- Joined
- Sep 3, 2009
- Messages
- 462
- Reaction score
- 0
I honestly cannot believe that I am asking this, but I fear that if I do not things will get far worse. Thus, here I stand to ask, appease you masses that thrive off of commentary and praise to give me the truth. I have noticed my literary 'talents' deteriorating quite steadily, and despite my best efforts to keep my requests for aid subtle, I can no longer sit by silent.
I need help. I know that there are many a writer here whose skills far surpass my own, and to these few men and women I request your assistance. I need a thorough, and serious C&C. No sugar-coating, no compliments unless something is in every sense of the word outstanding.
In particular, this profile; I feel I have errors that need correction, but I cannot find them on my own.
If anybody wishes to be a Good Samaritan and guide me to the path of self-betterment, than I thank you sincerely. Those that would rather sit back in silence, like bloody mutes, go elsewhere as I smolder...
I need help. I know that there are many a writer here whose skills far surpass my own, and to these few men and women I request your assistance. I need a thorough, and serious C&C. No sugar-coating, no compliments unless something is in every sense of the word outstanding.
In particular, this profile; I feel I have errors that need correction, but I cannot find them on my own.
If anybody wishes to be a Good Samaritan and guide me to the path of self-betterment, than I thank you sincerely. Those that would rather sit back in silence, like bloody mutes, go elsewhere as I smolder...