Jedi Order Noone Shabar

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Name Noone ( no͞on )
Species Anzat
Rank Jedi Knight
Age 298
Height 5'8"
Weight 160 lbs.
Orientation Gay

[Training]
Lightsaber Form Self Taught Form, Vogar, Suguraat, Form IV, Form V ( Djem So )
■ Weapons Training Vibroblade (Proficient), Blaster Pistol (Proficient)


[Equipment]
Armor Forward Knight Set
Lightsaber Crossguard Lightsaber
Vibroblade Ajak

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■ Appearances are listed in chronological order.

0. The Hills Have Scales: Part One
I. Breaking Ground
[Around this time, Noone goes into hiding for nearly 15 years...]
II. ---

I. Main Theme A Thousand Lives
II.
Main Theme (Peace) In the Force
III. Main Theme (Resistance) If I Was Them
IV.
Force Theme (Truth) The Light
V. Force Theme (Fear) Call of the Force
VI.
Battle Theme Sure, Sabers Then
VII.
Battle Theme (Dire) Improvise!
VIII.
Battle Theme (Feral) Primal Instinct
VIII. Battle Theme (Sparring) Footwork or Folly
IX.
Battle Theme (Sith Encounter) I Cannot Let You Leave

 
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Going to make some rearrangements Noone's profile that I'll detail here before I get started to assure that changes made are for the purpose of storytelling and not to meta-game or power play, I'll call this post a changelog or w/e idunno DECISIONS have been made

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■ Making room for insight into Noone's past with his lineage, his parents | Better story structure
Noone's race is pretty cool and I need to flesh that out and explain that better, a lot of ambiguous information floating around that needs to better come together. More information on the genocide of his clan (Clan Vorkuda) by angry rivals and more information on his estranged relationship with his birth parents. Information about the specific relationship in his profile doesn't provide much of a hook into writing, but detailing his time as an assassin on Nar Shaddaa probably would.

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■ A Thousand Lives | He's a linguist and there was supposed to like fully be a reason!
Reserved space will soon be used to write a proper, lengthy story that wraps up the past two centuries of Noone's life that explains his first meeting with the new Jedi Order and how he was inducted. Throughout his employment by the Hutt cartels as well as his time on the run from the Empire he traveled across many worlds, meeting many cultures and learned to blend into their societies to feed on those brains. He learned a lot of languages because of this, and also because he grew attached to words and their meanings. Learning languages has always been a hobby of his, but also something that was actually practical to his survival!

■ Rewriting "Combat" paragraph | Vibroblade training, Noone's affinity for the Vibroblade
While Noone's primary weapon is his saber, he also trained and admired the use of Vibroblades over the course of nearly 200 years of being an assassin, and still carries one around with him as a Jedi. His profile makes him sound like more of a scholar, but the intention, most accurately written in his "Class" sentence, was that he is more of a protector of places bound in the force. While he does meditate and learn to better understand the past, he isn't really seeking any sort of knowledge. His mission is by way of passion and not research. Definitely more monk, less scholar, and that should be clearer.
 
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■ Noone Shabar returns to join the fight!
Been a while since I've been on the site, but I'm happy to say that soon I'll be returning to roleplay! With that, I intend to make some improvements to Noone's profile, specifically the writing, and flesh out some of the important story beats that I detailed in my last post here. For that purpose, figured I'd give the profile a little bump so I don't have to delve 60 pages back to find him, haha. Excited to come back and see what the galaxy has in store for Noone!
 
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