Star Wars RolePlay

Its been a long time since i have done this, but thank you for the complement and i'll take what you've said into account :D to be clear when you say something to go off, could you give me an example? :)

The post was great as far as writing goes. I could see Reland and Larik on the Maiden in my mind as they marveled at the ship graveyard. But you haven't given us anything to go off of other than "wow that's a lot of ships," which would slow the thread down.

We want our next posts to be as good as yours, but because we don't really know what's happening, we can't really do anything other than stare out the viewport with big eyes.

If there's some to go off of - or a ship to board, or a something to investigate - then we have something worthwhile for our characters to do.

Let me tweak my post a little, and i'll let you know

Sounds good! Thanks.