I think it would be better to build the faction around the kingdom (or empire as the case may be) rather than around the Force-sensitive subgroup. I would have an Eternal Empire Remnant with a name along the lines of: The Zakuul Empire, Kingdom of Zakuul or Empire of Eternity. I would have the...
Niv Razen/Veran Zin
A former Jedi who has spent many years as a bodyguard for hire. He left the Jedi because he doesn't believe that they are what they were meant to be.
He is a good fighter, very intelligent and good at keeping a close eye on things.
Actually the picture was photo shopped. If you look at the women in the video you'll notice that their breasts fill the cups of their bikinis while the woman in the picture has pecs that do not even get close to filling the cups. So, yeah I can tell the difference between real and photo shop.
Sarine fell the moment the punch hit her. The fall knocked the wind out of her and she was down. The girl breathed heavily and looked up at the Jedi. "You win..." she panted as she turned over and pushed her self to a kneeling position. "Honestly, Jedi you're the best competition I've ever had...
To put my own views on this. What do you define as the wage gap? Legally you are required to start at the same pay as a man in your position. You are also required to get raises based solely on your performance. Some may not get raises at the same time or for the same amount usually based upon a...
I would like to point out that there is something negative about complaining. Also you may or may not be aware that in a guy's mind (the ones who talk like that) being called the opposite sex is an insult to either sex. So I would not take it as implying that being a woman is a bad thing, except...
Sarine tried to dodge out of the Jedi's way, got hit on her jaw and fell back. She looked up and glared at him. "That was dirty Jedi!" she yelled as she pushed herself off the ground and tried to grab hold of the Jedi. "I'll teach you to try and knock me out!"
She flew at her opponent, fists...
I once tried to make an Indie faction with Pyrokinesis as the main focus of the powers of the faction. Being as every major character would have dedicated years to the study of Pyrokinesis I was able to use it in a powerful way, additionally I designed these characters to hide their weaknesses...