My View on the New Chiss Immortals

Alexander Dregar

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This is a rough draft/idea, anything you guys want to add in? Any ideas? Just let me know! I have much more I am going to add, but felt like giving you the basic idea as I have it so far.



The Chiss Immortals are the single most fearsome military group in the galaxy. They are fearless, intelligent, highly trained, and incredibly well equipped. They combine the Phoenix Virus, with young Chiss, making them force sensitive, then train them in the ways of the force, as well as in military combat and tactics. When they pass Immortals basic training, and reach the age of thirteen, nearly all Immortals are given cybernetic enhancements, to further their abilities. These enhancements will then be upgraded their entire lives, with the latest and best. Immortals technology is a source of pride for the entire Chiss race. It is the best in the galaxy, giving the Immortals the edge in any battle.

Children are brought in at the age of three, and it is a source of great pride and honor for their families to have them taken. From that point on, all they will know is war, combat, and the force. Loyalty is conditioned into them from the age of four on. Loyalty to the Imperator, and the Chiss Ascendancy above all else. Taught that victory is what matters, not how you attain it, the Immortals are trained to be morally flexible, to do anything to ensure victory.

An Immortal will never surrender, they will fight to their last breath, and should capture appear impossible to avoid, they will kill themselves to keep the technology and their own knowledge out of enemy hands, using a small explosive inside their battle suit. This explosive also goes off, should the Immortal die in combat. However, they also understand the value of retreat when the time calls. Sometimes it is better to pull back, and regroup, to ensure victory, rather than being hot headed and eager to die.

They are hell when unleashed, a mixture of the force, flesh, and machine, not even the powerful Mandalorians could survive one on one, against a trained Immortal. Their abilities in the force, and technology allow these soldiers to go up against superior numbers, and walk away the victors, in nearly any engagement.

“Honor exists only in the mind, only victory and loyalty are real.” - Immortals Saying
 

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I have a question. Was the Phoenix Virus ever admin-approved?
 

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As if I would know! ^^ I am writing it in there because BN told me to :p I think the Phoenix virus was being introduced a little before when I joined, or right then, before I knew what was going on. So I have no a clue! I can always change it to just any force sensitive children.
 

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I have a question. Was the Phoenix Virus ever admin-approved?

It was, and it over went the faction reviews with an 'ok' button.

Few things Alex. We should include that, while not are selected at age 3, FS Chiss of all ages as well as Non-Chiss FS are allowed to join(non-Chiss being our 'immortal knights'). The Phoenix virus is a killer thing that only slightly enhances Force Sensitivity while heavily heaving physical abilities. It shouldn't be relied upon to give Chiss FSensitivity, but rather only to increase it in those that are already FS. Also, the Phoenix virus kills half of the Chiss it infects and all of non-Chiss species, a quick allusion to that would be good. Lastly, because the virus is so deadly, it should only be given to those over 17-18 years of age(telling people we are giving three year olds a deadly virus to make them strong is not a good way to restart the immortals xD).
 

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telling people we are giving three year olds a deadly virus to make them strong is not a good way to restart the immortals xD

GA propaganda (oh wait, there isn't one) would have a field day with that.
 
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