Independent Caragarr Elekobaak

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NAME: Caragarr Elekobaak
FACTION: Tribe of Elekobaak
RANK: Tribe Chief
SPECIES: Tusken Raider
AGE: 22
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 1.9 Meters
WEIGHT: 89 Kilograms
FORCE SENSITIVE: No

APPEARANCE:
Eye Color: Black
Hair Color: None
Skin Complexion: Gray
Distinguishing Marks: Feline Muzzle
Height: 1.9 Meters
Weight: 89 Kilograms

ATTRIBUTES:
Elekobaak is a legendary warrior. Elekobaak is extremely agile. Elekobaak is very strong. Elekobaak is very intelligent. Elekobaak is more susceptible to diseases than others. Elekobaak gets hurt easily. Elekobaak is extremely afraid of death.
Elekobaak can run for an extremely long time. Elekobaak has a great sense of battle tactics and strategy. Elekobaak can fight well with blasters, melee weapons, and unarmed. Elekobaak is xenophobic to non-Tusken Raiders. Elekobaak hates humans the most and will attack them first in a battle even if doing so would be a tactical error. Elekobaak is a tyrant in his tribe.

PERSONALITY:
Elekobaak wants his way and his way only. Elekobaak loves it when people beg at his feet for mercy. He also loves when he defeats an enemy tribe or destroys a settlement that is not his own. Elekobaak is somewhat reasonable and if given a good deal he will let prisoners live, and on extreme occasions he will let prisoners serve in his tribe as soldiers, usually as cannon fodder. Elekobaak believes it is cowardly for leaders to not fight alongside their soldiers. Elekobaak worships water, just like any other Tusken Raider.

BIOGRAPHY:
Elekobaak was born on the outskirts of civilization in a failing Tusken Raider tribe. He was abused by his parents. Upon turning 11 he began training in combat, by the age of 20 he killed his mentor, proving he was the superior warrior. When he turned 21 he killed a young krayt dragon, then claimed it was an adult, silencing anyone who objected with death, he was then considered an adult for killing a krayt dragon. So then he did the unthinkable, he killed the tribe chief and his entire family, claiming rule over the tribe. He sentenced anyone who stood against him to death and soon the tribe was loyal to him out of fear.

SKILLS:
Extremely skilled in marksmanship, strategy, swordsmanship, melee weapon fighting, blaster fighting, unarmed fighting, tactics, battle, and ruling.

GEAR:
Male Tusken Raider clothes, Tusken cycler rifle, gaffi stick.

SHIP:
Lambda Class T-4a Shuttle

PETS:
Bantha
 
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Wit

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This character could do with some toning down, he’s achieved way too much at such a young age. Killing a krayt dragon at age 8, even if it was a young one, is just too OP. Same goes for all the conquering before turning 10 and having such a big following by age 15.
 

Charles

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No...Just wash him up a bit. Instead of having him kill a Kray Dragon at age eight, have it be 18 or 28. And as far as conquering goes, I'd talk to an admin about how much this brand new character could've accomplished. Ask some friends to do some roleplays on how he conquered and such. The biggest thing I've accomplished when I was sixteen was running the mile in 5:27 lmao. Just be realistic, is all we're really asking. Not for you to completely throw away this potentially awesome character.
 

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Thanks, also how on earth did you do a mile that quick, Im a cross country player and I have never done a mile that quickly
 

Charles

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It's lookin' a lot better! Just remember to change his age from 15 to whatever he is now.
 

Charles

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It takes practice. Whether it be creating a character for the forum or running a mile, it takes hard work, long suffering, patience, and practice to get stuff right.
 
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