master of puppets

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The strong manipulates the weak through strings. That is actually how things go in this vast universe, but well actually the kind of strings varies. Some people use money, some use weapons, some use fear, and some people use even drugs to manipulate others. However I decided to use normal strings to manipulate things around me.


"master of puppets is pulling your strings twisting your mind, and smashing your dreams. Blinded by me you can't see a thing just call my name cause I will hear you scream."​

Let me tell you my story from the beginning. It was full of sadness, and I won't forget it. I was born in a small town that was located on the beautiful planet of Naboo. I was born with dark hair, black eyes, and pale skin. My looks were charming, but they looked evil, and scary. That was a fact. I had a dark, and mysterious looks, but I had a darker and more mysterious personality. Ok back to the story now. Let’s take things calm, slowly, and patiently. After all these were three traits in me that were the reason for my survival. Anyways since the day I was born I was pretty smart. I always liked to play mind games with everyone in my neighborhood. I always won, but I ended up being beaten up, and made fun of cause of my weird personality. And well the same thing happened when I went to school. I was the smartest student, and the one who always got the highest grades in my class. However I was still beaten up, and made fun of cause of being weird. I have always been an unsociable bookworm, and that is well something I really appreciated since people do not deserve any trust.


Day, by day I started to grow up, and more talents started to show up. Indeed I started to control things by using my brain. But well in fact I was actually using the force. Yeah I was force sensitive, and that was something that made my life really bad. Normally anyone would be happy for finding out that he got such a special talent. However the people in my town on Naboo hated force users, and they even hated Jedi. And that is why I tried to hide my nature for so long. However everything was soon discovered when I was really bothered by a bunch of kids. I ran back home, and started to cry. But then something weird happened. All of the lights went out, and my mirror broke out. And sadly the kids who made fun of me followed me around. Yeah they followed me to my home, and they were able to see everything. They saw the broken mirror, the lights turning off, and my eyes, my eyes that turned red some how. The kids then ran away, and spread the news every where.

My life was now getting worse. And every day I was getting hated more, and more. However my parents stayed protective to me for so long. The other citizens who lived at the same town as us tried to outcast me, and well they even tried to kill me, but gladly my parents were always there for me. However that did not help me a lot. I still got many scares on my body from the many attacks I have been under. But gladly my suffering did not last for so long. Finally a Jedi arrived, and offered to take me to the Jedi temple. I was so happy, and even my parents were happy. Finally I was going to be in a safe place. Finally I was going to be around people who are similar to me. So with the Jedi I left...

At the beginning my life in the Jedi temple was amazing. I was probably one of the smartest padwans around, and I was able to master force telekinetic, and Jedi mind tricks easily, and fast. Even my ways of using them were unique. I was famous with these skills all around the Jedi temple, and well my master that one day I was going to be a great Jedi counselor. However that did not really happen. Actually on one of the training sessions I lost control over my emotions, and destroyed my master's brain. I made his brain hurt him so much that he even killed himself. And well that was probably the second time my eyes turned red. And once again my life turned badly.

For the next few years I have been locked down in the Jedi temple under the eyes of the masters. Everyone there was scared from me, and in my opinion I was treated badly. However the Jedi did their best to help me, yet they could not do anything to help me, and more time passed until I finally met her. Her name was Valerie, and she was a young and charming Jedi healer who tried to help me. She understood me well, and so did I. We both actually love each other. However in a moment of anger I killed her, and that was the third time my eyes turned red. And that was also when I turned from the good and kind boy who had no control over his emotions into a nasty killer who killed for fun.


Yeah I escaped from the Jedi temple, and then I went to live in a small abandoned house with the rats. Guess what I also I used my creativity and the wood around to make a puppet of the only girl I loved, and I even used ropes, and tied them to the puppet's body. I actually learned all of that from an old puppet master who used to come to our town, and make some shows. However my skills where amazing. Through my telekinesis skills and through my fingers skills I was able to manipulate the puppet very good. The puppet actually seemed to be real every time I manipulated it. However that was not the end of my story. I actually turned in to a killer. I killed my victims, and took their brains, and hearts. I then usually reserved the brains and hearts until I made puppets that looked like them, and placed the brains, and hearts inside. However that was not everything. I even putted weapons in them. Imagine I had a huge army of puppets that shot bullets, held swords, and even dropped bombs, However they did not do that on their on actually. I controlled them by using my telekinetic skills, and by using the strings I made from ropes to manipulate them.

Living beings cannot be trusted. The only thing that I learned to trust were my puppets, and that is why I will kill any living being I see, and turn him in to a puppet of mine. You can call me crazy, but well that is how life is. The strong manipulates the weak. The Jedi manipulates the republic, and the Hutts manipulates the criminals that work under them. If you think you can kill me then go ahead, and try to kill a forty years old skinny, and short human who got an army of deadly puppets.
 
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looks like MJ.

I actually got the idea of making this character while I was listening to master of puppets by metallica. :CHappy: Also I got some inspiration from the ninjas that controled puppets in naruto :D
 

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That doesn't explain the resemblence to the late King of Pop.
 

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That doesn't explain the resemblence to the late King of Pop.

you know I just noticed now that the guy in the pic looks a little bit like MJ, but well not that much actually. That is if you are talking about the picture.
 

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The overall sense of it wasn't bad, but I found it pretty cliche, and I didn't particularly like the grammar and wording.

Still, not bad.
 

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The overall sense of it wasn't bad, but I found it pretty cliche, and I didn't particularly like the grammar and wording.

Still, not bad.


Wooow!!! somebody actually said something useful over here. :CAbove: well I know that the idea is pretty old but well in my opinion rping with a puppet master in a star wars universe sounds fun, and unique. Oh and about the grammar, and wording I well... try to do better in every new profile I make.
 

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That would be the best game ever!

@samowise, it made me think of Metallica btw

Yea :CHappy: after all I did use two lines from the song in my profile, but well I am still trying to find out the relationship between the Profile, and MJ :D
 

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Yea :CHappy: after all I did use two lines from the song in my profile, but well I am still trying to find out the relationship between the Profile, and MJ :D

It doesn't look like michael jackson, it looks like a super emo kid I new from high school.
 

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Err, looks like MJ to me. (which disturbs me, as the man's appearance in his final years scared the living hell outta me. Well, he generally disturbs me anyway, but eh.) And, yes, puppet masters is a bit overdone. That's why I'm making an aim to have my new criminal character -not- be like that, or a simple thug. But, eh, he's your character, and I don't intend to discourage you in using him, simply stating my opinion.
 

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It doesn't look like michael jackson, it looks like a super emo kid I new from high school.

well isn't that just sweet :CStern: lol
Err, looks like MJ to me. (which disturbs me, as the man's appearance in his final years scared the living hell outta me. Well, he generally disturbs me anyway, but eh.) And, yes, puppet masters is a bit overdone. That's why I'm making an aim to have my new criminal character -not- be like that, or a simple thug. But, eh, he's your character, and I don't intend to discourage you in using him, simply stating my opinion.

It is not really overdone I never saw anyone really rping with a puppet master. At least not here.
 

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I used to have a puppeteer.
 

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Not in this timeline, but in the last one there was one, as was the timeline before that. Looks like a fun character, but it's not to terribly original. Then again, what is original these days?
 
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