Rank-Change Thread

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Character Name and Subaccount Link: @Arden Kryze
Character Age: 42 g.s.y
Reputation Level: Unknown
Current Rank: Unranked
Rank Seeking: Mercenary
Notable Deeds: None yet, and all his threads are still ongoing. This is just his current occupation
 

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I was not sure if I should apply, but here I am! I am sorry if this is late though:

Character Name and Subaccount Link: @Song Wren
Character Age: 22
Reputation Level: Unknown
Current Rank: Unranked
Rank Seeking: Guild Initiate
Notable Deeds: Song brought a wanted man to justice, earning initiation into the Guild!
  • Butting Heads - Song meets Kanan while tracking down her bounty, Duermo. He tails her, but they end up fighting before coming to a compromise. Together, they hunt down a final clue in the shape of a girl, Tera. They persuade her in giving them Duermo's location, then ride out to find him.
  • The Ranger and the Mandalorian - Song and Kanan head to the canyons where Duermo's hiding. They take out several thugs, but discover the spice runner is nowhere to be found. That is, until he arrives on a speeder bike, and seriously injures Song. Kanan manages to beat Duermo. Song is taken back to her ship, with new respect for the Ranger, and they part ways, hoping to cross paths another day.
  • Submitted Plot here, and Reviewed Plot here!
 

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Character Name and Subaccount Link: Ori Ardell [LINK]
Character Age: 18
Reputation Level: Unknown
Current Rank: Unranked
Rank Seeking: Jedi Padawan
Notable Deeds:

After discovering his sensitivity to the Force, Ori left his homeworld of Baraan-Fa and travelled to Nar Shaddaa where he encountered Jedi Knight Maxims Tionson. Maxims agreed to take Ori to the Jedi Temple and after dispatching with gangsters attempting to extort Max, the pair travelled to Ajan Kloss. Once arriving on the planet, they took a detour before going to the Temple, where Max had Ori retrieve an unhatched egg from a group of Kinrath. After Ori collected the egg, Max took him to the Temple and offered to take Ori on as his Padawan, after he had completed his initial training phase.


Note: There is a third thread planned, which will take place after the initial training, with Ori as Max's Padawan, which is why I'm applying for the rank now.
 

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Current Rank: Not Ranked (Independent)
Rank Seeking: Freelancer
Notable Deeds: Seeking starting rank for a Bounty Hunter.
 

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Character Name and Subaccount Link: @Nashyr Ris
Character Age: 34-5
Reputation Level: 1
Current Rank: Jedi Padawan
Rank Seeking: Jedi Knight
Notable Deeds: Nashyr Ris has proved her willingness to aid the Order, for instance, as a Jedi speaker when meeting with fellow Jedi at the Sector Ranger home base to hopefully establish some rapport with the other faction, and working together with other Padawans to further strengthen their training in the light side. She has also assisted her Master in clearing roads following a massive earthquake in a metropolis, and earned her kyber crystal facing an apparition of the Dark Side with fellow Padawan Ezekiel to save her Master. And, in her beginning stages acting as Maxims' Padawan, had assisted then Jedi Knight Oren and Jedi Knight Ash to investigate into a spice-induced disease that began effecting people in a zombie-like way, and to hopefully find a cure. (Note: these threads are pending completion, but shall be completed soon.)

 

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Current Rank: Unranked
Rank Seeking: Lawyer
Notable Deeds: None yet, but the rank would be swish.
 

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Character Name and Subaccount Link: @Arden Kryze
Character Age: 42 g.s.y
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Rank Seeking: Mercenary
Notable Deeds: None yet, and all his threads are still ongoing. This is just his current occupation

Done

I was not sure if I should apply, but here I am! I am sorry if this is late though:

Character Name and Subaccount Link: @Song Wren
Character Age: 22
Reputation Level: Unknown
Current Rank: Unranked
Rank Seeking: Guild Initiate
Notable Deeds: Song brought a wanted man to justice, earning initiation into the Guild!
  • Butting Heads - Song meets Kanan while tracking down her bounty, Duermo. He tails her, but they end up fighting before coming to a compromise. Together, they hunt down a final clue in the shape of a girl, Tera. They persuade her in giving them Duermo's location, then ride out to find him.
  • The Ranger and the Mandalorian - Song and Kanan head to the canyons where Duermo's hiding. They take out several thugs, but discover the spice runner is nowhere to be found. That is, until he arrives on a speeder bike, and seriously injures Song. Kanan manages to beat Duermo. Song is taken back to her ship, with new respect for the Ranger, and they part ways, hoping to cross paths another day.
  • Submitted Plot here, and Reviewed Plot here!


BHG is a membership vs faction so there's no real rank associated with it.

Character Name and Subaccount Link: Ori Ardell [LINK]
Character Age: 18
Reputation Level: Unknown
Current Rank: Unranked
Rank Seeking: Jedi Padawan
Notable Deeds:

After discovering his sensitivity to the Force, Ori left his homeworld of Baraan-Fa and travelled to Nar Shaddaa where he encountered Jedi Knight Maxims Tionson. Maxims agreed to take Ori to the Jedi Temple and after dispatching with gangsters attempting to extort Max, the pair travelled to Ajan Kloss. Once arriving on the planet, they took a detour before going to the Temple, where Max had Ori retrieve an unhatched egg from a group of Kinrath. After Ori collected the egg, Max took him to the Temple and offered to take Ori on as his Padawan, after he had completed his initial training phase.


Note: There is a third thread planned, which will take place after the initial training, with Ori as Max's Padawan, which is why I'm applying for the rank now.

Done
Character Name and Subaccount Link: @Annileen Vhett
Character Age: 23
Reputation Level: Unknown
Current Rank: Not Ranked (Independent)
Rank Seeking: Freelancer
Notable Deeds: Seeking starting rank for a Bounty Hunter.

Done

Character Name and Subaccount Link: @Nashyr Ris
Character Age: 34-5
Reputation Level: 1
Current Rank: Jedi Padawan
Rank Seeking: Jedi Knight
Notable Deeds: Nashyr Ris has proved her willingness to aid the Order, for instance, as a Jedi speaker when meeting with fellow Jedi at the Sector Ranger home base to hopefully establish some rapport with the other faction, and working together with other Padawans to further strengthen their training in the light side. She has also assisted her Master in clearing roads following a massive earthquake in a metropolis, and earned her kyber crystal facing an apparition of the Dark Side with fellow Padawan Ezekiel to save her Master. And, in her beginning stages acting as Maxims' Padawan, had assisted then Jedi Knight Oren and Jedi Knight Ash to investigate into a spice-induced disease that began effecting people in a zombie-like way, and to hopefully find a cure. (Note: these threads are pending completion, but shall be completed soon.)


Done


Character Name and Subaccount Link: @Chester Kincade
Character Age: 33
Reputation Level: 1
Current Rank: Unranked
Rank Seeking: Lawyer
Notable Deeds: None yet, but the rank would be swish.

Done
 

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BHG is a membership vs faction so there's no real rank associated with it.
My mistake! D: I was a little confused! I am sorry to ask this here, because I’m not sure, but would the other titles on the main Guild page still be considered ranks I can work to, like Tracker or Master Hunter, or are they only titles or levels of prestige in membership?

If they are, not a problem! Would it be OK then if @Song Wren be just a “Bounty Hunter” for her rank?
 

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Character Age: 22
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Current Rank: No Rank
Rank Seeking: Ranger
Notable Deeds: Nothing significant, Thalia was recruited to the Sector Rangers by Nick Shaw.
 
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My mistake! D: I was a little confused! I am sorry to ask this here, because I’m not sure, but would the other titles on the main Guild page still be considered ranks I can work to, like Tracker or Master Hunter, or are they only titles or levels of prestige in membership?

If they are, not a problem! Would it be OK then if @Song Wren be just a “Bounty Hunter” for her rank?

I've added BH as a title. And yeah, you can work towards the BHG ranks since you plan to be indie.

Character Name and Subaccount Link: @Thalia Windraider
Character Age: 22
Reputation Level: Unknown
Current Rank: No Rank
Rank Seeking: Ranger
Notable Deeds: Nothing significant, Thalia was recruited to the Sector Rangers by Nick Shaw.

Done.
 

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Character Age: 25
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Rank Seeking: Lieutenant
Notable Deeds: Nick has taken down several criminals and has been actively recruiting to bolster the Sector Rangers ranks (Thread). He has assisted Trys with several investigations, including looking into crimes committed by the "Red Saber Terrorist Group" (Thread). Most recently he has gone into an infected hospital and rescued a doctor who may have valuable information on a cure for the plague that has been spreading through the Galaxy.
 

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Character Name and Subaccount Link: @Nara Allam
Character Age: 19-20
Reputation Level: Unknown
Current Rank: Jedi Padawan
Rank Seeking: Jedi Knight

Notable Deeds: Nara has trained for years with Jedi Master Oren Zapan. During her time with the Jedi, she has learned to control the Force within herself and apply it in order to help others. She has learned to control her mouth (somewhat) and anger, channelling her emotions into determination to help others. During Oren's time in prison, she trained under Hannibal Grayza, as well as forging her lightsaber with help from Brienna Lanameer. Nara has contributed to several missions with the Order, including finding food for refugees, helping to secure an old Jedi complex and healing the sick.
When Oren returned from prison, he gave his blessing for Nara to try and progress to Knighthood.
 

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Current Rank: Ranger

Rank Seeking: Lieutenant

Notable Deeds: Kal has helped in the investigation into The Arcanist, such as investigating the scene of one of his rampages and learning about the Jedi. He also helped investigate an arson and murder in Coruscant made by similar perpetrators to The Arcanist, though instead it seemed that it was done by others. After the attack on the Corellian Ranger office, Kal worked with Jedi Master Oren to gather evidence and leads to find those who had done the deed, though soon after Ender had been captured and brought to a prison on Coruscant. There, Kal helped evacuate whoever he could from the prison with the Sith Eternal attacked, being injured by Force Lightning as he did what he could to help the Jedi escape.

 

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Notable Deeds: N/A

Hit the wrong drop down box on the sub-account, just need to change it and her faction to Jedi Order sorry, thanks!
 

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Character Name and Subaccount Link: @Hannibal Grayza
Character Age: 25
Reputation Level: Notable Newcomer
Current Rank: Jedi Knight
Rank Seeking: Jedi Master
Notable Deeds:
Throwing himself into active duty as a Jedi Knight, Hannibal has done his best to help the the galactic populous, track down Sith, and protect the innocent from harm. His work on Eriadu was done swiftly and with only one man needing to be stunned, the various artifacts retrieved successfully from the vault in the museum. He led a guerilla strike against the malicious Jade Company mercenary group raiding Cantonica, guiding two weaponless Padawans and a Syndicate medic through the warzone.

Shortly after Oren's arrest, Hannibal took to comforting his young and angry Padawan, Nara Allam, in his absence. They still train together to this day. He took a shine to teaching and also taught Nakira Sinvala the basics of Force Cloak during a visit to Ajan Kloss.

Repeatedly he ran into the Arcanist through some combination of the will of the Force and dumb stupid luck, sometimes met by failure and others by success. They even had a long discussion about philosophy and morality in the neon-lit confines of a booming nightclub, during which Hannibal decided the Arcanist was perhaps a good person behind all the anger and criminal murder.

In disguise, he showed up to investigate the Pit destroyed by one of the Arcanist's more explosive acts, briefly aiding a similarly disguised Roland and exchanging contact information.

Despite telling the Arcanist he was no longer interested in tracking him down, the attack on the Corellian Ranger station prompted an abrupt change in how Hannibal was handling the situation. He and Nashyr Ris began to try and see if they could track down his ship via surveillance on Nar Shaddaa, but were unsuccessful.

Spurred on by the Sith terrorist acts, he joined a joint Ranger-Jedi venture in tracking down alleged darksiders, joining Sector Ranger Lorcan on a grenade-filled misadventure through the city sewers.

On his home planet of Naboo, Hannibal and Noone Shabar accepted a job to keep safe a valuable deed from potential thieving hands, unknowingly working to thwart a Sith attempt to garner influence from favorable noble houses. Naturally, the Arcanist shows up again.

This all culminated in the Sith attack on the Coruscant prison, where he engaged the escaped prisoner, Ender Halcyn. Hannibal failed to prevent his escape, but instead found himself risking his life against the Sith Champion Sol Puara alongside none other than the Arcanist himself. By coordinating together in a brilliant/ridiculous impromptu leap-frog attack, they were able to destroy his mask. Hannibal stood before Sol Puara's final attack to prevent the Arcanist's death, taking hold of the Arcanist's lightsaber in his final moments of wakefulness and receiving a rush of psychometric impressions.

In the chaos afterwards, he met up with/ambushed the Arcanist yet again, but this time to return his lightsaber and make friends. They briefly crossed sabers in a friendly duel, but a bit of awkwardness involving Hannibal's psychometry pushed them instead to drinking and talking. During the talk, Hannibal was forced to confront his habit of pushing people away and agreed to answer any question the newly-introduced Talak asked of him. Give and take is fair play, after all.

After the death of Nashyr Ris, Hannibal took over the training of her Padawan, Riz'kacha, as well as that of Jedi Hopeful Byron Ryker.
Teaching them both in his own unusual fashion, along with Nara, he hopes to guide them on their own path to becoming Jedi.

Most recently, Hannibal was drawn to confront of his fears concerning killing and death. Flying to a remote cliff on Ajan Kloss with the lightsaber of Sol Puara, he dove deep into a psychometric reading to try and find the reasons Sol became a Sith and had needed to die. In the end, he determined that none of that mattered, and came out of this experience with a fortified resolve and a newly purified lightsaber.

Throughout his time as a Jedi Knight, Hannibal Grayza has always questioned what being a Jedi really means. Across his adventures and battles he's come to realize what a Jedi is to him, and has come out his trials and tribulations more determined and dedicated to the Light Side of the Force than ever before, more than ready to engage those who would threaten the peace and bring death down upon the living.

Still won't stop him from mouthing off, though.

 
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Character Age: 25
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Notable Deeds: Nick has taken down several criminals and has been actively recruiting to bolster the Sector Rangers ranks (Thread). He has assisted Trys with several investigations, including looking into crimes committed by the "Red Saber Terrorist Group" (Thread). Most recently he has gone into an infected hospital and rescued a doctor who may have valuable information on a cure for the plague that has been spreading through the Galaxy.
Character Name and Subaccount Link: @Nara Allam
Character Age: 19-20
Reputation Level: Unknown
Current Rank: Jedi Padawan
Rank Seeking: Jedi Knight

Notable Deeds: Nara has trained for years with Jedi Master Oren Zapan. During her time with the Jedi, she has learned to control the Force within herself and apply it in order to help others. She has learned to control her mouth (somewhat) and anger, channelling her emotions into determination to help others. During Oren's time in prison, she trained under Hannibal Grayza, as well as forging her lightsaber with help from Brienna Lanameer. Nara has contributed to several missions with the Order, including finding food for refugees, helping to secure an old Jedi complex and healing the sick.
When Oren returned from prison, he gave his blessing for Nara to try and progress to Knighthood.
Character Name and Subaccount Link: @Kal Zyn Dross

Character Age: 24

Reputation Level: Unknown

Current Rank: Ranger

Rank Seeking: Lieutenant

Notable Deeds: Kal has helped in the investigation into The Arcanist, such as investigating the scene of one of his rampages and learning about the Jedi. He also helped investigate an arson and murder in Coruscant made by similar perpetrators to The Arcanist, though instead it seemed that it was done by others. After the attack on the Corellian Ranger office, Kal worked with Jedi Master Oren to gather evidence and leads to find those who had done the deed, though soon after Ender had been captured and brought to a prison on Coruscant. There, Kal helped evacuate whoever he could from the prison with the Sith Eternal attacked, being injured by Force Lightning as he did what he could to help the Jedi escape.

Character Name and Subaccount Link: @Ilukai Koa
Character Age: 25
Reputation Level: Unknown
Current Rank: Unranked
Rank Seeking: Jedi Knight
Notable Deeds: N/A

Hit the wrong drop down box on the sub-account, just need to change it and her faction to Jedi Order sorry, thanks!
Character Name and Subaccount Link: @Hannibal Grayza
Character Age: 25
Reputation Level: Notable Newcomer
Current Rank: Jedi Knight
Rank Seeking: Jedi Master
Notable Deeds:
Throwing himself into active duty as a Jedi Knight, Hannibal has done his best to help the the galactic populous, track down Sith, and protect the innocent from harm. His work on Eriadu was done swiftly and with only one man needing to be stunned, the various artifacts retrieved successfully from the vault in the museum. He led a guerilla strike against the malicious Jade Company mercenary group raiding Cantonica, guiding two weaponless Padawans and a Syndicate medic through the warzone.

Shortly after Oren's arrest, Hannibal took to comforting his young and angry Padawan, Nara Allam, in his absence. They still train together to this day. He took a shine to teaching and also taught Nakira Sinvala the basics of Force Cloak during a visit to Ajan Kloss.

Repeatedly he ran into the Arcanist through some combination of the will of the Force and dumb stupid luck, sometimes met by failure and others by success. They even had a long discussion about philosophy and morality in the neon-lit confines of a booming nightclub, during which Hannibal decided the Arcanist was perhaps a good person behind all the anger and criminal murder.

In disguise, he showed up to investigate the Pit destroyed by one of the Arcanist's more explosive acts, briefly aiding a similarly disguised Roland and exchanging contact information.

Despite telling the Arcanist he was no longer interested in tracking him down, the attack on the Corellian Ranger station prompted an abrupt change in how Hannibal was handling the situation. He and Nashyr Ris began to try and see if they could track down his ship via surveillance on Nar Shaddaa, but were unsuccessful.

Spurred on by the Sith terrorist acts, he joined a joint Ranger-Jedi venture in tracking down alleged darksiders, joining Sector Ranger Lorcan on a grenade-filled misadventure through the city sewers.

On his home planet of Naboo, Hannibal and Noone Shabar accepted a job to keep safe a valuable deed from potential thieving hands, unknowingly working to thwart a Sith attempt to garner influence from favorable noble houses. Naturally, the Arcanist shows up again.

This all culminated in the Sith attack on the Coruscant prison, where he engaged the escaped prisoner, Ender Halcyn. Hannibal failed to prevent his escape, but instead found himself risking his life against the Sith Champion Sol Puara alongside none other than the Arcanist himself. By coordinating together in a brilliant/ridiculous impromptu leap-frog attack, they were able to destroy his mask. Hannibal stood before Sol Puara's final attack to prevent the Arcanist's death, taking hold of the Arcanist's lightsaber in his final moments of wakefulness and receiving a rush of psychometric impressions.

In the chaos afterwards, he met up with/ambushed the Arcanist yet again, but this time to return his lightsaber and make friends. They briefly crossed sabers in a friendly duel, but a bit of awkwardness involving Hannibal's psychometry pushed them instead to drinking and talking. During the talk, Hannibal was forced to confront his habit of pushing people away and agreed to answer any question the newly-introduced Talak asked of him. Give and take is fair play, after all.

After the death of Nashyr Ris, Hannibal took over the training of her Padawan, Riz'kacha, as well as that of Jedi Hopeful Byron Ryker.
Teaching them both in his own unusual fashion, along with Nara, he hopes to guide them on their own path to becoming Jedi.

Most recently, Hannibal was drawn to confront of his fears concerning killing and death. Flying to a remote cliff on Ajan Kloss with the lightsaber of Sol Puara, he dove deep into a psychometric reading to try and find the reasons Sol became a Sith and had needed to die. In the end, he determined that none of that mattered, and came out of this experience with a fortified resolve and a newly purified lightsaber.

Throughout his time as a Jedi Knight, Hannibal Grayza has always questioned what being a Jedi really means. Across his adventures and battles he's come to realize what a Jedi is to him, and has come out his trials and tribulations more determined and dedicated to the Light Side of the Force than ever before, more than ready to engage those who would threaten the peace and bring death down upon the living.

Still won't stop him from mouthing off, though.




All done!
 

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Character Name and Subaccount Link: @Zentripoli
Character Profile Link: Zentripoli
Character Age: 30
Reputation Level: Unknown
Current Rank: Scoundrel
Rank Seeking: Ringleader

Notable Deeds:
Being a Columi criminal within the Five Syndicates, one would not assume much about the seemingly helpless Zentripoli of the Crymorah Syndicate. However, Zentripoli understands this perception and embraces it in many ways, never seeking fame, but instead the power and credits that doesn't need fame. To those not within the Five Syndicates, Zentripoli seems like a poor alien that requires the help of droids to even get up in the morning. But physical stature and abilities is not what makes Zentripoli an effective criminal—it is his mind. As a Columi, one of the most intelligence sentient species in the galaxy, Zentripoli uses brainpower to accomplish his desires—and the help of others, whether droid or sentient.

On a small scale, Zentripoli has made a foray into Nar Shaddaa and with the help of members of Droid Gotra, was able to meet with an underworld group that had a hold on illegal droid parts. With a bit of subtle (and quite direct), convincing, Zentripoli made it clear to the group that Crymorah Syndicate wanted in on the illegal droid part trade in Nar Shaddaa.

From a strategic point of view, Zentripoli called together members from all the Five Syndicates to facilitate a meeting to address the loss of influence and profits from Coruscant. Organizing the members into groups, the members of Five Syndicates descended on Coruscant in a concerted effort to take power back from the Drellis Syndicate and put their own stamp of influence there.

During this time, Zentripoli has decided that the best way to support Mothkari, his Crymorah family and his people back on the planet of Columus, he is going to begin building the most powerful droid company in the galaxy. While he is far from this goal, it is the track Zentripoli is taking. He has designed and produced many different classes of droids on a small scale, but now wishes to take his expertise to the next level. Not only for profit and influence, but for the Five Syndicates own droid army, in preparation for the tension and conflict that is slowly taking hold of the galaxy.

This effort began by selecting a site for the headquarters and factory on Hollastin. Zentripoli and his allies scout out real estate for the ZDT manufacturing plant. While they discover a suitable location, they learn quickly of the dangers of the environs. Soon after this, it was necessary to acquire the proper credentials for droid production, property deeds, and manufacturing of arms. As such, Zentripoli and Pidge Batana (Mothkari family member) had to navigate the dangerous politics of the Shell Hutts on Hollastin in order to procure the rights, deed, permits and grants needed to take over the droid factory. While given the approval and deed for the factory, the Shell Hutts failed to inform Zentripoli that it was already inhabited. With the help of Droid Gotra, Zentripoli and his ally are barely able to overcome an unwelcome surprise from the gang that inhabited the factory. However, these efforts paid off and Zentripoli now has in his possession Zeno Droid Technologies on Hollastin.

Recently, Zentripoli, along with Preef Callo, secured Five Syndicate influence within Column Commons on Coruscant. In addition, Zentripoli is currently working to help the Five Syndicates take a shipment of spice from the Pykes, solidifying more influence for the Crymorah Syndicate and the remaining three syndicates. In fact, Zentripoli has maneuvered the Crymorah Syndicate to become the most active and numerous of the Five Syndicates with the addition of Droid Gotra.

Zentripoli has not worked his way to the upper levels of the Five Syndicates alone. As a Ringleader, he has had plenty of help from those that work for him in his organization:

@Cestus
@It0
@BX 166
@Pidge Batana
@Orys

  • PRELUDE: Rise of the Drellis Syndicate - Noticing a dip in profits and dried up contacts on Coruscant, Zentripoli calls members of the Five Syndicates together to facilitate and plan how to get that influence back and take down the Drellis Syndicate. COMPLETED
  • Scaling the Risk - Zentripoli and his allies meet with some illegal droid part traders, only to find an ambush meant to kill the Crymorah Syndicate and Droid Gotra members. They discover a lead on producing Combat Bypass Circuits. COMPLETED
  • Where Is This Place Again? - Zentripoli and his allies scout out real estate for the ZDT manufacturing plant. While they discover a suitable location, they learn quickly of the dangers of the environs. COMPLETED
  • License and Registration, Please - Zentripoli and his allies must navigate the dangerous politics of the Shell Hutts on Hollastin in order to procure the rights, deed, permits and grants needed to take over the droid factory. COMPLETED
  • Clear Out the Factory...and its Yours - While given the approval and deed for the factory, the Shell Hutts failed to inform Zentripoli that it was already inhabited. COMPLETED
  • Look Ma! I'm On Holovids! - As part of the many operations the Five Syndicates made against the Drellis Syndicate, Zentripoli and his allies are responsible for turning a Drellis Syndicate informant to the side of the Five Syndicates in the Column Commons. It is made a bit more difficult due to the fame the informant possesses... COMPLETED
  • That Spice Ain't Yours - Before loading it on small freighters, most of the spice is stored in depots and put under guard. Now, if you want control of Kessel that means you want its natural resources. Unfortunately for Zentripoli and a couple of scoundrels, that means they're assaulting a guarded depot in order to claim it for the 4S. ONGOING
 
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Notable Deeds: None. Not feeling the Sector Rangers at all. I resigned IC HERE. This is the only thread he has participated in.

Approved.

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Character Name and Subaccount Link: @Zentripoli
Character Profile Link: Zentripoli
Character Age: 30
Reputation Level: Unknown
Current Rank: Scoundrel
Rank Seeking: Ringleader

Notable Deeds:
Being a Columi criminal within the Five Syndicates, one would not assume much about the seemingly helpless Zentripoli of the Crymorah Syndicate. However, Zentripoli understands this perception and embraces it in many ways, never seeking fame, but instead the power and credits that doesn't need fame. To those not within the Five Syndicates, Zentripoli seems like a poor alien that requires the help of droids to even get up in the morning. But physical stature and abilities is not what makes Zentripoli an effective criminal—it is his mind. As a Columi, one of the most intelligence sentient species in the galaxy, Zentripoli uses brainpower to accomplish his desires—and the help of others, whether droid or sentient.

On a small scale, Zentripoli has made a foray into Nar Shaddaa and with the help of members of Droid Gotra, was able to meet with an underworld group that had a hold on illegal droid parts. With a bit of subtle (and quite direct), convincing, Zentripoli made it clear to the group that Crymorah Syndicate wanted in on the illegal droid part trade in Nar Shaddaa.

From a strategic point of view, Zentripoli called together members from all the Five Syndicates to facilitate a meeting to address the loss of influence and profits from Coruscant. Organizing the members into groups, the members of Five Syndicates descended on Coruscant in a concerted effort to take power back from the Drellis Syndicate and put their own stamp of influence there.

During this time, Zentripoli has decided that the best way to support Mothkari, his Crymorah family and his people back on the planet of Columus, he is going to begin building the most powerful droid company in the galaxy. While he is far from this goal, it is the track Zentripoli is taking. He has designed and produced many different classes of droids on a small scale, but now wishes to take his expertise to the next level. Not only for profit and influence, but for the Five Syndicates own droid army, in preparation for the tension and conflict that is slowly taking hold of the galaxy.

This effort began by selecting a site for the headquarters and factory on Hollastin. Zentripoli and his allies scout out real estate for the ZDT manufacturing plant. While they discover a suitable location, they learn quickly of the dangers of the environs. Soon after this, it was necessary to acquire the proper credentials for droid production, property deeds, and manufacturing of arms. As such, Zentripoli and Pidge Batana (Mothkari family member) had to navigate the dangerous politics of the Shell Hutts on Hollastin in order to procure the rights, deed, permits and grants needed to take over the droid factory. While given the approval and deed for the factory, the Shell Hutts failed to inform Zentripoli that it was already inhabited. With the help of Droid Gotra, Zentripoli and his ally are barely able to overcome an unwelcome surprise from the gang that inhabited the factory.

Currently, Zentripoli is working to secure influence in Column Commons in Coruscant as well as help the Five Syndicates in taking the spice trade from the Pykes, solidifying more influence for the Crymorah Syndicate. In fact, Zentripoli has maneuvered the Crymorah Syndicate to become the most active and numerous of the Five Syndicates with the addition of Droid Gotra.

Zentripoli has not worked his way to the upper levels of the Five Syndicates alone. As a Ringleader, he has had plenty of help from those that work for him in his organization:

@Cestus
@It0
@BX 166
@Pidge Batana
@Orys

  • PRELUDE: Rise of the Drellis Syndicate - Noticing a dip in profits and dried up contacts on Coruscant, Zentripoli calls members of the Five Syndicates together to facilitate and plan how to get that influence back and take down the Drellis Syndicate. COMPLETED
  • Scaling the Risk - Zentripoli and his allies meet with some illegal droid part traders, only to find an ambush meant to kill the Crymorah Syndicate and Droid Gotra members. They discover a lead on producing Combat Bypass Circuits. COMPLETED
  • Where Is This Place Again? - Zentripoli and his allies scout out real estate for the ZDT manufacturing plant. While they discover a suitable location, they learn quickly of the dangers of the environs. COMPLETED
  • Adrift - Coming along with Pidge Batana and Vipe, family members of the Crymorah Syndicate, the trio have to survive when things go awry on the public transport they are on enroute to Ryloth. ONGOING
  • License and Registration, Please - Zentripoli and his allies must navigate the dangerous politics of the Shell Hutts on Hollastin in order to procure the rights, deed, permits and grants needed to take over the droid factory. COMPLETED
  • Clear Out the Factory...and its Yours - While given the approval and deed for the factory, the Shell Hutts failed to inform Zentripoli that it was already inhabited. COMPLETED
  • Look Ma! I'm On Holovids! - As part of the many operations the Five Syndicates made against the Drellis Syndicate, Zentripoli and his allies are responsible for turning a Drellis Syndicate informant to the side of the Five Syndicates in the Column Commons. It is made a bit more difficult due to the fame the informant possesses... ONGOING
  • That Spice Ain't Yours - Before loading it on small freighters, most of the spice is stored in depots and put under guard. Now, if you want control of Kessel that means you want its natural resources. Unfortunately for Zentripoli and a couple of scoundrels, that means they're assaulting a guarded depot in order to claim it for the 4S. PLANNING

Rejected. Two of the threads you submitted are ongoing, one is just a planning thread that doesn't have a link and three are part of a plot that hasn't been reviewed and approved yet. Since your plot hasn't been reviewed and approved, I cannot be sure that everything you wrote about it under "Notable Deeds" is actually true or not. That leaves a single thread left for me to review and it's not enough for a rank up. I'm glad that the S5 has you and other active members however, so please don't let this discourage you. Consider resubmitting when everythings finished and reviewed.
 
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