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I sadly have not had time to do anything because of marching band :( I really enjoy it,but am a bit disappointed when I had to turn down a thread that I asked to join. It took way too long for it to start. =/ Oh well! Thanks for the help. I laughed after I read your reply. "Holy crap, you really...

I finished, and if it needs improvement then just say so, and I will see what I can do. ;)

I am not near finishing the bio, but I did major re-writing of it, and I would like some feedback of how I am doing so far. :)

http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/jallar-galesmasher.67789/#post-1283811

I have made massive changes, but I am not finished yet. I need to go to bed, so I will try to finish it on Wednesday. I can't do it tomorrow because I have work and band rehearsel in the afternoon. I may have time on Wednesday though. :) I'd appreciate feedback for what I have so far.

Minor Sand people skirmishes and accomplishing his contracts are technically not a "battlefield". I guess we have different definitions of a battlefield. I consider these as more of minor skirmishes, and not militant activity; by my definition not a battlefield. I will agree that I may need to...

I am curious about the current conditions of Umbara. That would help me with the details of his parents immensely.

I changed it a bit. Is it better? What am I missing? Sorry if I am bothering you.

lol I was trying to say he looked scrawny from a distance, but when you got closer you would be like ohmuhgad! lol maybe I didn't think that through :D Sorry I may need help with editing this. I will be honest with you by saying I have never done anything like this before.

Applied for the Accord! :D Now I am just waiting for approval.

Name: Jallar Galesmasher http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/jallar-galesmasher.67789/ Bio: Umbaran bounty hunter looking for some work Specialization(s): Tactical firearms, and finishing the mission

NAME: Jallar Galesmasher FACTION: The Accord RANK: N/A SPECIES: Umbaran AGE: 23 GENDER: Male FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes, but untrained. APPEARANCE: Height: 5'11 Weight: 192 Ib. Eye colour: Colorless Skin tone: Very pale. Hair: Shaved Looks scrawny, but is stronger than people think when they first...

Did my character :3 I hope it is in the right place though. If not I can cop and paste.

Does the Accord still exist?

I have just been told. Thanks man. :)

well thanks guys

Trying to join Czerka Corporation! :)

Name: Jallar Galesmasher Link: http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?members/jallar-galesmasher.6391/ Brief Bio: Born into a semi-wealthy Umbaran family. Sadly his family was slaughtered when a break in occurred. Has a love for anything military related. Rank: Security Operative...