The Final Curtain (Jedi Order)

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1. What is going to happen in your plot?

With the collapse of the Jedi Order certain, Bruce & Fennex undertake their final acts of being a Jedi. With the final order issued, to take a cell of Jedi and go into hiding, Bruce & Fennex gather there personal knowledge and artifacts to prepare to scatter for future generations to find. Further the scattering, Bruce follows up on a lead to a new system and begins to settle down before creating his own holocron.

Fennex, on the other hand parts ways from his Jedi Brother and carries out a final adventure that is near and dear to his heart before taking time to craft his own, unique take on a holocron.

In the process they'll meet up with Marina and Ralaa who are willing to help them out before going their own ways.

2. What other players will be a part of this?

Mainly TBD but suspect @Zigara @Nightfall096 @MatureContentWarningx @Loco


3. Where are all the places (if more than one) that your plot will be taking place?

Also up for determination. Confirmation on Andara, Eclipse / Eclipse Station, Lothal, Bardotta and likely Dantooine.


4. Please provide a basic in-character timeline of what you expect to happen.

Bruce and Fennex have a moment where they talk to each other - to make a plan and to reminisce, sort of a goodbye. During this time, Bruce will also approach Ralaa and talk to her about her confession before the attacks on Tython and offers a suggestion and some comforting words; further Bruce will also approach Marina and have her assist him with a small task or two.

With the final talks complete, the mission of taking younglins and going into hiding can begin. Bruce will be taking his small group to Bardotta and leave them with the Dagoyan Masters to help harmonize the two belief systems - Jedi Order and Dagoyan Order - as they continue to get acquainted, Bruce departs the planet for his final discovery; Eclipse.

On Eclipse, Bruce will do a survey mission and power up the station with the aid of Marina before returning to Bardotta and relocated his small cell to the new base where they will stay until they are called upon; or as long as the Force wills.

Meanwhile, Ralaa returns to Andara had has a personal moment and personal discovery with herself and the orphanage she had help build and protect.

Fennex & Bruce will team up for a trip to Lothal where they will scatter and seal knowledge together before moving on with their final moments - Bruce's being Eclipse and Fennex being a personal task.

Some time later, Bruce will create his holocron and store it away for future generations. As well as store a vast number of smaller holocrons & datacrons as a great library.

5. What do you or your character hope to achieve with this plot? What is the "end-game"?

This will conclude the story of Bruce as well as the story of Fennex. Further with the completion of the plot, Eclipse would be found and established for use in the next timeline or to be referenced. Finally Bruce and Fennex will add a holocron to be used in the future.


6. Do you need any involvement of canon NPCs or faction leaders to be DMed by a staff member? If so, please detail who/what and for what purpose.

No.
 
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Heyo there @Zigara !

Long time no see ;)

  1. Does the Dagoyan Order have a lore write up or is it canon? Either way, a link would be appreciated
  2. Can you please section this out into how many threads you will have and what, if any, opposition you will have in said threads please
I like the idea of the plot, just wanting those bits cleared up please :D

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Sure. Sorry. @Nefieslab

So the Dagoyan Order is Canon (courtesy of the Clone Wars) - and it's old Brucey's roots from day one. Wookieepedia Link
Now, I will admit I have slightly modified the resources given; honestly I'm not exactly sure when Bardotta was colonized or when the Order existed. I took a little liberty back when I created Bruce.

Section it out:

Thread 1: Bruce talks to Fennex, Ralaa, Marina

Thread 2: Bruce heads to Bardotta with his cell and meets with his former Order and asks them for help with providing shelter. They agree. (I'll have someone DM the NPC/NPCs)

Thread 3: Happens at the same time, Fennex, Ralaa & Marina will head away to store and hide some knowledge and/or relics away on another planet; to seal as well.

Thread 4: With the hiding of the above Jedi Artifacts completed, Ralaa departs for Andaraa where she returns to her former life to help protect the younglings she had been charged with and considers speaking to Silas once again.

Thread 5: With the previous artifacts hidden, Bruce and Fennex meet on Dantooine where they jointly hide more artifacts and seals. This serves as the final time the two see each other.

Thread 6: With the above task completed, Fennex and Bruce go their separate ways. Bruce meets up with Marina and the two investigate and power-up Eclipse / Eclipse Base

Thread 7: Happens at the same time as #6, Bruce and Fennex have separated and while Bruce undertakes his own mission, Fennex undertakes his final mission. A personal mission.

Thread 8: Is a bit split; with Eclipse done up Bruce takes a time out to get things sorted out and begins construction of a holocron, once it is completed and time has passed - Bruce collects his younglings and brings them to Eclipse where they can begin their new life in hiding. Marina is given an chance to stay with them and help train and watch over - or go her separate way. Regardless of her decision, a few years pass and Bruce is putting his finishing touches on his large achieve/repository of countless Jedi knowledge that he had been entrusted due to his role as Caretaker.

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A few Notes:

Thread 7 is up to @Loco - he has his own vision for a personal mission, therefore I have not outlined it here. But his final mission should be done within a thread.

Thread 4 is up to @MatureContentWarningx - she's given be a basic idea of what she wants to do, and she's already started essentially the second half of that description.

Yes, it seems long. But the key aspect to this is that essentially all of the threads will be running at the same time. Each of the participants have provided a keen interest in completing this and have advised me they'll do their best to get through threads before the end of the timeline.

@Loco may offer some alternatives, but I have given him a rough vision in consultation with him and he's in agreement.

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I hope that clears up what you were asking my good @Nefieslab sir
 
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That answers all my questions don't worry!

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Great, thanks!

We'll be happy to get this underway and done! I'm really excited for it. Long time coming, we wanted to do it sooner - once our council thread concluded but @Malon got crazy busy and the thread isn't moving at all so we're just rolling the dice.
 

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Also I wanted to make note, I did write up a Holocron and I tried to give it to @Malon but I haven't heard from him. I've got a detailed holocron I wanted to submit (and he said they'd be allowed even though it was locked up) - it's in my workshop.

EDIT: I've added links to the approved write ups for Eclipse System and Eclipse Station
 
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