Looks really good and i dont have anything to point out (Me atleast).I have an exile aswell and if you wish,i offer you a chance to roleplay.Anyway,good job on the character and it is one of the best formats i have ever seen!
Name:Neepp Pleesa
Age:25
Faction:Hutt Cartel
Rank:Smuggler
Species:Rodian
Gender:Male
Force Sensitive:No
Homeworld:Rodia
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Neepp is a Rodian who possesses large pupil-less eyes that can see in...
Name:Roosto Plen
Faction:Jedi
Rank:Jedi Knight
Species:Kel dor
Age:30 human years,223 Kel dor years
Gender:Male
Force sensitive:Yes.He is trained in the ways of the force.
Homeworld:Dorin
APPEARENCE:
Being a Kel dor,he is tall (About 1.90 meters tall). He does not have hair and his skin's color...
Agutha's Exile Armor
An armor set which consists of a mask,an armored chestpiece,leggings and boots which are grey coloured but also a black cape.This armor was created by the finest smiths of Nar Shaddaa which were paid a lot.Designed by the Exile Agutha himself,it is designed like this because...