At Bishop's call, Kryte hopped up behind the counter and peered over again.
"Caru, cover me!"
He laid down another spread fire of blaster bolts, and then ran out from behind the counter immediately afterwards. Shooting his slugthrower indiscriminately, he turned the corner and grabbed Bishop...
When Zante arrived at Arcon VII, it took him a while to find the Ospian Enclave. But after speaking to a few locals, eventually a Knight, and then other Ospians, he finally got admitted into the Order. Now, he was on his way to meet his new teacher, Casey Lorn.
He twisted, turned, and...
Staying low, Kryte started to set up the weapon that Caru gave him. He propped it up on the counter, made sure the energy cell and gas packs were secure, and slowly peered over his cover. Bishop and Zur-Kor were nearby dueling, and the thugs were fanning out behind them, taking their own cover...
Kryte heard Caru's quiet words, and decided to go along with it. "Alright, I wouldn't mind more firepower, lets just go quickly and quietly. Well, mainly just quietly." Kryte walked up to Caru, grabbed her by her wrist and whispered in her ear "Just play along." Scanning his surroundings to...
Kryte suddenly became scared. Zur-Kor didn't care if he had to kill Kryte to get to Caru, Bishop had no strong ties to Kryte, Caru was probably packing and ready to get rid of Kryte if she had to, and--to top it all off--Zur-Kor had that damn thermal detonator.
"AARGH, Please Caru, I don't...
Kryte saw no other option than to do as he was told. Hopefully this Caru girl could take care of herself, even if she is a little... spacey.
"Follow me Caru, just keep walking forward" Kryte said as he lifted his already aimed slugthrower and started walking back towards the two Mercs.
If we...
Ahh!
If you like FFTA, or FFTA2,
then you
NEVER played the original.
FFT has the best plot of any videogame I have ever played (not even KOTOR compares,) and the gameplay makes FFTA and FFTA2 look like... Well, have you ever played Barbie Fashion show?
The content of the history is solid, maybe delve a little more into why he needs to become a warrior, and what the prophecy is. The whole thing needs a lot of cleaning up, there are periods in the middle of sentences, subject/verb disagreements and sentence fragments that get in the way of...
Kryte lowered his gun to waist height.
This was news to Kryte. And it came right after she had almost crippled him with greif.
If he wanted her alive or dead, why was he trying to negotiate? It seemed like the merc should have just stalked out in front and waited, shooting her as she...
((Right now, your Advertisement has no context. The dialog is fine, but too short. You should try to have more development, and then maybe say that they put that announcement on the net, or post it up in the cantina or something. Also, you should to finish/fix the profile for your character...