Fear Echo's Character Profile

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BIOGRAPHY


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NAME: Fear Echo
AGE: 26
SPECIES: Human

FACTION: Sith
RANK: Imperial Inquisitor

HEIGHT: 1.68 meters
WEIGHT: 67.93 kilograms
HAIR COLOR: Black
EYE COLOR: Brown

STRENGTH:
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DEXTERITY:
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STAMINA:
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INTELLIGENCE:
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WISDOM:
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CHARISMA:
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Chapter 1 Unknown Birth
On an unknown date on an unknown planet with unknown parents, an unnamed child was born. Only 2 weeks after his birth the Sith marched into his town hunting for all the force sensitives in the town. A Sith Lords named Gladius took the child and traveled with him to Korriban. There he was named Fear and trained brutally in the Sith arts. Gladius became his master and trained him in the arts of Sith Sorcerery to one day become an Imperial Inquisitor. His master trained him brutally with punishments, but at the same time left compassion for the young boy and took him under his wing like a son.

Chapter 2 Life on Korriban
As Fear tripped on a rock and fell head first into a sharp rock. The rock pierced through his skin, but lucky not through the skull. His master stairs at him in anger and embarrassment. Gladius was considered one of the most powerful Sith Assassins of all time after he successfully assassinated a Jedi Council member on Ilum and escaped without a scratch, his apprentice not so much. Fear almost never won a duel and the Dark Council were not even sure if they will keep him anymore. Fear knew the punishment for failing his master yet again, no food for a day and extra hard training and even some beatings. It may seem harsh, but Fear knew it was for the good of the Sith and his future. Fear has always tried to impress his master in many ways. It wasn't just to become a Sith or to climb the ranks. He wanted to know more, he wanted to know more about his past. Who were his parents? What was his real name? Where in the galaxies was he from? So many questions, but not a lot of answers.

Chapter 3 Yoori
Fear was called into the Dark Council chambers for unknown reasons. As he went up the elevator each level getting darker by the second he knew that this can't be good. He exited the elevator and he saw the top ranking Dark Council members staring at him. Fear walked slowly into the chambers and noticed his master in the corner staring at him he doesn't seem that pleased, but also not vexed. One of the council members spoke,"Fear the council has been deciding your fate for quite some time and if it had not been for your master's pleas to give you a second chance you would not be standing in front of us right now." Another council member spoke," We have decided to have Yoori temporary train you and we will test your skills in the upcoming tournament. Yoori was a former Dark Council who now lives in the caves of Korriban. If you fail you will suffer the fate of the weak." Fear exited the chambers and traveled for three days in the middle of the Korriban waste land killing native monsters and crossing by some exiled acolytes. Fear was no match to combat them so he kept a low profile. When Fear made it to Master Yooris cave he found an old man on the floor with multiple red Holocrons floating around him. Fear wondered if this crippled old man can teach him anything useful. Yoori is a master of the Dark Side and is one of the red Sith pure blood. Fear was tortured, starved, and was trained brutally by Yoori. Fear was brainwashed no peace no mercy it's all a lie.

Chapter 4 Turning Point
It's time for the Acolyte/Initiate tournament. Master Yoori and Gladius stood on the corner watching Fear has he duels his first opponent. Fear gets force pushed back onto the wall, both of his masters frowned. Fear than jumped on his feet and used the force to throw his training saber towards the Acolyte knocking him out. As the games go by Fear is still keeping up, tell he noticed that he is was in the finals. His opponent was a Sith Acolyte Alexar Hun. Alexar was the Apprentice of a high ranking Dark Council member. As the duel goes on Fear gets slashed in the stomach by the Alexar's lightsaber. It leaves an everlasting mark which is still visible tell this day. Pain rushed through Fears blood and for the first time in his life he wanted revenge. He let out his anger and blew the entire arena with force lightning, uncontrollable force lightning. He tried to stop the lightning from destroying the temple, but it won't stop. Then he noticed the lightning was coming out of his body, not his hands. All the Sith Lords stare at the Acolyte wondering what in the world is he doing. Then a giant lightning bolt strikes Alexar Hun on his head leaving him on the floor motionless. The lightning stopped and slice took over the arena.

Chapter 5 Echo
Gladius walked towards Fear with a hint of a smile on his face." You have done well Echo." Fear is puzzled, he asks," Who is Echo, my lord?"
Before Gladius turned his back and walked away he responds,"It's the last name of a boy with no past." Fear noticed right away what this meant. He is Fear Echo.

Chapter 6 Crash on Jakku
Eight years passed and Fear is currently a Sith. Fear and his formal master Gladius were sent on a mission to hunt down an important Sith Holocron stolen by a group of pirates. They traced the pirates to their mother ship in the Jakku system. Gladius planned to board the ship secretly through the back, but Fear had other plans. Four Cloakshape Fighters appeared, but Fear went straight to the Mothership. Gladius flew to aid Fear but did not last long as a Jedi Fighter appeared out of nowhere and blew his ship. Fear stared in disbelief as all the fighters came straight for him. They all fired at Fear, but he was able to dodge most blasts. Fears fighter spun furiously down towards the surface of Jakku after getting shot 3 times in the wings. Time slowed down, Fear knew he will soon meet his master's fate and darkness.

Chapter 7 The Rangers
Fear had awoken, but he had no idea where he was now. He found his armor on a table about 2 feet away from him and his lightsaber with it. He examined his surround, it seemed to him like this is an old mechanics house because of all the ship parts in the room. Suddenly an old couple walks inside, they look like they were in their late 40s or early 50s. The man spoke," Hello, I am Janson Ranger and this is my wife Elizabeth Ranger. We found you in and your crashed ship in our backyard. Don't worry we are not going to harm you we are here to help." Fear wondered who the heck do these people think they are to say they can harm a Sith. Fear responds," Thank you very much Mr. and MS. Ranger now I would like my belongings so I can take my leave." Fear tries to stand up but noticed he had broken his back he moaned in pain and laid on the bed. Ms. Ranger looks worried and comments," You should rest a little longer you have fractured several bones and you have multiple scratches on your back. Our daughter Alexa Ranger is skilled in healing and she is coming for a visit and should be here by tomorrow." Fear didn't like relying on other people he feels it un Sith like, but he has no choice.

Chapter 8 Alexa Ranger
There was a knock on the door. Ms. Ranger opens the door and a young women in her 20s with brown eyes and hair and caramel colored skin ran inside the house with a ignited lightsaber in her hand." Mother, I sense a dark presence in the force are you alright?" The young women said. Ms. Ranger noded and wondered what her daughter was talking about. Fear noticed a light presence in the force and notices one fact the Rangers didn't tell them, Alexa is a Jedi. Alexa barged into the room Fear was recovering in and she points the lightsaber to his neck hesitate of what to do. Mr. Ranger walks inside holding a blaster wondering what happened. Alexa says in a firm voice," Father did you notice that you are keeping a Sith in your house!" Her father nodded and says," Alexa it's not your business of who I let in my house keep your Jedi business out of here." Alexa un ignited her lightsaber and stared at her father for a good 5 seconds and said," If the Jedi know about him I will be in big trouble." Alexa exited the room and started arguing with her mother over healing the Sith. Fear felt like that he needed to leave before he started any problems, he tried to stand up but ultimately failed. After arguing for 1 hour Alexa agreed to heal the Sith Lord if he left the next day no ifs or buts. Fear laid on the bed as Alexa used force heal on him. She doesn't seem happy to be doing this and doesn't even look at him.

Chapter 10 Alexa's Turn
The next day came and footsteps can be heard from outside. The door to the Rangers house blew open and 4 New Republic troopers and 2 Jedi walked in. "Where is the Sith!" one of them says. Alexa responded with," What Sith there are no Sith here." The Jedi stared at her and shook his head," Troopers take care of the traitor Jedi Knight James follow me." All of a sudden Mr. Ranger jumped in blaster out finger on the trigger. "Get away from my daughter or you and your force monks won't like it." The two Jedi didn't give a second thought and they use the force to push Mr. Ranger onto the wall and he lays there motionless blood trickling down his nose. Alexa yelled in rage igniting her two lightsabers and she used the force to boost her stamina and heal her wounds she killed all the troopers in ease and duels both Jedi at once. " Jedi Knight Alexa stand down now!" says one of the Jedi. Alexa then throws her saber at the Jedi Knight James and slashes him in two. After seeing his comrade die the second Jedi force lifts Alexa which soon becomes a force choke. Alexa gasped for air surprised that a Jedi would use such a dark force power. Then a red light exited the Jedi's stomach and he fell to the ground. Fear than reveals himself," You might as well give up on the Jedi they are hypocrites only another force using order looking for power. The only difference between them and Sith are that they don't admit the truth." Alexa stared at him and a smile slowly formed on Fears face.

Chapter 11 Unexplained Feelings
Fear and Alexa have been training for six months now. Fear found it odd that just a few months ago she wished to kill him and now they are getting along pretty well. Fear seemed a little connected to Alexa an odd feeling he had never had with anyone, not even his master. As Fear trained Alexa he kept on thinking of his master's recent death. Fear was most likely assumed dead by the Sith and Alexa is now a traitor in the eyes of the New Republic which is a challenge. As Fear sat outside watching the Jakku sunset thinking about his return to Korriban and how to make them accept Alexa as his apprentice. Fear him self-doesn't have any more than 14 years as a Sith and most Sith don't get an apprentice tell they make it to 25 or 20 years after acolyte/initiate hood. Alexa then comes outside and sat next to him she asked him some questions and he didn't respond. Fear wondered if she looked up to him like he used to look up to his master or was it different. Alexa moved a little closer to Fear and Fear felt a little dazed of her actions. Fear than felt the eager to lean closer towards her untell they were head and head. Then darkness descended upon Jakku.

Chapter 12 Truth
Now 8 months passed since Fear had crashed on Jakku. Alexa admitted her feelings for Fear and their marriage ceremony was today. Fear is now sweating more than there is water on Mon Cala. Fear didn't know what the Sith will think of him now, he crashed on Jakku assumed dead, he took his own apprentice without council approval, and now he is getting a wife.

Chapter 13 Back
One month after the marriage Fear and his wife Alexa travel back to Korriban. The Dark Council accepted Alexa if she gave them some Jedi intel. Fear is now on Korriban awaiting a nother chapter to unfold.


Skills


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PRACTICAL SKILLS

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Slicing

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Survival

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Tracking

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Hunting

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Leadership

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Invest.

COMBAT SKILLS

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Lightsaber

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Blaster

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Misc.

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Demo.

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Force

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Pilot

EDUCATION

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Huttese


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Ryl

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Tactics

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Politics

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Espionage

Lightsaber Forms:
Shii-Cho: 6/10
Makashi: 7/10
Ataru: 4/10
Shien/Djem So: 6/10
Soresu: 6/10
Juyo: 8/10

Force Powers:
Fundamentals: 10/10
Acrobatics: 4/10
Energy Manipulation: 8/10
Telekinesis: 7/10
Healing: 1/10
Status Effects: 3/10
Trances: 5/10
Senses: 8/10
Mental Manipulation: 5/10
























LEGACY


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EQUIPMENT
Armor
—Sith Stalker Armor
—No Function

Weapon
—Lightsaber
—Red crystal

Other
—Grappling hook
—1 Bacta Grenade
—6 10 meter extra ropes

Other



Family — (Wife) Alexa Ranger

Enemies—
Friends—
Masters — Galius and Yoori
Apprentices — Alexa Ranger
X58-class interceptor — ://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/sith-empire-technology.64216/

Droids — X2-C3 Imperial Astromech (Blink)
Kills —
Roleplays — Rise of Darth Fenris


 
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Kuroshi

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Hey welcome to SWRP! reading over your profile there seems to be a few issues present in the backstory as well as a few other things.

Profile issues:
  • The use of two Darth level sith as masters. The title of Darth is one held exclusively by player characters, so you'll have to change that part to just an influential sith marauder.
  • It seems like you switched from past tense to present tense half way through the biography. Generally speaking past tense is used, since they're past events and all.
  • Skillset. You say he trained for 14 years, which is all well and good, but to be at least competent or more skilled in all saber forms and roughly the same for force abilities is a bit much. Jedi and sith practice for years, decades even to master their abilities in the force and lightsaber combat.
  • Ship. The Fury-class Interceptor isn't an approved piece of technology, and I'm afraid that linking the wiki won't be enough. You'll need to do a tech profile for it and wait to use it or use one of the approved ships in the tech boards or sith tech boards.
  • Armor. For the armor listed it says "sith stalker armor, medium", which isn't very helpful for pvp situations. You can have it be just generic armor, but you'd need to list armor rating for it. But I suggest looking over tech boards, again, to find an armor that suits your needs. I would recommend the Inquisition armor, but keep in mind that force sensitives can't have armor with functions.
  • Small grammar and spelling errors. It's nothing too major, but I notice sentences like "don't get an apprentice tell they make it to". You may want to correct those.
  • Sith inquisitor. The sith inquisition wasn't formed until about 5 or 6 years before where we are right now in the timeline, so you might want to see about editing him being an inquisitor prior to that point and have him join the inquisition some time during the 5 years before present day.
  • The name sees super edgy for no reason?? This last one is just personal preference, but I'm not sure why anyone would name their child "Feer Echo".
That's all I can see just from skimming it, but don't feel discouraged about the character. You have a decent base but it just needs improvement. You'll want to go and put the character up for signup in the sith inquisition found here, and I'm sure that Sith leadership can judge the profile better than I can.
 
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