(CLOSED)Razor's Training of Revenge''

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He Stood in A dark Jedi Training Caves on Conscio,He arrived here A few days ago After He recieved A letter From the unknown Dark Jedi whom would train him in the Dark side of the Force.

He Waited In the middle of the Earthy cave,It was lit with torches,and it's walls Painted in Cryptic messages,His Red Curved handled Training Saber was Clipped onto his Black Belt,Waiting to be used.\

He Breathed in And Breathed out,He turned His Head Sensing Lightly A entity Growing near,His All black Training outfit would stand out in the room making Him Highly Visible,All He could do know was wait,For the training that would not be Easy.
 
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So another day began with Ajoc meeting a new student. This time his newest addition was greener than the fields on Dantooine. Entering the cave, Ajoc could see how most students couldn't cope with what they were being taught and simply went insane, clawing whatever they liked onto the walls. Ajoc merely sneered at the scribblings, noting how poorly done they were as he approached his new apprentice.

"I'm afraid we have not had the pleasantry of meeting yet. My name is Ajoc Laynier. Rank of Master within the Bogan and previously the same within the Jedi Order. You have potential child and I aim to bring it out."

His voice was some what monotoned. Only spiking it up near the end of his final sentence as he raised his head. Looking at him from within slit of the bandages that covered his face. His dark blue eyes and tan complexion accompanied by the withering force of the Dark Side was the only parts visible on his body. The rest was covered by his large black robes and bandages.
 
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He greeted His Master with a Bow staring At his Master,He was ready more than ever to Train and Get his Revenge on his parents killer's,One torch on the right went out Covering the left side of his face,as his left eye glowed red for several Seconds,He looked at his Master who was Bandaged,The only thing he'd seen was His blue Eyes and Tan skin As Razor replied to his Words''I'm Here Master for your training,and yours only''He spoke in a Dark tone,

He was prepared to face anything,to come at him.
 

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((Try to keep that glowing stuff down. It makes your character look like his is trying to be specia lol))

"I would assume as much, Razor, now I want you to follow me while I ask you a few questions."

With a nod of his head, motioning to the outside of the cave, Ajoc took one of the torches mounted on the wall and proceeded outside. The forest that the cave was located in was not too far from the Bogan's enclave but tonight this was not their destination. Instead their walk took them deeper within where only a few stray beams of light penetrated through the thick layers of branches from the trees. Staying close to the torch was vital for both light and safety in Razor's case. Ajoc then turned back, giving that familiar blank stare as he spoke..


"Tell me, Razor, what do you know of the Force? What do you think of the Jedi as well?"


His questions were straight to the point, looking for what his new student would be like and how he would tailor his training through the next following weeks.
 

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((Sorry lol))

He,Would listen To his master Following him,After he grabbed a small torch of the wall.They Headed deeper into the cave,As Razor Carefully treaded along the path,Trying to keep himself close to the light.

He looked his master Into the eye's,staring back at him''The Force is a binding, metaphysical and ubiquitous power,The jedi Stand back.And do nothing. They let everyone you love die and Not do a got Dam Thing about it Thats What I think Of them''.This he spoke Trully From his Heart.
 
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