New Sith, Imperials, Indies- Time to grab yourself a slice of glory on the battlefield.

[Infintus]

Hola mi amigos
Work was long last week. I don't know if you've ever had the pleasure of working sixteen hour shifts but it is not something I recommend.
I am hoping this week will be better (Should I not return assume that I overdosed on caffeine in an effort to stay awake.) but bear with me.

It's wrist's turn next and I've added the posting order to the first post of this thread in case you missed it.

I shall now revert to eating ice cream while watching Rick and Morty to ease my Sunday blues.
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Loved your post on the non-ooc forum, blessed writing.

 

[Infintus]

I'm going crazy waiting for the next post, as much as this is only a Sith forum, I am loving this event.

 

[The Good Doctor]

@DraconicPsycho is next right?

 

[Dark child]

@DraconicPsycho is next right?

Yeppers.

Then Infinitus
Then Dawn
Then D.va

Oops
I mean you.

Sorry luv

 

[DraconicPsycho]

Ill get a post up in a minute or two.

 

[Dark child]

This feels very DND to me, and I love it!!! If you'll have me, I'd love to be involved in a thread, particularly one involving @DraconicPsycho as Soren will possibly end up being his master. Either way I'd love to be a part in any way possible...

I was pretty tired the other day, completely forgot to reply to this. I'd be glad to include Soren in the campaign.

Ill get a post up in a minute or two.

No rush Psycho bro. Just take your time and have fun with it. The more you get into the character the easier it becomes to write them.

 

[The Good Doctor]

Yeah no hurries

Then D.va

lol

 

[Sarah]

Whoops, got mixed up with whose character I'm doing what with. It's infinitus I may be teaching, Draco is on his own I'm pretty sure

 

[Dark child]

@Infintus
You can post if you want since it most likely will not affect Draconic's post.​

 

[Infintus]

Yeppers.

Then Infinitus
Then Dawn
Then D.va

Oops
I mean you.

Sorry luv

When does Soren come into the picture? I'd really like to get Varian and Soren finally united.

 

[The Good Doctor]

I think he is going to be in another thread concerning the Afann campaign.

 

[Infintus]

I think he is going to be in another thread concerning the Afann campaign.

The Arfann campaign? When and what is that?

 

[The Good Doctor]

The Arfann campaign? When and what is that?

The thread we are in is on set on Arfann in the city of Damash. And Dark Child mention this could be a series of battles concerning the planet, with Lazarus being the first.

 

[Infintus]

The thread we are in is on set on Arfann in the city of Damash. And Dark Child mention this could be a series of battles concerning the planet, with Lazarus being the first.

Ahhhh, I remember now. Thank you.

 

[Dark child]

When does Soren come into the picture? I'd really like to get Varian and Soren finally united.

The Afann campaign will be several threads involving both major and minor conflicts across the planet with new enemies, allies, and obstacles.

I would prefer that Soren wait for another thread since I am already going to have a difficult time fighting two Sith at once.

I can see that your posts are getting better. I do however have a couple things to point out about the last one. I'm sure Faster will concur with this.

"He releases me, his hands shaking, he put quite a bit of effort into getting a reaction from my suffering"
This implies that Blightwing had great difficulty attempting to choke Varian.
While that may be true depending on what Faster decides to write, it is not up to you to make that choice for Faster. You can resist attacks and I like the bit about seeing the rage within Blightwing's eyes (which is fine to say since you can describe appearances to some degree.) but by saying that Blightwing's hands were shaking you are controlling another player's character and not allowing them to write the character as they want.

"He clenches his fist, his other hand hidden in his rear, he is on guard, his body stood up straight and proud, but slightly shifted to his flank, preparing a counter, in case I want to end his petty existence, maybe later."
This sentence is an even more prominent example of forcing Blightwing to do things.
So just edit those bits out and add more about what Varian is doing if you wish such as preparing for another assault from Blightwing just in case the Sith is not yet finished.
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[Infintus]

The Afann campaign will be several threads involving both major and minor conflicts across the planet with new enemies, allies, and obstacles.

I would prefer that Soren wait for another thread since I am already going to have a difficult time fighting two Sith at once.

I can see that your posts are getting better. I do however have a couple things to point out about the last one. I'm sure Faster will concur with this.

"He releases me, his hands shaking, he put quite a bit of effort into getting a reaction from my suffering"
This implies that Blightwing had great difficulty attempting to choke Varian.
While that may be true depending on what Faster decides to write, it is not up to you to make that choice for Faster. You can resist attacks and I like the bit about seeing the rage within Blightwing's eyes (which is fine to say since you can describe appearances to some degree.) but by saying that Blightwing's hands were shaking you are controlling another player's character and not allowing them to write the character as they want.

"He clenches his fist, his other hand hidden in his rear, he is on guard, his body stood up straight and proud, but slightly shifted to his flank, preparing a counter, in case I want to end his petty existence, maybe later."
This sentence is an even more prominent example of forcing Blightwing to do things.
So just edit those bits out and add more about what Varian is doing if you wish such as preparing for another assault from Blightwing just in case the Sith is not yet finished.
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Yeah, no problem I'll change it, I didn't like it anyways

 

[Dark child]

@DraconicPsycho
Need a bit more time?

Ulysses can attest to the fact that I let way too many of my threads die. I'm determined to not let that happen with this one. XD

 

[Ulysses]

For any interested, I've just started a (semi) social thread in the commanders' mess on Afann. Just how strictly social it is is up for grabs :)

http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/sand-bar.75494/

 

[Dark child]

@DraconicPsycho I'm afraid we may have to count Phyxsis out of the battle if you can't give me a brief explanation. I'm going to give @Dawnrider the go ahead to post if you cannot respond in twelve hours from now. Which is a bit of a shame since Volken was chasing Phyxsis. I won't have Phyxsis injured or killed but I will most likely write him as leaving the battle so that Dawn has something to go off of.

 

[Shax]

Alrighty, I had completly forgotten about this thread, just had a lot on my mind. I'll get to work on a post as suggested by @Dark child