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Braden Drake

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What is going to happen in your plot? Artacus and Rax are hired by an Onderon noble to help in re-taking his land from an evil cousin. After successfully re-taking the land and fortifying the nobles position, 'Dynast Arms' Artacus security company receive their first big contract and can begin to establish themselves in the Mid Rim.

What other writers (and their characters) will be a part of this? @Braden Drake @Alhon

Where are all the locations in which your plot will take place? Onderon

Please provide a basic in-character timeline of what you expect to happen. Include opposition type for each thread:

Noble in Need - Self DM/Dice - Artacus and Rax land on Onderon and meet with their new client, Marton a Onderon noble has been kicked out of his estates by his cousin and paid off the local law enforcement with some of the compounds treasures to secure his position. Marton's bodyguard served with Artacus in the past and recommended the Military Contractor to his employer. After getting the low down of what happened the pair recon the main compound and possibly run into some sentries.

Insert Grenade Here - Self DM/Dice - To help soften up the automated defences the pair along with some hired security take out the nearby power supply to the compound.

Over the Walls - Self DM/Dice - The pair complete the re-taking of the nobles land by taking out the compounds security and neutralizing the Nobles cousin and his personal guards.

A Stroll through the Rubble - Self DM/Dice - Artacus helps organise the clearing of the compound and reorganises his security, the noble offers them to stay by instead Artacus turns it into a business deal turning 'Dynast Arms' into more than a two person company.

What do you or your character hope to achieve with this plot? What is the "end-game?” Link any items you’re seeking if applicable.

@Artacus Dynast - The set up of a security contract on Onderon, giving 'Dynast Arms' ten combat NPC's and two Non-Combat NPC's.
@Rax Khan - Though nothing directly, Rax will be using the influence of the noble to help find him a FS teacher in the future.

Do you need any involvement of canon NPCs or faction leaders to be DMed by a staff member? If so, please detail who/what and for what purpose. No
 
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Darasuum

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Can you maybe expand (at least in character) why this is the sort of thing that the local authorities aren't getting involved in at the beginning? Why did the noble not just get the police to help him out?

I think this can be made into 4 threads instead of 3 at least. There's a fair amount to do in each thread.

Make the "retaking of the compound" one thread and then all the afterwards stuff with the noble its own thread.
 

Braden Drake

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@Darasuum I have given some more backstory to the take over and the reason why Artacus has been given the job. Also extended the number of threads to 4. Let me know if it needs anything else.
 

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This looks good. Approved. Sorry for taking so long.
 
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