Mandalorian Coxauss

[Ferol Casto]

COXAUSS

Age: 36 Height: 2.21 metres Weight: 95 KG Eye Color: Brown Gender: Male Faction: Mandolorian (is this a proper faction?) Rank: Warrior Crest Color: N/A Hair Color: Black Force Sensitivity: Yes Biography: While he is sensitive in the ways of the force, he doesn’t use a lightsaber, nor does he use many skills. He prefers to keep his abilities a secret, not wanting to be noticed by the Jedi or the Sith. As a Warrior, he has been Mandolorian since birth, on the planet Mandalore. Recently, he traveled to the planet Dantooine to find a place to live, finally old enough to leave Mandalore. There, he settled down and began working, but he also knew full well that the planet was being fought over by the Sith and the Jedi, but he managed to keep quiet, and never got caught. Relationships: RED: ENEMY ORANGE: NOT ON GOOD TERMS YELLOW: NOT LIKED BLUE: ON GOOD TERMS GREEN: FRIEND Active Threads:

 

[The Good Doctor]

So. I'm not sure how this character would be 'extremely powerful' in the Force.

As a starting character, Coaxauss is a level 1, so his abilities would be limited by that. Also as an independent, a Mandalorian, there is no way Coaxauss would have access to the things they need to be able to be trained in the Force or know its ways.

While the character can be force-sensitive, being starting as a trained developed force-user - an extremely powerful one no less - Mandalorian isn't plausible as it is written.

I see you post quite a bit of characters in here, which is good. Although I would advise putting some more into the character profiles before taking off with them. I recall saying it before. While character sheets can be short and don't have to be long, as written currently we pretty much don't know much about the character here aside from they are a Mandalorian from Mandalore. Painting a wider canvas for the character would intrigue other writers to interact with the characters. .etc

 

[Ferol Casto]

All edits done. Let me know if it is better.

@The Good Doctor