Five Syndicates Comanche

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NAME: ---
FACTION: Crimson Dawn
RANK: Scoundrel
SPECIES: Kiffar
AGE: 34
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 5'11"
WEIGHT: 165 lbs.
FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes, Trained
HOMEWORLD: Tatooine

APPEARANCE:
--- has long straight and thick black hair and an expressionless face. He wears white and black war paint along with a headdress made out of Bantha leather and a dead crow. He is of average height and build, but appears to be quite athletic. --- usually wears the Tusken robes from the tribe he befriended along with a Gaderffi staff as well. --- carries a lightsaber that is kept into two separate parts when not in use to avoid suspicion.

ATTRIBUTES:
Being a victim of the Cadre made --- into a stalwart warrior with and without the Force. He is well trained in hand-to-hand combat and is a decent shot with a blaster. Thanks to the Tusken tribe he lived with for a time, ---'s skill with melee and ranged combat increased. He is quick and agile during combat, using speed mixed with ferocity to get the better of his opponent when he's up close and personal.

--- is also naturally stealthy and evasive. Mixed with his abilities as an avid hunter, he makes for quite the assassin. --- is very observant and has a knack for picking up a target's trail whether it be through the usage of the Force or just simple hunting and tracking techniques. --- is also very resourceful and can easily adapt to any rapidly changing situation to benefit himself and his allies.

STR: Mid
DEX: High
CON: Mid
WIS: High
INT: Mid
CHA: Mid


PERSONALITY:
--- is quiet, reserved, and calm. He never lets his emotions get the best of him and never raises his voice. He appears to be very stoic and mysterious, rarely choosing to speak unless spoken to. Even then, --- will only say a few words to vaguely describe what's on his mind. Living with Tusken Raiders taught Comanche to enjoy and respect nature. Since he hadn't known much of the galaxy after leaving the Cadre, --- found the Tusken's culture and religion to be what he needed. As such, he has a deep respect for the wilderness and for the dead. He also adopted many of their superstitions and rituals.

One of his quirks is that --- is very concerned with what is fair and what isn't. For example, if see's something he wants that someone else has, he will try and find something of similar value (or at least for himself) and offer to make a trade. Such examples could be a rabbit's foot for a nice watch, a feather for a blaster, a rat for a bag of salted peanuts, or even a fang for a lightsaber. --- will even trade with the dead, taking something from them that he desires and giving something back in return.

However, behind the seemingly naïve and quiet mask he wears, --- is very vengeful and wants to destroy the Sith for what they did to him and his fellow Cadre. --- remembers every insult and every wrong doing that has been done to him and commits it to memory. Though this anger is buried deep, occasionally --- will let it loose upon fighting. Even then, however, --- still tends to be quieter- just more ferocious.

BIOGRAPHY:
--- was taken as an infant to be raised as a Cadre apart of the Cadre Project. He has only ever knew the name that had given him, which was simple, ---. As most that would know of the project, it failed with the Cadre slaying their masters and freeing themselves. ---, no matter how much he was beaten for disobedience, was not willing to be needlessly violent without reason. However, with each lashing he received, the beast within bided it's time. When the day came that the Cadre were to forcefully announce their freedom, --- did not hold anything back, slaughtering his sadistic masters without remorse.

After the slaughter, --- wanted to find purpose. A purpose that did not require the need to inflict pain upon others. So, he left to Tatooine where he came across a Tusken tribe. They had taken him captive, which did not settle well with the Cadre. But, they had ridden him of his lightsaber and his blaster, and they usually drugged him enough so that he wasn't able to use the Force to his benefit. Instead, they repeatedly challenged --- in duels with Gaderffi staffs. Eventually, when --- bested one of their warriors, he had earned the tribe's respect.

They gave him back his belongings and even offered him his own set of Tusken Raider robes. --- remained with these people for a time, learning about and loving their culture and beliefs. It was definitely a step up from the Cadre. He had defended their home in the Jundland Wastes from pirates and raiders, and even slayed a Krayt Dragon with the help of his tribe. After the death of the dragon, the tribe made him a new headdress to wear instead of the Tusken mask. It consisted of Bantha leather an a crow. Along with the headdress, they gave him a startling appearance with war paint.

When --- set out on his own, heading to town, he found many jobs as a slicer, bounty hunter, and even a smuggler. Throughout Tatooine, --- had received the nickname of the 'Sand Demon' instead of Sand Person, due to his merciless attacks along with his frightening appearance. Eventually his reputation earned him a few jobs with Crimson Dawn, and he has served them ever since.

SKILLS:
Martial Arts/Marksmanship (Expert)
Hunting/Survival (Expert)
Perception/Insight (Expert)
Acrobatics/Stealth (Expert)
Piloting/Engineering (Adept)
Slicing/Sleight of Hand (Adept)
Investigation/History (Novice)

LIGHTSABER FORMS:
Form VII/Juyo (Expert)
Form III/Soresu (Adept)
Form I/Shii Cho (Adept)

FORCE ABILITIES:
Psychometry (Master)
Mental Manipulation (Expert)
Telepathy (Expert)
Animal Bond (Expert)
Force Weapon (Expert)
Pyrokinesis (Adept)
Cryokinesis (Adept)
Aerokinesis (Adept)
Tatuminas (Adept)
Force Choke (Adept)
Force Lightning (Adept)
Force Sustenance (Adept)
Force Deflection (Adept)
Force Speed (Novice)
Force Enhancement (Novice)

GEAR:
A180 Modular Blaster (1)
Cycler Rifle (1) [Armed when specified]
Gaderffi Staff (1)
Lightsaber [Red Blade] (1)
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Commlink (1)
Datapad (1)
Computer Spike (1)
Signal Tracer (1)

ARMOR:
Tusken Robes [Minus the mask] (1)

SHIPS:
BD-510 Stargale Light Courier (1)
 
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You're aware that naming a character Comanche and then basing the characterization around native american steretypes/tropes is like, high key kind of racist right?
 

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I am basing him off the character, Tonto, from the Lone Ranger. If you would like me to change the name, I will do so.
 

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That isn't the saving grace that you think it is. The name isn't the only problem. The character Tonto in and of itself is a racist caricature of Native Americans.

I'm archiving this. Use some damn common sense, please.
 
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