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Prudence

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1. What is going to happen in your plot?
Sly's Bounty Hunter & Prudii will carry out a series of heists, followed by an assault on a secured location using the resources that they stole in the heists.​
2. What other players will be a part of this?
Sly, Malon—NPC oppo for the heists & the gates.​

3. Where are all the places (if more than one) that your plot will be taking place?
It will be taking place entirely in the Outer Rim, on Hutt Worlds.​

4. Please provide a basic in-character timeline of what you expect to happen.
Our characters will meet,

they will then carry out the heists in seperate threads within the next several weeks.

They will then assault the position mentioned above.​
5. What do you or your character hope to achieve with this plot? What is the "end-game"?
Our characters will execute 3 heists that will give them the parts, when combined, will build 2 wrist mounted flamethrowers (one for each character). The characters will then have 1/4th of a map to a hypergate somewhere in the Outer Rim.​

6. Do you need any involvement of canon NPCs or faction leaders to be DMed by a staff member? If so, please detail who/what and for what purpose.
Nope

Note it'll be 5 threads
 
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"Please approve the plot" ?

Just for that, I would reject this submission. However, being the all-so-merciful moderator that I am, I will give you one chance...

Can you please specify how many threads you plan to throw out? Numbers, please.

Also, I'm not sure about the hypergate discovery. Each of you receiving a piece of advanced technology is already enough for me, but, I suppose that purely depends on how many threads you just exactly plan to partake in.

That's all for now.
 

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I'm going to have to back @Deviant up here. I would back away from the hypergate just because those are such advanced and complicated technologies. The flamethrowers for each participant is an outcome/reward enough; and, honestly, to discover a hypergate, I'd want to see a larger plot with more people involved and more hurdles in the way.
 

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Yo that works! I didn't realize quite HOW advanced they were considered, my b. I was looking at 5 threads, what if I instead changed it to the final NPC battle deal would give me access to a map (or part of one) of where a hypergate once was?

I would do a subsequent plot with enough threads (though I'm new to plots so would one of you mind giving me a ballpark of how many threads I should be shooting for) to actually get my hands on the broken hypergate? If that sounds good? No tryna skrrt the system, just need to get an understanding of how many threads I should be throwing out for these things.

As always, <3 u both.
 

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So, after talking to @Deviant, here's what we've decided in regards to the hypergate:

There are four (4) star maps that lead to the Star Forge, a technological marvel, in KOTOR. They are significantly hard to get to and would require a big plot by our standards to get them. So I say, if you want to find a hypergate that badly, I'm fine with you getting a fragment of the map with the understanding that there are three (3) more pieces and, if you want them, you'll need three (3) more plots and are going to have to significantly up the stakes.​
 

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So, after talking to @Deviant, here's what we've decided in regards to the hypergate:

There are four (4) star maps that lead to the Star Forge, a technological marvel, in KOTOR. They are significantly hard to get to and would require a big plot by our standards to get them. So I say, if you want to find a hypergate that badly, I'm fine with you getting a fragment of the map with the understanding that there are three (3) more pieces and, if you want them, you'll need three (3) more plots and are going to have to significantly up the stakes.​
Aight, sounds good to me. Amended the plot to reflect that.
 

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I still need to know how many threads you plan to throw out in total. Numbers, again, please.

Thanks!
 

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5 threads was what I had said in my first reply, es that good or more?
 

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Oh, whoops. Yeah, I need that in the submission, but no problemo. Same difference.

Approved.
 
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