my improved sitlath i hope this doesnt also get put in archive its less like how i made it before

[ren darken]

sitlath are a species commonly known for there teeth and hand holes ? but there hand holes will start to glow when they use the force diet : blood that they consume with the holes in

there hands they can also eat anything organic. breeding : they go upside down with there love interest on a ceiling but if there love interest is human they have a way to keep the blood from rushing to there heads . strengths : the dark side of the force claws and speed. weaknesses : the light side if used against them and the cold do to how cold there blood is . ability's : bat wings used to glide to corrupt a lightsaber by touching it with there hand which lets them wield it and eco location . history : when they were first discovered they were thought about as the ancestors of the anzati and they were acually right because before the anzati existed there were sitlath who came from another planet but some decided to find another home so they went to the planet anzat but those ones transformed do to the atmosphere as what dna they had was effected it made them another species but the remaining sitlath on there true planet sitmeton the other thing about them is they had many more sharp teeth then like in the myths and there wings for gliding look something like this oh and there teeth are a valuable resource they are hunted for even though that practice was banned there are still many poachers

sleep: sitlath is they usually like to sleep during the day while upside down on a cave ceiling somewhere they also have made tech before any other species . behavior : they usually find victims that are alone and kill them but the ones who have held back there nature dont kill unless they are being attacked or see a non sentient being . the 3 sitlath clans: renki known for bravery a justice who defend the humans at all cost rengu known for there stealth tactics and kunriu the clan most known for there violent methods

 

[The Good Doctor]

These are still reading like fantasy vampires, even if you tack on mentions of the Force and the Dark Side on them. Grammar and spell still need to be heavily improved upon (these write-ups need to be able to clearly convey information to the other readers) There is also required infomation still missing. But those are not the main issue. You are probably going to have to make peace that the concept doesn't translate into star wars (again, the Anzat are going to be the closest you are getting).

Also, I'm pretty much going to have point to what I said before here. And I'm going to ask that you refrain from submitting any more lore content (lore, species, planet, tech, factions/organizations) any time soon until you start roleplaying, accumulating some experience on the site, and getting used to how this place works.

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