Raine smiled at Hiro as he approached her. This was perfect! The "man" actually appeared to be a droid. If anyone could recognize a machine, it'd be her. Especially with her experience of building Ocampo. Raine extended her hand, taking his, returning his polite gesture. It pleased her greatly...
"Remind me again why we came to this dusty old planet." A young raven-haired woman said to her dirty blonde counterpart.
"It's Zonju V, you know that, Ocampo. Besides, we came here because we received a message from someone here. Called himself an admirer of my work and skills. Besides, it...
I edited the wording to say that it can "potentially" penetrate medium armor within 10 yards, and light armor within it's normal range. Also added a recoil. I've done a bit of reading, and have realized that my understand was fundamentally flawed. Higher powered rounds are less about penetration...
Affiliation: Elspeth Engineering.
Ownership: Raine Elspeth.
Intent: Personal Use, Use by the Waste Rangers, and to be sold for profit.
Model: Elspeth Bladed Revolver
Type: Slugthrower/Melee
Size: Large Pistol
Composition: Durasteel, Plasteel
Range: 50 Meters
Ammunition Capacity: 6 Cartridges...
Hey, guys! Need help yet again. I am thinking about overhauling my tech/indie character, Raine Elspeth. Now, most of the changes would be anatomical, skills, gear, and seeing as how she is a droid fanatic, her droid followers and pets. As of the moment, in the timeline, she is pretty much...
Thank you for writing this out. It makes a great deal of sense to me, and actually makes me want to look over my own writing style. I am curious as to whether or not I display similar qualities in my writing, and simply have never noticed. I truly hope I have not acted similarly in my writing...
Kalsar of the clan Rodarch. Mandaloarian as they came. The clan was obscure enough, but the name, he may as well have said something grotesquely alien. Amaterasu glanced to him again as they walked, then around her. The area was quite full, bustling even, especially for such a poor area. Then...
Amaterasu took a couple steps towards the man, stopping a couple meters from him. "Fair enough." The woman said in response to his statement about his judgments. She hadn't been expecting a package deal. When the man nodded towards her, indicating that they should move on to a place less...