ok, I have made some changes; I have removed the wings because I agree that it would be physically impossible without any propulsion; and I also explained the Force sight a little more in Force powers I think... and I tied up some loose ends. please red when you have the chance :)
Yeah... i'll work on it. the "Seeing the Force" is explained in the bio and I forgot to mention that the wings are expertly crafted to be super light-weight... ill add that in now
Character's name: Avrael Aerosteel
Link to their profile: http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/avrael-aerosteel.62394/
Your desired rank: Jedi Knight
NAME: Avrael Aerosteel
FACTION: New Jedi Order
RANK: Padawan
SPECIES: Genetically modified human
AGE: 21
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 6' 5"
WEIGHT: about 210
EYES: Blue/Green
HAIR: Black
SKIN: Tan
CREDITS: 1000
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: Has a Tattoo on his forearm that is his family crest
FORCE SENSITIVE...
NAME: Avrael Aerosteel
FACTION: New Jedi Order
RANK: Padawan
SPECIES: Genetically modified human
AGE: 21
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 6' 5"
WEIGHT: about 340 (with wings)
EYES: Blue/Green
HAIR: Black
SKIN: Tan
CREDITS: 1000
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: not really a mark but has metal wings grafted into his...
Please read character profile before replying. (I am new at this so go easy plz)
link to character profile: http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?account/personal-details