Jorren Vel'Sana Training
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((Much better. Now just continue the technique to completion. Have fun with it though. Break up the days your training with interactions with the temple. Try to create an environment to interact in. develop npcs, eating habits. Its a lot of fun.))
(( Been busy the past couple weeks with midterms, sorry. ))
Jorrel had been returning to the fountain every day since being sent there from his master, he had met a fellow apprentice while trying this technique and they had practiced side by side with each other, since their first encounter. Jorrel wasn't too sure how to pronounce his name correctly, but he believed it was something along the lines of Ha'ilruk. After a couple days of the same vigorously training sessions he was able to do it much easier and could hold a conversation with his friend while forming the bubble. The last morning of training before returning to his master, he met with Ha'ilruk for breakfast. They ate together in the mess hall before returning to their training at the fountains.
Jorrel worked the technique for a couple hours before standing back to his feet and bowing to his companion. "I think this is all that's required for my fountain training, see you tomorrow at breakfast!" He waved a goodbye before walking off and heading up a few levels to where he had met with his master around a week before. Waving his hand over the sensor, the door slid open with a soft hiss. He strode into the room and bowed where he saw a figure. "Hello, Master. I think I have completed my training on the technique." He stated, raising back up to his full height.
Jorrel had been returning to the fountain every day since being sent there from his master, he had met a fellow apprentice while trying this technique and they had practiced side by side with each other, since their first encounter. Jorrel wasn't too sure how to pronounce his name correctly, but he believed it was something along the lines of Ha'ilruk. After a couple days of the same vigorously training sessions he was able to do it much easier and could hold a conversation with his friend while forming the bubble. The last morning of training before returning to his master, he met with Ha'ilruk for breakfast. They ate together in the mess hall before returning to their training at the fountains.
Jorrel worked the technique for a couple hours before standing back to his feet and bowing to his companion. "I think this is all that's required for my fountain training, see you tomorrow at breakfast!" He waved a goodbye before walking off and heading up a few levels to where he had met with his master around a week before. Waving his hand over the sensor, the door slid open with a soft hiss. He strode into the room and bowed where he saw a figure. "Hello, Master. I think I have completed my training on the technique." He stated, raising back up to his full height.
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((sorry about the wait, I kinda got banned for a bit and some other stuff.))
"Follow me then." Niva lead the padawan to a speeder and took him to one of the poorer sectors. "Now, while I wait here, i want you to try and heal as many people as you can."
"Follow me then." Niva lead the padawan to a speeder and took him to one of the poorer sectors. "Now, while I wait here, i want you to try and heal as many people as you can."
Jorren followed his master to the speeder and hopped in, watching the scenery go past him in a quick blur he recognized the area as one he had passed on his way in. Filled with the most poor of Coruscant. "Heal people? Right, are you sure I should be training on real people? What if I mess up.."
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"We'll be working in the slums." Niva smiled. "Nuka discovered it first, but the people in the slums are so sick, that we literally can't do more harm than good."
The speeder landed and they exited. "Feel free to explore on your own while I watch the speeder. Comm me if you run into any issues."
The speeder landed and they exited. "Feel free to explore on your own while I watch the speeder. Comm me if you run into any issues."
Jorrel took a deep breath, he really didn't want to mess up and hurt anybody. He made a vow in his head to try and do as much as he could do help these people while he was here. "Just explore?" He grasped onto the speeders frame before continuing. "I think I can handle that.." Jorrel leaped from the speeder and was barely down the street when a beggar had approached him for credits. He knew that Jedi had no need for credits, but still he had been given some from his parents before he left them. He grabbed a few out from the inner pocket of his robes and handed it to the man. Accepting the thanks from the beggar he bowed and continued down the street. Jorrel had ended up in an alleyway and looked up to the buildings above him, dirty and falling apart. It was a shame that even poverty existed on this planet.
He was more surprised that even with the Jedi here there were still some that suffered. Banishing these thoughts from his head for the moment, a group of vicious looking thugs approached the young Jedi. "Hand over the money, and we may let you live." The biggest, and stupidest looking one said. Jorrel thought of him as the leader of the group, but had no intentions of fighting. Gathering up the force in his legs, just as he had in training, he jumped from where he was, onto another building. The thugs took a moment to take this in, which was all Jorrel needed. Once he hit the building he did it again towards the next, and grasped onto the ledge. Using his upper body strength he pulled himself onto the roof of the building and propped himself against a vent. He pulled his commlink from the same pocket he kept his credit pouch in and spoke into it, the message relaying to his master. "Ran into a bit of trouble, just some local thugs.. I evaded them. Just thought I'd let you know."
Once Jorrel felt his physical and emotional strength and been recovered he got back to his feet. Looking across the alleyway he had jumped from minutes before, he decided that was enough exploring and to head back to his master. Doing the familiar force jump he leaped across to the other building. Rolling to avoid injuries to his legs he stood up and took off in a run. Taking the rooftops was probably the safest way to get back to his master. Jorrel made another few jumps and saw the familiar speeder he had left from a few hours before. One last accurate jump and he hit the ground in a roll just a few meters from the speeder. Recovering, he stood up and approached the speeder. Hopping in he returned to the Jedi Order.
He was more surprised that even with the Jedi here there were still some that suffered. Banishing these thoughts from his head for the moment, a group of vicious looking thugs approached the young Jedi. "Hand over the money, and we may let you live." The biggest, and stupidest looking one said. Jorrel thought of him as the leader of the group, but had no intentions of fighting. Gathering up the force in his legs, just as he had in training, he jumped from where he was, onto another building. The thugs took a moment to take this in, which was all Jorrel needed. Once he hit the building he did it again towards the next, and grasped onto the ledge. Using his upper body strength he pulled himself onto the roof of the building and propped himself against a vent. He pulled his commlink from the same pocket he kept his credit pouch in and spoke into it, the message relaying to his master. "Ran into a bit of trouble, just some local thugs.. I evaded them. Just thought I'd let you know."
Once Jorrel felt his physical and emotional strength and been recovered he got back to his feet. Looking across the alleyway he had jumped from minutes before, he decided that was enough exploring and to head back to his master. Doing the familiar force jump he leaped across to the other building. Rolling to avoid injuries to his legs he stood up and took off in a run. Taking the rooftops was probably the safest way to get back to his master. Jorrel made another few jumps and saw the familiar speeder he had left from a few hours before. One last accurate jump and he hit the ground in a roll just a few meters from the speeder. Recovering, he stood up and approached the speeder. Hopping in he returned to the Jedi Order.
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