Skinwolf II

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YV-560_light_freighter

  1. Skinwolf II


AFFILIATION
Open Market (After Market Upgrades)

MANUFACTURER
Corellian Engineering Corporation

CLASS
Light Freighter

ROLE
Exploration, Bounties, Smuggling/Transport (People and/or Materials), Planet Survey, Recon

COMPOSITION
Trimantium and Glasteel

DIMENSIONS
30.1 meter length and a 22.4 meter saucer diameter

CREW
2 or 1 w/ Smart AI

PASSENGER CAPACITY
5 Passengers + 3 Prisoners (Holding Cells)

CARGO CAPACITY
40 Metric Tons + 8 Months of Food Supply Storage
(38 Tons Effective Use due to holding cells taking some space)

HANGAR CAPACITY
No Hangar, but has a docking port beneath the cockpit to support a single small Starfighter

CONSUMABLES
8 Months

SPEED/MANEUVERABILITY
70 MGLT/ Average Maneuverability

ARMAMENT

  • Dorsal Mounted Twin laser cannon Turret, requires Gunner to shoot omni-directionally, otherwise shoots forward.
  • Retro fitted with missile-pods that are located under each wing; port and starboard. (8 missiles total)
  • Remote access to Docked Starfighter's armament

EQUIPMENT
  • 1 escape pod on both port and starboard sides (2 Total)
  • Long range sensor capabilities – including surveying planets from orbit
  • Powerful onboard scientific computer – With an updated operating system w/ added functionalities including Smart A.I.
  • OLLIE (Operative Linguistic Liberated Intelligence Entity) - Smart A.I. Integrated into onboard computer (Navi-Computing, active virus/hack scanning/subverting, auto completes ship logs, maintains complete database of people/aliens/planets/flora/fauna/etc. encountered, Linguistics/Translation, active diagnostics, biometric scanning, tactical planning/logistics, concierge services, dynamic area/city mapping within sensory range, auto-pilot, hologram/video/audio system/services, Droid capable)
  • Active cabin air filtration (allergens, poisons, biological contaminants)
  • Integrated isolation/quarantine options for all areas of ship
  • Some cargo space has been retrofitted for holding cells
  • Hidden floor-board & ceiling compartments
  • Under Cockpit (centerline) dock for a small Stunt Fighter
  • Small Stunt Fighter - Flashfire(Write-UP/Link Incoming!)
  • Class 2 Hyperdrive
  • Backup Class 10 Hyperdrive
  • Ray & Particle Shielding
  • Electronic counter measures for various defenses (including missile defense)
  • 3 Holding cells with a single bunk (possible to double capacity with 2 per cell; not ideal)


DESCRIPTION
A Corellian diametrally designed saucer. Having been armor plated with Trimantium, the ship has a green gray hull. Having been used as a family ship in the past, it has all the comforts of home. This ship has been a reliable space navigator for well over a decade. The ship is reasonably pliant; meaning aftermarket upgrades are relatively easy to install and fairly inexpensive to purchase and have installed. This ship is based on the YV-560 in design and capabilities, and its main function was for general freight in dangerous territories. The Skinwolf II has been physically updated and upgraded from it's original design to allow the ship to be used for other operations including smuggling and bounty hunting. Additionally the on-ship computer has been upgraded to that of a conversational smart A.I. (O.L.L.I.E.). The cockpit has 2 seats for Pilot & Co-Pilot with standing room for no more than about 3-4 persons. Upon entering the ship via the boarding ramp, you enter a circular hall way that makes its way around the entirety of the ship. Additionally, there is a cheater hallway that runs from the bow of he ship behind the cockpit to the stern and connects to the circular hallway on the other side of the ship. this cheater hallway allows access to the dorsal mounted turret's gunner station. The area of the circular hallway directly behind the cockpit is where the access port is for the externally docked starfighter. Rooms include Master Suite w/ personal shower & elimination suite, office table w/ holo-deck & padded office chair, Bunk room w/ personal storage lockers (bedding is complete with sleep mats, pillows, blankets, and earplugs), showers + elimination suite (soaps,shampoos,conditioners have Sapir Tea Extract for an aroma-therapeutic experience), Full Kitchen/pantry with bar/padded barstools + Dining Table w/ padded chairs, Theater/Hangout room with couches, pillows, blankets, & sack-chairs, Conference room with centered holo-table tall enough to stand at, Laundry room/Cleaning supply closet, Meditation chambers w/ sound dampening walls + soft white noise generator.

LEGALITY
Perfectly legal to own and fly with normal licensure.

INTENT
I am making this ship, as Lux is in need of a home, a place to call his own. His people have been looking for their home among the stars for an indeterminable amount of time, and no end appears to be in sight. A place to call home is one of the simple things that everyone needs to live a healthy lifestyle, especially so for Lux as his lifestyle takes him across the galaxy and having this slice of home with him wherever he goes gives him the stability he needs to cope with hardships of life.
Character sheet for Lux Tenebris

ADVANCED TECH
NO


 

Darasuum

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image isn't working...maybe that's cuz i'm at work


The formatting is a little...off for my tastes
if you make the stuff under the "Role" category go underneath one another it doesn't push it over towards the left and keeps it aligned to the right.

Example:

you could have it go out like this but it will continue to extend

Or

you could
have it go out
like this and
then it doesn't
extend too far
to the left


but that's just a little but for formatting for you ;-)


8 months is a long amount of consumables. Check other light freighter for reference but that just seems really high in my opinion.
You also don't need it both in the Cargo section and the Consumables section
It's redundant to include the passenger info in the cargo capacity as well.

That's a lot of armament for a light freighter especially with everything else it has. There is A LOT of tech and doo dads on this thing even for something that is Advanced Tech. You should probably cut that at least in half before seeing what else is left considering it's listed as non-advanced tech.

My advice, take a look at how limited the "basic" tech of the other submissions first and even other Advanced tech and see how well it compares to your writeup now.

This should definitly be in Unapproved tech and not Generic Tech. Because of that I'm going to link the technology rules here and seperate from that are the Generic Tech Guidelines.
 

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Archived. This does not in any way conform to the generitech guidelines, and some of the equipment are things that are very clearly way out of line for tech of this era. Please read the stickies before you post here.
 
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