Well, given the above points, and the willingness of the OP to edit and adapt this faction based on the feedback given, I must say I am impressed, and would very much be interested with my pirate character.
Okay, I edited it a bit further now, however AI just learned that Mustafar is home to a Dark Jedi enclave, so I have to find a new place. I would be happy top accept your pirate character, I will add him soon if you would like.
Okay, I can change that. I'll also add the levels and rooms and add more detail to them. Are we able to have Kolto? I wasn't sure if we are allowed to have Kolto without some sort of trade agreement with Manaan. But i'll add it in there anyway!
i could definitely have a PC drawn up for something like this. My current existing PC's are pseudo-tied to factions i wanna keep going, but this sounds like a fun experiment. I'll draft a PC tonight when i get home and maybe work something out