Sith Order Dathok Telax

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Dathok Telax

AGE

► 25​
SPECIES
► Human​
HEIGHT
►5'6"​
WEIGHT
►160lbs​
EYE COLOR
► Brown​
HAIR COLOR
► Black​
HOMEWORLD
► Corellia​
GENDER
► Male​
FACTION
► Sith Eternal​
RANK
►Legionnaire​
FORCE SENSITIVITY
► Yes​
BIOGRAPHY
Born on the the common planet of Corellia, Dathok Telax was born to a family invested in the Corellian police force. It was a family tradition to have the the next generation go to the academy so they can follow in the footsteps. However, Dathok felt like this wasnt the life for him, he dreamed for a bigger destiny. He wanted to be somebody important in this galaxy. He got married at a young age and settled down planning on having a family of his own.

Though he always felt like he was meant for something greater and felt held back. Nonetheless he kept his mouth shut and though by not harping on his dreams that they would eventually fade. This all changed one day when he befriended a rodian named Hoskal, whom was involved in underworld trading and gambling. Seeking something to vent out his inner longing for something beyond a simple life was thrusted into a world of gambling. Unbeknownst to Dathok he had always had an affinity for the force, this would help him subconsciously influence the outcomes of games he would bet on. Before he knew it he was on an amazing streak and racked up an incredible amount of credits. This eventually got the attention of the local gangs believing him to be cheating threatened him. They decided to keep him alive if he would do the occasional odd job for them, such as threatening people etc.

After around two years of this, not happy with his life decided it was time for him and his wife to leave the planet and escape this situation. That night they packed their bags and planned to leave on a friends transport ship. The gangs caught wind of this and were already at the ship before Dathok had arrived. Him and his wife were taken to a warehouse and he had to watch as his wife was beaten to near death in front of him. They let them go after saying that the next time she would not get off so easily. As they returned home she was screaming at him and blaming him for everything. His anger rose with every word coming out of her mouth, in the moment he felt the pull of the Dark side and choke her to death. Afterwords he regretted what he had done, deciding he was to far gun he went and used most of his earned credits to but a blaster pistol and a vibroknife. He showed up to the warehouse of the Gang which had given him so much trouble fully intent on dying, he was surrounded but it didnt matter the force was with him as he used it instinctively. He was shot multiple times and took damage that would take down large beast but he tanked them. Before he knew it was alone in a room filled with dead bodies, having on a vague memory of what had just happened.

He used his remaining credits to but a starfighter and left the planet, not knowing where to go he felt at a loss with no purpose. In the faint distance he heard a voice call to him he jumped into hyperspace into a direction in which he did not know. Upon emerging from hyperspace he immediately came into contact with an asteroid field which damage his ship and caused him to crash land on a nearby moon destroying his ship in the process. Dathok spent three weeks stranded on this unknown place, a frozen wasteland. Everyday he felt like he would die yet the voice in his head would tell him to survive somehow. One night he had a vision of a man in a dark helmet, the dark warrior pulled out a sword filled with glyphs of a strange language. The warrior then stabbed Dathok in the stomach, causing him to wake up as if it were a dream. Everyday after that he would have the same reoccurring vision, and the outcome was always the same. One day however that would change, this time the warrior spoke, as he insulted Dathok and telling him how he failed his wife. In another moment of rage surging with the dark side, Dathok was able to quickly disarm the figure of his sword and stab him with it with one move. The helmet fell off, revealing to be Dathok himself, as it disappeared. The sword remained in his hands, dumbfounded he did not know what was happening but before he could contemplate what was happening man in a dark cloak showed himself. Telling Dathok he had been watching him for a long time and that he passed his trial. If he would have him the Cloaked man could show him a world beyond his understanding but more then anything give him a purpose. With that Dathok accepted not knowing of his future but not having anything left to lose.
Personaility
Dathok was always a shy person growing up he hardly had any friends and was constantly bullied. This didnt stop him for having a great love for those he felt like were family. He always seemed monotone and without an drive or ambition but this was futher from the truth. On the inside he always strived for something greater and felt like he had a great purpose in life. All these hidden emotions however would build up over time creating great anger in him when he was mad, lashing out in a great fury at those who the anger was directed at. Once becoming a legionnaire he felt at peace like the purpose he had been striving for was finally here. He was extremely loyal to the cause, and betrayal was never an option for him or anyone else. HE does regret what happened to his wife but now see's it as a necessary evil. He believes that sometimes evil stuff needs to happen in order for the universe to be a better place.
Appearance
A normal looking human at an average height, black long curly hair and dark brown eyes were his biggest discerning feature. After joining the eternal, he began to wear a Helmet of Ren, Dark black armor which looks like old steel type armor, and black cape.

Abilities
After having been trained in the art of the force, his abilities had grown immense. While not as skilled as others, he used the force in a more instinctual way. Using it to increase his over all physical abilities, such as strength, speed but his most powerful ability was to take a tremendous amount of damage and still keep going. He could also imbue his weapons with the force increasing the damage ability, and allowing it to come into contact with a light saber and not receive damage. He was trained in way of the sword, though he preferred the blade he received over a light saber. His form was most similar to the old style of Djem so, though he used it in a more one handed way.

Equipment
He carries with him black armor capable of stopping simple blaster shots from weaker weapns and from glancing blows from vibroblades. He hides his identity by wearing the Helmet of Ren , though it has some protection he it more so for the theatrical use. He has a old Broadsword style blade given to him, which has several Glyphs along its body, when in use it has a red energy like aura along the edges. On his left arm he wears a arm shield generator, which when activated creates a large red energy shield capable of blocking energy projectiles and other forms of damage, which he can activate and deactivate at will/

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The Good Doctor

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Armor will need a link to the tech boards.

On his left arm he wears a arm shield generator, which when activated creates a large red energy shield capable of blocking energy projectiles and other forms of damage, which he can activate and deactivate at will/

Not only would this need an approved tech write-up, but this is also the type of armor function that force-sensitive characters would not be able to use. And a disclaimer, armor is not that protective. The tech rules will have more info on how much armor can protect you.

And while you can use the force to enhance your body, it won't let you take superhuman punishment like in the manner described.

The sword would probably just have to be a plain sword or vibrosword right now (it can have glyphs on it though, just now glowing magic ones ones). I'm not sure what it's supposed to be. We don't have any lore for force swords or anything, if that's what it's supposed to be. Force Weapon is a force power here, but keep in kind what the lore article says.

Biography looks fine.

Tag me when you are ready for me to look at this profile again.
 

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i mean you can have armor that protects. It just can't any bells or whistles on it (the energy shield). The armor itself would need a write-up like this (armor that force users can use)

But if you want to have armor that doesn't protect or do anything (just purely aesthetics) then you can.
 
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