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Korda Six, they named this planet, but there were so many names for the mountain and the forest, the rock and the stick, as much as all of them were nameless. Perhaps that was reflected in the ‘Six’ of its designation. Meaningless. Just a number. ‘Korda’, however, was much and more.

It was here where the Kordans were born, where they were raised, where they lived and survived, and a Kordan knew the difference before a Mandalorian ever told him. The Kordans knew war and strife, conflict, life and death, weapons and fists.

Today, it was the same, nothing had changed, except in the Valley of Thenn, in a narrow passage, where life and death was decided between two tribes who knew only conquest.

Between walls of rock, monuments of stone, the group of Kordans walked, never rode. On the grass and on the dirt, on the land they both shared and claimed, they came to their meeting point, faced with a choice, and no choice.

“I see him,” spoke a brother of Dornon’s tribe, a warrior, a soldier, and a friend. “The prince arrives.” He snorted.

Disrespect? Yes. But deserved where respect was conversely earned. The speaker wore his armor, black and grey, charcoal and ashen, yet it glinted in the sunlight, silver-banded. Burok was proven, had the scars to prove it, and was a wise advisor to Chief Dornon as much as a fighter.

“He does indeed,” spoke another warrior, no less proven, only he was no son of the Chief. Rather, he was the tribe’s War Chief, and his armor, helmet held at hip, was black and brilliant. “And he brings his rabble to battle.”

Ahead of them, coming from the other end of the valley, were the Kordans of Latek’s tribe, with Latek’s son in the lead. Tall, fiercely furred, muscular, as expected of their kind, but he had bulging eyes.

They match his ambition. Thought the War Chief, though he did not grin. Vatar just stood there, watching, as both parties of their respective tribes got into position.

First to arrive, a Dornon skewered the prize, lit the cookfire, as it brandished the shadowcat over the roasting spit; but the Dornons kept their distance as they waited for their opponents.

“Smells like shit,” spoke a prince.
“Did you hunt this or poison it?”
That made his tribesman laugh.
The Dornons just stared back.

“I killed it.” Yet it wasn’t some brag.
He raised his fists. “With my hands.”
His voice had gotten their attention.
“As your hands burned our caravan.”
 

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“Rodent’s shit,” that same Latek from before spat back. It wasn’t the son of their chief, no, he kept silent, did not utter a peep. He just peeked those giant eyes of his in between the Dornons on the other side, across the firelight of the cookfire beneath the naked sky.

Let the sunlight be my witness, my guide, to keep me from committing my rage this moment to the very villages of these vermin.


Ironic, then, that the Latek minion had uttered the words ‘rodent’s shit’ when that was exactly what he is. The lot of them. Piss.

“We did no such thing.” Said minion was a captain in this pathetic outfit. He must be. To keep speaking. “We saw the smoke that flame makes, and we came after your quarry was already destroyed, and your party left. What best can Latek do but go home?”

Only cowards go home. Like you should do any moment from my fist swinging and your face breaking.

“You Dornons, on the other hand, razed our tower to the ground. This we know. Aye, by the skies above, by sun’s kiss and moon’s embrace, mark me, from blood and bone, vein and marrow, we know, for stone shows th—”


“Oh shut up you blundering fucking fool.” It was all that Tarios had to do to lift his hand and silence his captain of minions. If only he had slapped him.

“I hold the ground now.” He stepped forth. Toward the fire. Forward. Closer. The very firelight made his eyes seem twice their size.

“And I say to the inferno with the Dornons.” His fist pounded on his chest. Yes! Again! “To the abyss with your piss-shit tribe!” His other fist. There it is. “Starting with the first filthy one of you to face me—if so foolish enough to dare.”

Thank you.


A Dornon put his foot forward beside Vatar, raised his fist, opened his mouth. “I, Barok, acce—”

“I am Vatar.” Hand held high on one side to silence his companion. His other hand held up as a fist. “War Chief Vatar of Dornon tribe." He stepped forward. “I accept your challenge.”

This was no mere challenge. No simple contest. Theirs was of life and death. In the end, their fighting prowess would be laid bare. For of life and death neither one could share.
 
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