I just read it, nice work mate! Though there are a few new rules you need to check before someone points it out on your cs. For Ronin's droid amd guns, you either need to post technology profiles for them or link the original chiss profiles they came from(I would suggest the latter, much easier that way).
Speaking of RP, perhaps Ronin would like to be recruited for the Stormtroopers by my character, the grand general of the military, Konstantine Arkyadvich. We're doing a lot of work to the stormies in the upcoming months that I think may appeal to your character very well.
Also! If you have skype, there is something id like to chat with you over concerning the chiss in general. My skype(by email) is [email protected].
For your mission, do you want to do it alone or with someone else? If alone, you can start it immediately, you'll need an NPCer either way, I can help you find one ;)