Peten Banwick, Jedi Knight

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NAME: Peten Banwick
FACTION: Jedi Order
RANK: Padawan
SPECIES: Human
AGE: 18
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 5'10"
WEIGHT: 248
EYES: Blue
HAIR: Brown
SKIN: White
CREDITS: 1,000
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: He has a scar next to his right eye, and another one across his mouth
FORCE SENSITIVE: yes
STRENGTH: He is strong, but not INCREDIBLE HULK strong
DEXTERITY: He is agile
CONSTITUTION: He has no known diseases
INTELLIGENCE: he isn't as smart as say Yoda, but he is very intellegent
WISDOM: He is wise in the ways of the force, but is often clouded by thoughts of his own reward
CHARISMA: He is a people person, loves to talk, and very likeable
FORCE POWERS:Force push, Affect mind (Jedi Mind Trick), and saber throw

SKILLS:
He is a skilled lightsaber duelist, good at hacking into computer programs, and droids, and an amazing star fighter pilot
LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:
He is learning the Souresu style of lightsaber dueling
STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
He has trouble controlling his anger, and he cam be overwhelmed by more than one opponent sometimes
GEAR: He mainly uses a lightsaber for combat. He is in possesion of two lightsabers, one with a blue blade, and one with a green blade, he only uses two lightsabers at once when he truley needs to. He also has a grappling hook to get out of cliffs and leaps of faith

SHIP: He has a star fighter that he personally named The Galaxy Flame It's weapons are two primary blaster cannons and one missle launcher, it has a cloaking device, but it is faulty and only rarely works, and it has a hologram communication system

PETS:
none

PERSONALITY:He is a people person and is very likeable. His mind is cluded a bit by thoughts of his own reward, and is a bit of a loose cannon and is too quick to rush into things. He has trouble controlling his anger, infact it is one of his main weaknesses. Sometimes, he doubts the ways of the jedi, but not always. He also just wants to get the job done in any way possible

BIOGRAPHY:He was born on Tatooine, and lived with his parents Raynor and Maria Banwick. Their family was tight on money after Peten's birth so Raynor asked a lone shark from the Hutt crime orginazsation to help him out. He was able to pay the bills, but unfortuneatley, not able to pay back the hutt lone shark. When the Hutt criminals came to collect the payment, they werer unsatisfied and were ordered to murder the family. They never found oyut about their son, so the baby Peten survived. A group of Jedi masters were near by, and they found Peten and took them under his wing when they were investigating what was left of their home. Ever since that day, Peten has learned the light side of the force, and secretly swears vengence against the hutts for murderring his family, but he tries to forget his thoughts of vengance. As a youngling, he struggled in the ways of the force, and was not that good at sensing force energy, nor lightsaber combat. Now that he has achieved the rank of Padawan, he has improved in his skill greatly and is a skilled lightsaber duelist, but is still struggling a bit with the force, but not as much as he used to. He hasn't found a master to teach him more yet, but he is still looking.

KILLS:
none

DUELING RING MATCHES:
none

GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES:none

ROLE-PLAYS:
none
 
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Well, there really isn't an approval process per se. But you should check out the Jedi faction and sign-up the character to see if they will be accepted to the group. Also you require 50 words in a Bio and personality at the least, before this character is locked. You may only start as a Jedi Knight if you have previously had a character of that level within the faction along with the Faction Leader's permission.
 

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I think his biography needs more fleshing out, If I'm honest. Who were his parents? Why were they murdered? How did he escape and then get to the Jedi temple? What was he like as youngling?
 

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On the main Forum go to the Factions section and click on Jedi Order. The sign-up thread will be in the OOC Discussion link
 
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