As he stepped out of his vessel, Carden was immediately taken with his surroundings. Unlike most demons of the abyss of the Corellian Hell, Carden preferred beauty over brimstone. It was one of the reasons that he never fit well with the Sith, and it was one of the reasons why he was surprised...
“As the full moon rises to its nocturnal throne, the children of the night will soon awaken to wave their webs of dark enchantments....”
Carden Mannux
The Prince of Darkness
Written by Brandon Rhea
They say the dark is generous, and it is patient, and that it always wins. This much is...
*The shockwave within the Force rippled through the room, nearly pushing up the floor like the skin of a ripe fruit. It hit him in the chest, breaking his concentration and sending him to the ground. However, as he attempted to begin his shard of the commanders mind once again, he watched as the...
*Deep within Sith space, Carden reluctantly made his way to the beautiful simplicity that was Arkania. For one who had always felt he had more class and more respectability than most other Dark Lords of the Sith, Carden felt a dark ease each time he found a world such as the one he found himself...
<div class='quotetop'>QUOTE(Nydia Sebek @ Sep 16 2007, 11:49 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}></div>
I'm not questioning it's legitimacy, Kelly. I simply attempted to exploit what I believed to be a hole in Kurt's argument.
OOC: I never said leave the thread. I simply said that I thought it was getting a bit ridiculous with Sith commanders wanting to blow up the galaxy and big bad monsters Force pushing everyone in a room. And, when I said the criticism thing, I referred to "you do too many closed threads."
*After easily dodging the blasts lobbed towards him, Carden watched as the Dark Lord motioned for his blade, though the former Dark Lord shook his head in disagreement. Instead, he decided to use the power of the mind shard, a powerful offensive form of telepathy. Drinking the pool of the Dark...
You didn't really capture Laili, but I also didn't convey her character to you or how the voice should sound. My only REAL gripe was that you sounded too young for this one. It worked with Arael, though.