Approved In Sickness and in Health

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What is going to happen in your plot?
Something has happened on Chandrila. A planet of eternal comfort has become a place of sudden disease. In Chandrila's capital Hanna City a disease has begun spreading amongst the populace. Emergency services are overworked, and the strains veracity is making it hard for regular medicines to respond effectively. The city is on the edge of lockdown.
Word of the dramatic events has reached the Jedi Order, who have reached out to offer their assistance. There is much work to be done in the capital to help the city contain the outbreak, and save those who are infected. The Jedi have come to use their healing powers to fight off the worst infections, help transport medical assistance to where its needed most, negotiate with nearby worlds for assistance, and help maintain calm in a desperate populace.

What other writers (and their characters) will be a part of this?
Will look for interest.

How many threads will this plot have?
4. One inspecting and helping heal the worst sick that have been cloistered inside a medical facility for fear of it spreading. One to engage in diplomacy with nearby worlds to send doctors, there governments afraid of the infection spreading. Another working to escort those medical supplies and doctors from nearby worlds to Chandrila. And one to help negotiate with scared local communities who are afraid of the fallout, and of help not reaching them in time.

Include opposition type for each thread (DM, dice, ASK/OPEN, etc):
Self-DM or Dice.

What do you or your character hope to achieve with this plot? What is the "end-game?” Link any items you’re seeking if applicable.
By assisting a core planet the Jedi will help start to lessen the fear and mystery of them to the Free Worlds Alliance and Sector Rangers. Equally they will gain some reputation on Chandrila.

Do you need any involvement of canon/site NPCs or faction leaders to be DMed by a staff member? If so, please detail who/what and for what purpose.
No.
 
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You mention an "artifact" but don't define what it is well enough to make me feel comfortable approving this. The same goes for the extent of the sickness. Is this a 90% death rate for force sensitives or something? That kind of stuff needs to be defined before this plot can be approved.

Please choose a set number for threads.
 

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If you're dead set on this artifact that affects force sensitives and does so on the scale stated above it's going to need a write up. It's a single artifact that can cause death and affect an entire planet. Not to mention this plot would need to be longer than just three or even four threads.

I would actually suggest a normal sickness of some kind that the Jedi provide aid. It doesn't exactly scream "I'm friendly to everyone" when the jedi only go to help only sick force sensitives. It makes it look like they prioritize force sensitive health over non force sensitives. (unless that's what you want)
 

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Sure sure that's fair, I meant as more like 'huh, we can't solve this problem, maybe we can try asking the Jedi' given that they're not totally accepted in the Core. so that'd be sort of a bigger move for people to ask them for help, if that makes sense? But can edit to a regular sickness too :) Didn't want to show the apparent priority you mentioned, in which case I realise I should probably phrase it as 'The government has brought it to the attention of the Jedi and their assistance has been requested' to show its a reaching out to them, rather than what you suggest it might appear as.

Maybe its just affecting a city, or even just a town, scale wise that is. Perhaps not affecting Force sensitives but just folks nearby. Didn't mean it to be massive, just sufficiently severe and peculiar as to warrant having to reach out.

But again, happy to edit to just a plague and have Jedi offer assistance to a disease outbreak! Was just trying to explain how I meant the context to be. Let me know your thoughts!
 

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Considering the Jedi Order doesn't have significant enough (positive) reputation Chandrilla I would say that they would not be asking specifically for the Jedi's assistance. However the Jedi are all about volunteering so providing assistance without being asked seems like a good option.

I think perhaps the main city of Chandrilla or a significant metropolitan area makes sense. It doesn't need to be a planet wide plague.

Let me know when you've made the edits since it looks like you still have the artifact above. I'll review again when edits have been made. Considering the change would be to a medical and not a force based pursuit a significant amount of changes need to be made to the plot. It rely's a lot on the force dark side/light side in the premise still.
 
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