary’ clothes, and he wears them so he looks like a mercenary instead of a Force-User. He never wants to draw too much attention. It might happen sometimes that he wears a hooded robe though.

PERSONALITY:
Quentell used to be depressed and down when he was on the Dark Side. He hated everything and everyone and couldn’t stand the way he lived. He wanted it to end.
Then he arrived at the Shade Order.
He became a friendly person, a strong warrior and a wise thinker. He learned more and more and he finally left the depression behind.
Quentell enjoys a good laugh and he is friendly. He likes his live and he knows he has a purpose.
If he gets angry he can be very dangerous. He unleashes a burst of lightning or uses his Force Crush powers to harm or even kill those who he has to fight. He can control it, though. He can keep himself calm and avoid battles and unnecessary bloodshed. When there is absolutely no other way out he will use his anger and darkness to empower himself and he will use it in battle, to overcome his enemies.

LIKES AND DISLIKES:
There is a lot that he likes and even more he dislikes. He dislikes hypocrite politicians and he dislikes outlaws. He doesn’t like it when people shout orders at him and he hates it when people treat him like he is nothing.
He likes traveling and adventuring and he enjoys training new Padawans. He has great interest in the Force and he studies it, even now he is a Knight. He likes lightsabers and the way they are build and work. He also likes spacetraveling, for it is such an excitement.

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
Quentell is an adept in the lightsaber form: Form V: Shien/Djem So. He is a talented swordsman and he is very good with Force Powers. He combines his lightsaber and his Force Powers in battle and this makes him a tough opponent. He knows when to engage an enemy and he knows when to run or surrender. He thinks there is no shame in surrendering, however, betrayal is very shameful indeed.
He also can handle ranged weapons amazingly well, and when on missions, he often carries his trusted Blaster Pistol with him. He usually first draws his pistol before drawing his lightsaber, though his saber is his preferred weapon.

PADAWANS:
-Quentell has completed the training of his first padawan: Garev Uluc.
-Quentell has completed the training of his second padawan: Valek Dagger.
-Quentell has completed the training of his third padawan: Sithis Monomyth.
-Quentell has completed the training of his fourth padawan: Raiden KasMelan.
-Quentell is currently training no-one.

GEAR:
-Comlink
-Datapad
-Blaster Pistol
-Lightsaber (silver)

FORCE POWERS:
-Telekinesis
-Force Push
-Force Pull
-Force Leap
-Force Crush
-Force Speed
-Force Lightning
-Force Drain
-Force Rage
-Force Sense
-Mindtrick
-Force Heal
-Force Absorb
-Force Protection
-Force Telepathy
-Tapas
-Saber Throw

SABER FORMS:
-Form Zero
-Form V: Shien/Djem So


HISTORY


~Origins~

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Once a kid like any other,
Found by a Jedi, and taken from the father and mother...
The Force is strong in this young idividual,
It's time to enter a world so cruel...

Born to Maxil Xall and Rosannè Xall on Gyndine in the capital city Yractos. Maxil was the owner of a cantina and Rosannè was a teacher at the local school. She taught Galactic Basic Standard, the most-used language throughout the galaxy.
Quentell was a boy like any other. He enjoyed the stories his father told him almost every evening, stories about bold adventurers who had visited his cantina. He played with his friends and he lived a normal life. Until he was discovered.

A Jedi visited Yractos for business that concerned only him, and he, somehow, sensed a strong Force Presence nearby. He searched and finally found the then nine years old Quentell Xall. After a very long discussion with the parents, Quentell was taken by the Jedi to the Jedi Order to be trained in the Ways of the Force.


~Jedi Padawan~

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Quentell as a young padawan.

A master was assigned to Quentell soon after the young boy joined the Jedi. His master was Jacob Spiren, a bold Jedi Knight always looking for adventure, and thus he took his padawan on many adventures and missions.

In the beginning Xall was a very eager student. He listened to his master’s teachings and never questioned his master’s words. He believed that his master was always right and that he knew what was best for the both of them.

On a certain day, Quentell had reached age nineteen and neared completion of his training, Spiren and his padawan embarked on a mission to a Rogue world, far away from Ossus. Spiren had sensed a disturbance in the Force coming from there, and without asking for permission over at the high council, he went there together with his apprentice. Typically Spiren.
Upon arrival they were welcomed by an older man, of the Human species. He had a grey beard but a bald head. He greeted the two Jedi warmly but Spiren doubted that this man could be trusted. He did not know that anyone lived on the Rogue world they were on.

The man invited them to stay in his cottage and at first Spiren declined but Quentell thought it was better to accept the offer. In the end Spiren agreed and the Jedi stayed with the old man for a few days.
The old man spoke to Quentell a lot, something that Spiren did not like to see. Something was wrong with this man and it seemed he was playing with Quentell’s mind.


~Fall To The Dark Side~

It was soon discovered that this strange hermit was what caused the disturbance Spiren felt. The hermit was a Dark Jedi and he had been pulling Quentell towards the Dark Side of the Force. This Dark Jedi hermit had set the padawan up against his master and Spiren was forced to defend himself against his own student. Quentell was driven by the Dark Side, and he was blinded. He only fell because the hermit had managed to make him believe that the Dark Side was the ultimate power. The hermit was good with words and with a strong Force Persuasion, Quentell was turned.

Master and apprentice dueled and finally, Spiren struck down his apprentice. After Quentell was stricken down to the ground the hermit appeared and he cast a strong and deadly wave of lighting at Spiren, and the good Jedi Knight was forced to flee, for this hermit seemed to be twice as powerful as Spiren was. He fled back to the Order, telling the masters his padawan had died on a dangerous mission.

Then the hermit continued to teach Quentell the ways of the Dark Side of the Force. Quentell had to call him The Elder and the two soon set off for Duro where they visited a tainted tomb. Here they meditated and Quentell found his inner Darkness. He felt the power and to succumb to it, he felt he had to strike down The Elder in cold blood. He activated his green lightsaber and killed off his former master.
After the kill in cold blood he collapsed and when he woke up hours later he realized what had happened. He was not a Dark Side follower, he was Quentell Xall. A Jedi. He fled from the tomb and collapsed from exhaustion in the woods. He then was found by a small party of hunters who took him to a nearby settlement where Quentell was treated in the medical bay.


~The Shade Order~

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Knight Xall adventuring.

Figuring a return to the Jedi Order was impossible, Quentell was alone. He wandered through the galaxy for months, during the time he was depressed and weakened, until he discovered a new Order. It was the Shade Order.
There he was taken in and he was trained by Master Aleyn Julius.

The training with Master Julius changed him and he found his place. He felt like he had found a home and now he is not depressed anymore. He has become a wise and strong Knight. A powerful Force-User and a powerful Warrior.

Now he stands on the doorstep of an endless galaxy, armed with his loyal companions; his lightsaber, his blaster and the Force.
Quentell is ready for everything.

“I walk the Shaded Path.”
~Knight Quentell Xall, member of the Shade Order


ROLE-PLAYS:

The Beginning:
Quentell's Shade Training [Trained by Aleyn Julius]

Training RPs:
A Formal Tradition Training (Shade Training of Garev Uluc)
Finding Your Place. (Valek Dagger's Shade Training)
Sithis Monomyth's Shade Training
Into The Shadows (The Training Of Raiden KasMelan) (In Progress)

Adventures & Missions:
Sweet Poison
Letting Fate do its Work
A Dangerous Hunt
A Chance Encounter
Attempt at Recruiting
Cruising through the Black Market
A New Shade's Mission
Getting Answers
Shades, Criminals, Soldiers, Droids
Just watch them.. They're beautiful..
 
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Trakon

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Sorry, but no one can be brought back to life. Don't use the crappy comic book series as a excuse okay.

I suggest you talk to the admins if you want it to turn out the way it is.
 

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I just editted my character. Is it good now?
 

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Expanded on pretty much...

everything.
 

Phil

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Just got done reading this. I like this profile, it was a good read.
 

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Thanks, Phil ^^

Quentell is my favorite character at the moment, and I always felt that his profile was incomplete, so I expanded it and rewrote a few things. I'm satisfied with the result and I'm glad you like it.
 

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You've come a long way since you started here.

Congrats. =)
 

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Thank you very much, Storm!:D

I have indeed learned a lot about writing profiles and I have become a better roleplayer since I joined this site.
 
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