Weapon B20 Survival Blaster

[AM_Disnerd]

B-20 SURVIVAL BLASTER​

AFFILIATION
Open Market


MANUFACTURER
Custom built


SIZE
Medium

WEIGHT
1.7 kg


COMPOSITION
Metal steel scrapsWEAPON TYPE
Blaster
DAMAGE TYPE

Light, light stun


AMMUNITION CAPACITY
5 shots/power pack

FIRE SELECTOR
Semi-Automatic

MAX RANGE
23 meters

DESCRIPTION​

The B20 Survival Blaster is made of salvaged metal scraps, and custom made. Because it is a custom made blaster it only has limited capabilities such as to stun intruders or other opponents. It is a black steel metal blaster and camouflage coated with an orange trim. Although upgradable, it was never upgraded to its maximum potential. It can also be painted to camoflauge the owner's garments or surroundings. It can also be custom fit to the user's fighting style and grip.

LEGALITY​

Legal throughout the Galaxy.

INTENT​

The B-20 Field Survival Blaster is intended for self-defense purposes and for protection, although never used in battle it can also serve as an effective combative weapon. It is can also be used to stun and scare intruders and opponents.

RESTRICTIONS​

None

Source

 

[AutoFox]

Sorry it's taken me so long to get back to you on this. I don't actually see much wrong with this, but with specifications this low I would not object to this being Generic tech. Just a couple of things:

1: You need to edit the formatting of this to match the provided template. It also may not be obvious that you have it wrong if you're editing on mobile.

2: If this weapon can do Stun damage, that must be listed in the damage types category. Example: medium, medium stun.

 

[AM_Disnerd]

It’s alright, I’ve updated it to better fit the description, I am ususally on mobile so I apologise for it being so short.

 

[AutoFox]

Sorry again for not getting back sooner; been distracted by some things.

So, unfortunately there are still some problems. It's not the actual content I'm talking about, but the layout - the format - of the post. The template has things laid out in a certain way, and has the raw BBcode in a spoiler tag. You're meant to copy that and then fill in the information under the provided headings before you post it. All the tech templates can be found here.

If you can, I would suggest working on your posts from a desktop or laptop, or even a tablet. The mobile browsers on most phones make posts look completely different than they do on an actual PC, even in desktop mode.

That being said, the content and intent of this submission look fine to me otherwise. Good work!

 

[AM_Disnerd]

It’s alright, I will work on it as soon as I can

 

[AM_Disnerd]

Updated. :)

 

[AutoFox]

Looks much better. Approved.