So there wouldn't be any Sith who would just attack? What about any other organisation that would anger Bren to the point of this?Okay, I understand your reasons behind Karn and his two personalities, but some things will need to be corrected in regards to his story.
- There are no Sith, or remnants of the Sith to be hunted. It is believed that they no longer exist and, the Sith Eternal only just emerged from the Unknown Regions. This means that there would be nothing for Bren's parents to hunt and no one to come after them. This will need to be corrected.
- Unfortunately, this also means that the idea his father abused his other personality would have no reasoning behind it because he wouldn't know there was any organization to infiltrate and no deep seeded hatred from the Sith to begin with.
- I also would like to note that 'Mind Shard' or the ability to read minds isn't a casual force ability but rather a very painful tactic used primarily for interrogations. If Karn did happen across a Sith Legionnaire, he would not have casually read his mind to determine how deep his hatred was for his father. It is also a very dangerous technique and requires a lot of control and focus to avoid rendering the target a vegetable. Also, had he actually read Karn's mind, how did he miss the fact that Deke wants to destroy the Sith Eternal?
Please rework this story to fit in with the timeline and tag me once completed.
Presumably there are legends of the Sith, right? It's not a rational assumption, he lost his parents and he goes insane and thinks there's a bigger conspiracy.As for the second part, what would lead him to believe it was the Sith that killed his parents, when they've been gone for 100 years? I guess it would depend on your answer as to whether or not it would be realistic for the storyline.