Doran Hafmott sat, as he often did, in one of the various garden courtyards of the Temple. He liked coming here often so he could extend his senses to encompass the life of the growing plants and the other Jedi who came here to meditate or walk. He felt them all as keenly as if they were...
This is the most convoluted Forum I've ever been in for RP or PbP.
Since your profile requirements are so strict, there should be more room on the profiles to put all that information. Also, there should be very clear areas where characters can go and interact with one another.
Example:
The...