Dav'id Mori "The Exile"

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Dav'id Mori

The Exiled


Exiled • Unranked • Level One • Force Sensitive
Unknown • Miraluka • Male • 27

Purple Flowing Robes • Yellow Saber Staff (Well Concealed) • Lightweight Undergarments • Very Lightly Armoured
Masked • One Hundred and Seventy Five Pounds • Five Feet, Ten Inches • Athletic



"The Deadliest Predator, Is the one which you cannot see."



The Story


Little is known about the Exile known as Dav'id Mori. Although his youth was a troubled one it is believed to have been well documented within the Jedi Order. Despite this and due to the many years since his sentencing he would remain an unrecognisable figure to many within the galaxy.

Unlike many force sensitives cast out of the Jedi order, Dav'id Mori did not naturally seek out the Sith and fall foul of their ranks. This does not mean however that he did not have any interaction with them. Using the limited teachings bestowed upon him by the Jedi he adapted his powers and combat style to become a force assassin. Testing his powers and techniques by targeting unwitting acolytes and non-force sensitives throughout Sith Space.

His numerous confrontations however have not been without backlash, his body left scarred and a number of basic cybernetic implants are now used to assist with normal bodily function. Most notable of these implants is a replacement for his voice box, something that has changed his once youthful voice to be one far more daunting and hollow. The deep tone of which could easily confuse those who meet him of his true age.

This all remains well concealed beneath his attire. Light weight hooded robes flow over Dav'ids body adorned with a small amount of light armouring seen notably upon his arms, head and face. Finally, ceremonial shoulders offering nothing more than a bit of pazaz can be seen eloquently placed upon either shoulder, their colour scheme matching that of the rest of his attire. This outfit provides him with an ample level of warmth, mobility and protection as well as being cheap to repair and replace if needed.

This outcast now returns to the wider galaxy, hidden behind a vale of mystery and keeping comfortably within the shadows. He seeks to claim the knowledge that was once refused so that he may finally carry out what he believes to now be his purpose.

Simply...
The Irradiation of the Jedi.
The Irradiation of the Sith,
and the creation of a Unified Order of Force Users.




Story Continued​

 

[Tsunami]

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[Darasuum]

Text at top too dark. Can't read

also welcome back

 

[Tsunami]

Text at top too dark. Can't read

also welcome back

I'll brighten it up, just for you :)

 

[Brick]

Does this character have any gear? Ie: weapons, ships, droids. If so you'll have to also link them

=) welcome back buddy

 

[Tsunami]

Does this character have any gear? Ie: weapons, ships, droids. If so you'll have to also link them

=) welcome back buddy

Thank you very much, I have added the addition of the gear section. It really is as basic as it looks!

 

[The Good Doctor]

Can you put a height and weight on the profile? And if your character is going to have armor protection, it would need it's armor write-up.

The biography is fine, although it talks about 'despite this and due to the many years since his sentencing' The Jedi Order was only revealed to he galaxy and open to new members in the last 8 years IC (anyone in the order before that were very specific few people). 'Many' sounds like he would have left before that or pretty short order after he would have been able to join. So, can you clarify when he would have left the order?

 

[Tsunami]

Can you put a height and weight on the profile? And if your character is going to have armor protection, it would need it's armor write-up.

The biography is fine, although it talks about 'despite this and due to the many years since his sentencing' The Jedi Order was only revealed to he galaxy and open to new members in the last 8 years IC (anyone in the order before that were very specific few people). 'Many' sounds like he would have left before that or pretty short order after he would have been able to join. So, can you clarify when he would have left the order?

I shall find an armour that is fitting for the kit in generic tech, I don't fancy any of the crazy crafty stuff!

I can do those things for you sure! I'll probably edit it all Sunday, and will put a post when complete :)

 

[Tsunami]

Can you put a height and weight on the profile? And if your character is going to have armor protection, it would need it's armor write-up.

The biography is fine, although it talks about 'despite this and due to the many years since his sentencing' The Jedi Order was only revealed to he galaxy and open to new members in the last 8 years IC (anyone in the order before that were very specific few people). 'Many' sounds like he would have left before that or pretty short order after he would have been able to join. So, can you clarify when he would have left the order?

I would like to have this guys head have been affected by being one of the first to enter when the order was opened up to the wider populace. Think that's the best way that I can put a spin on the character as it would of added to this feeling of self importance that he has? I would say that possibly two years after that he would get cast out, which would give him enough time to of pissed the right people off, and enough time to have got a taste of the order/receive training.

If that seems in order and makes sense, then I can make those changes.

 

[The Good Doctor]

I would like to have this guys head have been affected by being one of the first to enter when the order was opened up to the wider populace. Think that's the best way that I can put a spin on the character as it would of added to this feeling of self importance that he has? I would say that possibly two years after that he would get cast out, which would give him enough time to of pissed the right people off, and enough time to have got a taste of the order/receive training.

If that seems in order and makes sense, then I can make those changes.

That sounds fine to me. Let me know when edits are done and I'll take another look.

 

[The Good Doctor]

@Tsunami are you still interested in pursuing this concept?