Dorin listened carefully and paid close attention while his Master spoke. When Rowan told him to ready himself, he ignited the blade and waded back into the familiar currents of the Force. Instead of starting slow, however, he plunged himself into it. He attempted to become a part of the living...
"I saw your move coming, it was just to fast for me." He says, rubbing his arm and laughing a little. "The important thing, I hope, is that I succeeded in the excersise."
Dorin stands to his feet again and takes the offered lightsaber. He laughs at Rowan's remark, but becomes silent when...
Dorin felt the trimmer in the Force. It moved against him like a gust of wind. He allowed himself to be carried away in it, and suddenly he knew the state of mind he'd achieved was correct.
He whirled his lightsaber in a tight shield and blocked Rowan's attack aimed for his shoulder blades...
Dorin looked at his Master when he removed the blindfold, blinking rapidly to readjust his eyes. He enjoyed the excersise, because he had only been taught this particular technique on a very minor level. It was good to feel that he had put it to it's proper use. He smiled at Rowan, nodding his...
I like the poem, but I would like to know what your character looks like, a little of his history, personality, and other things. :)
Your character, though. Good job on the poem.
Dorin catches the cloth, deactivates the lightsaber, and ties the blindfold on. When it is secure, he again redies himself and ignites the blade. He frees himself once again to the Force, and with slightly more ease returns to the state of oneness with the Force--but slower this time. To be...
Dorin reacted immediately, whirling the blade close to his body. The Force flowing through him, he spun on the ball of his foot and smacked aside the first bolt that the droid fired from behind, following it and coming around, deflecting the others aimed at his chest with so many flicks of his...
Dorin, still dressed in his padawan garment, stood when Rowan entered the room. He watched him retrive items from the container, as well as the droid take flight.
When his Master offered him the training saber, he took it, and gripped it for a moment. "I'm more familiar with this one than...
Dorin's smile was so wide that it showed every white tooth in his head, and his emerald green eyes glittered in satisfaction. It was not a smile of pride, but of joy. The emotion pulsed from him once powerfully, but no more. "I am pleased that you are pleased."
When Rowan rose, Dorin...
Dorin felt the life pulse around him, almost like he shared his life force with the things around him, and they with him. For all his talent in calling upon the Force, it was still a very intimidating thing to him. So all encompassing, so great and mysterious. He started to feel a slight unease...
Dorin cocks his head, then considers Rowan for a moment. After a few moments of contemplation, he nods his agreement.
"I will do as you ask, Master. It makes sense, and I can see the wisdom in it. I did not expect to have a great understanding of the code, since I have very little experience...
Dorin closes his eyes and lowers his head once again. When he speaks, it is clear that deep thought and contemplation has gone into his responses.
"Emotion, yet peace. Emotions are a part of every sentient beings exsistence. It is important to be seperate from emotion, for only when one is at...
Dorin smiled in return to his words.
"I was raised here." He responds, nodding once. "I was brought here by the Jedi who delivered me. My mother was killed by a bounty hunter, but I survived. I have been trained since I was old enough to understand and take instruction."
Dorin lifted the corner of his mouth in a half smile when he felt the new presence. Like dropping a pebble on the surface of still water. Subtle, yet powerful and present at the same time. The one who came now was his new master. He just...knew. It was there to be seen, as long as one cared to...
Doran Hafmott sat, as he often did, in one of the various garden courtyards of the Temple. He liked coming here often so he could extend his senses to encompass the life of the growing plants and the other Jedi who came here to meditate or walk. He felt them all as keenly as if they were...
Edited.
It was an attempt to make him more talented, and above norm, yes. If that is a no-no, I will gladly edit again. Just wanted to make a character I can enjoy playing with out making him 'Mary-sued' or 'god moded', because, as we all know, playing such a character is not fun because...
Not angry. Was just frustrated. Everything all better now.
And it wasn't that I was complaining about the way things were done lol. It was just confusing because I'm used to other methods. What I was talking about was just an example/idea.
I have already found a Master, but he said I should post here anyway, so I am obeying his wish.
Dorin Hafmott:
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Jedi Padawan